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Old 26-11-2009, 10:25 AM #1
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Default My new novel

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'It was a dark, dark night. Very dark. Almost darker than dark.

Along a dark alley, came a man, hooded, and short. He passed a dimly lit lamp, and ewe could see his face. It was old, and haggard, and wrinkled. He looked like he had just done something really bad, like a burglary or something.

Anyway, this man bumped into another man. They started to fight...'

* For the rest of my novel and to find out what happened, you can email for a copy. It's only 20 quid. It's called The Dark Alley.
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Old 26-11-2009, 10:38 AM #2
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I'll take ten!
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It sounds very dark.
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so dark it almost like being blind
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