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Originally Posted by Dezzy
Your character descriptions serve a point so they're fine. I'm talking more about how you described how Rachel cleaned up stuff, it was a little excessive at times.
A minor criticism however.
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Okie Dokie. Thanks again
I really appreciate your comments because I don't think I've won, and the prize is feedback from a publishing house in London.
TiBB can be just as good for these types of things though
