[Parmy]

Originally Posted by Mystic Mock

The way that the speech is written in general sounds like the views being expressed from an adult's perspective, rather than a 12 year olds.

Because think back to when you were 12 years old, would you really say things like "I think culture should be for everyone, not just for people from other countries or backgrounds. Being British is still a culture, and it matters too. It's part of who I am."

That's not how 12 year olds naturally speak, it's clearly one of her parents that's influencing her speech.

It's not clear at all. Maybe you can't think about writing and thinking like that as a 12 year old, but she's a grade A student. A very intelligent 12 year old.

They will have been learning about culture in class, as this sounds very much like an end of module project to me. I find your comments distasteful, and dismissive of the intelligence of this girl.