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Patrick 16-03-2013 11:45 PM

What do you guys think of my Media Coursework? [pics]
 
Spent all day doing planning and doing these - basically for my Media GCSE Coursework, the final part of the whole unit is to create a magazine.

We get marked on creativity and also how 'official' the magazine looks.

Each person got assigned a different genre. I took Celebrity Culture.

Basically we were allowed to use a real celebrity on the cover - but the rest of the magazine had to consist of friends etc (in other words, fake celebrities).

Can you guys have a little look here and tell me what you all think? And if possible - give me an idea for what the next, and final page should sort of be about? As I'm stuck for an idea now.

Cheers x

Munchkins 16-03-2013 11:46 PM

GCSE? WHAT?
i thought you were older

Patrick 16-03-2013 11:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Munchkins (Post 5892207)
GCSE? WHAT?
i thought you were older

Why does everyone say this to me.

I'll take it as a compliment though, ta x

Raph 16-03-2013 11:47 PM

I love the 'Amy: My Breakdown' page Paddy, it looks really professional!

Munchkins 16-03-2013 11:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Patrick (Post 5892208)
Why does everyone say this to me.

I'll take it as a compliment though, ta x

I literally thought you were 18

InOne 16-03-2013 11:58 PM

Maybe put a price and date on the front cover?

Scarlett. 17-03-2013 12:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by InOne (Post 5892225)
Maybe put a price and date on the front cover?

This, also, make the magazine name a bit bigger, it doesn't stand out enough, but other than that, good job! :)

InOne 17-03-2013 12:12 AM

Also a website and if you're feeling really giddy what the mag cos in other countries. eg Spain = €2.50. That's usually in really small print at the bottom

Smithy 17-03-2013 12:13 AM

not too keen on some of the fonts and maybe but an ! rather than / between babe/hunks etc

InOne 17-03-2013 12:19 AM

Also with the barcode, look at the way it is on these mags, notice the colour too.


It's more like this


Withano 17-03-2013 02:17 AM

Barely even constructive criticism

Spoiler:

Tbh, Amys legs look bad, no photoshop would be better than that

Patrick 17-03-2013 10:05 AM

Cheers guys! I've updated the cover abit and took on board what you all said.

Me. I Am Salman 17-03-2013 10:08 AM

It just looks really empty in the middle.. maybe move the 'Zac Efron' headline a bit down, change the picture because it looks too stretched out and move it to the left and have more things going on in the right. I love everything else

Gstar 17-03-2013 10:23 AM

I like how you used the BB10 eye :P

Patrick 17-03-2013 06:28 PM

Final page:

http://i45.tinypic.com/11m3hqe.jpg

Marcus. 17-03-2013 06:36 PM

all looks amazing

Patrick 17-03-2013 06:52 PM

Thank you :)

Raph 18-03-2013 01:56 PM

Great work Paddy :) Could you post what you've edited? Also what did you use just out of curiosity to make these?


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