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Old 24-03-2021, 01:57 AM #901
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...yeah, sorry I did miss that bit on the connecting bridge, Scarlett....wow, this book is really filled with treachery from the start, so exciting.....
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...yeah, sorry I did miss that bit on the connecting bridge, Scarlett....wow, this book is really filled with treachery from the start, so exciting.....
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It was written in a way that didn't point attention to it, so dont worry Yeah, this book goes in a completely different direction than book 1
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....atm, there feels very little about Dawn that would be redeemable but you’ve said that she’s complicated, Scarlett...and we know the control and ruthlessness of her father...so I’ll try to hold thoughts about her atm...
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...oh btw, Scarlett...reading that made me want to wake up to seagulls and the sea air...it gave me a great longing to leave lockdown days at home and rush down to the coast....../nostalgia series....
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...oh btw, Scarlett...reading that made me want to wake up to seagulls and the sea air...it gave me a great longing to leave lockdown days at home and rush down to the coast....../nostalgia series....
I wake up hearing them everyday, so I find seagulls more annoying but the sea air is nice
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...you have no idea how much I envy you right now, Scarlett......just to drive down to the coast and walk along the front feels like the most magical thing.....
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...take your time, Scarlett ...enjoy the Spring and the sunshine as well and enjoy being able to get outdoors more and enjoy Final Fantasy also...(...I think that you’re playing atm...)...just write when the vibe takes you and if it doesn’t then enjoy other things because it will happen when it’s ready, you know...
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...I feel as though Dawn will die for what she’s done, she won’t survive through the story...because obviously her actions just can’t be undone or put right in any way, which leaves only one end for her...but it’s all so sad, as you said, Scarlett...she’s a complicated person, so many lives were lost that day her mother died...the whole family lost themselves...how different life could have been for them all......
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