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Old 16-03-2013, 11:45 PM #1
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Default What do you guys think of my Media Coursework? [pics]
Spent all day doing planning and doing these - basically for my Media GCSE Coursework, the final part of the whole unit is to create a magazine.

We get marked on creativity and also how 'official' the magazine looks.

Each person got assigned a different genre. I took Celebrity Culture.

Basically we were allowed to use a real celebrity on the cover - but the rest of the magazine had to consist of friends etc (in other words, fake celebrities).

Can you guys have a little look here and tell me what you all think? And if possible - give me an idea for what the next, and final page should sort of be about? As I'm stuck for an idea now.

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GCSE? WHAT?
i thought you were older
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GCSE? WHAT?
i thought you were older
Why does everyone say this to me.

I'll take it as a compliment though, ta x
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I love the 'Amy: My Breakdown' page Paddy, it looks really professional!
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Why does everyone say this to me.

I'll take it as a compliment though, ta x
I literally thought you were 18
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Maybe put a price and date on the front cover?
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Maybe put a price and date on the front cover?
This, also, make the magazine name a bit bigger, it doesn't stand out enough, but other than that, good job!
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Also a website and if you're feeling really giddy what the mag cos in other countries. eg Spain = €2.50. That's usually in really small print at the bottom
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not too keen on some of the fonts and maybe but an ! rather than / between babe/hunks etc
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Also with the barcode, look at the way it is on these mags, notice the colour too.
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It's more like this

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Barely even constructive criticism

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Tbh, Amys legs look bad, no photoshop would be better than that
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Cheers guys! I've updated the cover abit and took on board what you all said.
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It just looks really empty in the middle.. maybe move the 'Zac Efron' headline a bit down, change the picture because it looks too stretched out and move it to the left and have more things going on in the right. I love everything else
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Great work Paddy Could you post what you've edited? Also what did you use just out of curiosity to make these?
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