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Old 21-08-2014, 09:46 AM #51
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Originally Posted by waterhog View Post
like you are considering garys age - you have to consider the young ones age. they are all excited - in a new environment - maybe a little drunk and have no outside pressure ie getting up for work - they must be allowed to enjoy themselves.


i thought that was hallirious how it ended and yes i have sympathy for gary and to show it i will include that in my next poem.
I was brought up to respect my elders, Gary to me would be like my dad's age, i couldn't be disrespectful to someone of that age, it's about compassion, empathy and patience all of which has escaped some (not all!) of the younger generation, yes they want to have fun and that's great, but then have fun elsewhere!

And i look forward to reading your poem
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