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Old 11-05-2012, 11:10 AM #26
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I'll also change the deadline to the 30th May to accommodate GG and Dezzy. If I receive all entries earlier then I'll post them accordingly.
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OP updated with new entrants, and amended rules.
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cheers Jarrod Which category are you going for? (all in the OP)
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Bump to remind entrants, hope you are all still taking part, two weeks till the deadline, 30th. Time goes fast.
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I have received no further entries for the competition as yet, roughly a week to go.
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I've got mine pretty much finished. And it's a short short story, also it should be fun.
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More than you thought then?
Will post mine tue/wed ok poems only though sorry
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Can you send entries by pm please then they can all be posted at the same time. Thanks.
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here is one of the entries for the Writing Competition, once all four expected entries have been posted in here, I'll open a poll for forum members to vote.

A poem by Josiah (aka ColdWinter63)

Flowers are
pretty, they make my
spring brighter.
They make
the day after
feel like lilies are
starting to bloom;
just in time
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An alphabet adventure. You have to navigate your way through the story from A to Z. After each part you will face options, and whichever you choose, go to that letter, unspoiler the section and continue the story.

You play Michael21 and his goal is to log onto TIBB, good luck

A
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B Go use your laptop in the bedroom.
C Go do something else in your bedroom
D Go shout at the builders across the street for the hell of it.


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You switch on your laptop, you go to

E Look at sexy ladies.
F Go to TIBB.
G Try and see if megaupload is back


C
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You make your bed. What would you like to do next?

B Go use your laptop in the bedroom.
D Go shout at the builders across the street for the hell of it.


D
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The angry builders attak you. You end up in the hospital. You has lose


E
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SafeSearch is on strict, u not know how to change it

Now what would you like to do?
F Go to tibb.
G Try and see if megaupload is back


F
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You go to log onto tibb but remember you are really hungry. What would you like to eat

H make toast
I go to neighbours house to beg food again
J ring for pizza
K don’t mind your belly rumbling with hunger and log onto tibb


G
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One you click on the website you realise to your terror it was a mistake. There is a loud bang on your front door. And once you answer, you are grabbed by the police and handcuffed. I n the trial that follows you get 50 years for piracy.


H
Spoiler:

Once you get to the toaster it looks more complicated to operate than you imagined, hunger has clouded ur thunkingg, you start to bash it with frustration. You shout at it, then deside to start a fire and use the flames to toast the bread. Once the dining table is alight, you guess this might not have been such a good idea.

Go to L


I
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Your neybor attak you. You has dead


J
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Pizzaman come and gives you food

Goto M


K
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Your streanth evaporates with each keystroke, you slump in your chair with weakness and then fall to the floor, it is in that spot when you are found years later, by a buglar. The buglar steals all your valuables and doesn’t bother telling anyone of his gruesome discovery


L
Spoiler:

Your house is on fire, you has dead


M
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Now with your belly full.
You sit down to use the computer, but you hear a scratching sound at the window
N Investigat
O Ingnorit it and continyoue.


N
Spoiler:


You see an amazing cat on the window sill
O Ignor the cat
P Let the cat in


O
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You ignor cat and get ready to go on tibb. But nock come to door. What you do now?
Q Ignor door
R Anser door.
S See if you can fly out window.


P
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The cat attack you. You has dead


Q
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You try ignor it but nock is louder, you panik, you mite go deaf if you not answer. what you do now?

R Anser door.
S See if you can fly out window


R
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It is man from freeview, he say to come with him for lifetime freeview
What you do
T Go with him
U Say no thankee mister. And go computer.


S
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You can knot, you had broke window and you has dead.


T
Spoiler:

Man was Simon Kowl, he trick you, you now on BGT being shoot out of cannon, what you doo?

V Get shoot out of cannon
W Escapee by climing really high and clim out roof window, and then run home to use computer
X Escapee by pretned you new host of Britian’s Got More Talent, and run home to use computer.


U
Spoiler:

After your adventur day, you press computer buttons go go on tibb
Goto Z


V
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Even 4 u this bad idea. You hit wall and has dead


W
Spoiler:

Once on the ruff you clim down fireexcpaee. You then run home.
Goto U


X
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They believe you, but you can’t excepe cause they watch you on tele. YOu now has job in tv, you work on BGMT for 8 episodes befor you quit job and get home to find ur house robbed and all stuff stole. You crey by edge of pavement, you no see parking car, it run over you, you has dead :balwing:


Y
Spoiler:

Y you click this, this was not an option? Are you cheating?


Z
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You has won, you has best
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Claudia, I am crying here.



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Claudia ... there is no words .
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Claudia...

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OMG GG... that was hilarious but better than that - completely original and the way you've tailored it.

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OUTSTANDING.
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