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Old 25-01-2010, 06:11 PM #1
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25 Tibb Members....7 Episodes...Who will Survive and Who will be Left 4 Dead....Tibb?
LEFT 4 DEAD TIBB

Prologue
The End


'What about the Shopping District? Is there anyone alive there?'
'No, I blame this New Labour Depression. Sign of the Times'

Sticks was talking to the A.R.I.S.T.A Supercomputer in the now abandoned Tibb Towers. After hours of searching through A.R.I.S.T.A's satellites he had only been able to find 8 humans, the rest of the town's people were unaccounted for but he could guess what had happened to them. They were probably still out there, walking around....

The Zombie Virus had returned and had decimated the town's defenses and had left very few alive. Sticks avoided the Undead and came straight to the Towers to find out what was going on but when he arrived there was no one there. With the loss of the Admin the Mod Force fell apart, most had died in the initial struggle while others escaped with other members, Some were still left out there.

'A.R.I.S.T.A What about the area outside Tibb Town? Is there anyone left in Tibbland? (Original country name no?)'
' I can detect 17 humans alive in outside of Tibb Town. Life in the Fast Lane.'
'So there's 25 people left alive?' Asked Sticks, he couldn't believe that was all that was left.
'Affirmative, I Blame the One Eyed Scotsman'

Sticks looked down at the reports on the nearby desk, his eyes skimmed a few pages, he had read them before but he still felt a chill run down his spine as he read them again. The report was about the virus, Before it was wiped out the first time some zombies had begun to mutate into agile, clawed and deadly creatures which were codenamed 'Hunters' before the mutation could get any worse however the Modforce bombed the area, however the virus came back and continued to mutate which created more hunters as well as other types of 'Special Infected'. Terror gripped his heart as he re-read reports of zombies that could spit acid and others that were intelligent enough to stage ambushes as well as a Zombie type that was strong enough to throw around cars and tough enough to withstand a hail of bullets (Well Tibb's pretty much *****ed!).

Sticks was thinking among the same lines, he wanted to help the other survivors but he decided that he should get out while he had the chance, he grabbed some helicopter keys from the desk and turned to A.R.I.S.T.A.

'I'm gonna go, I doubt if anyone will ever come here again but please try to help the others as much as possible.' Implored Sticks.
'Of course. Bon Voyage. Life In The City' Said A.R.I.S.T.A
Sticks nodded and took a final look at monitors displaying the destruction. He turned on his heel and headed towards the Heliport.

'Good Luck Guys'

NEXT EPISODE: When a group of survivors miss an evacuation they decide to head to the Tibb Shopping Centre due to rumors of Sanctuary. Will they find Safety waiting for them? Or will they stumble into a violent end? Find out in:

DEAD CENTRE
Where Prices aren't the only thing getting slashed!

Once again I'm bored so I've decided to combine my like of Tibb with my love of Left 4 Dead
SURVIVOR LIST
Shaun
Enid
LemonJam
MarkWaldorf
Princess
Patrick
Jack
Stephanie
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Next part should be up tommorow if I'm not too busy.
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DEAD CENTRE
Part 1
Woaah! Your Hotel is on fire!


We've missed it!' Screamed Shaun in horror (ahh/). Shaun, Princess, LemonJam, MarkWaldorf, Enid and Patrick stood on the empty roof of a Hotel in Tibbtown. The roof once an evacuation site but as they all saw the last helicopter fly off into the distance, the roof became an area of lost hope. Missing the evacuation had drained them completely of their fighting spirit. Patrick kicked the wall and spat before speaking up.
'I bet this all started because of those *****ing Americans! They steal our shows and ideas and now they're *****ing killing us all!' He exclaimed to which the group collectively sighed and held their hands to their faces (epic facepalm FTW).
'Oh Great' Shouted Shaun, ' not only am I gonna die, it's gonna be alongside Bernard Manning here!'

Patrick squared up to Shaun but was held back by Enid.
'This isn't helping anyone!' She said, 'The Helicopter's gone but we can still get out of here, I'm not gonna let myself die here! You can all argue among yourself or you can join me and help get the ***** out of here!' She exclaimed, raising a crowbar she found on the ground to the air. The group realised that they had to work together to survive. They decided that they best thing to do was to head to the Shopping Centre a few streets away, they had heard rumours that it was secure and zombie free.

Princess drew out her pistol and walked to the door she opened and stepped out with caution. She looked at the stairwell to find that it was still zombieless.
'It's safe guys' she informed them.
A few others with guns followed on while the remaining 1 or 2 followed the group with their makeshift weapons.

From the stairwell they found themselves on the top floor of the hotel, it was largely quiet but they could hear the muffled groans of the undead in the distance.
'Be careful guys, They might jump out from this rooms' Said LemonJam. At the end of the corridor they came across a lift that could take them to the Ground floor but unfortunately it seemed this one was broken.
'Let's take the Stairwell' Said Mark. They turned around the corner and saw that the corridor to the stairwell was blocked by debris. There didn't seem to be any other way to go...Until Enid saw the Storeroom and was hit with an idea albeit a dangerous one.
'We could climb out of the Storeroom window and walk along the ledge, and climb into a room beyond the debris. That way we can reach the stairs' (My, aren't they a resourceful bunch?)
There was no other way or ideas so the group nodded in agreement.

Princess looked out the window and shuddered.
'We're a long way up guys, be careful'
They slowly edged along the ledge until they reached the first room past the debris' window. Enid and Mark climbed in first, then LemonJam and Princess. Only Shaun and Patrick remained on the ledge when the groaning they heard before became a whole lot louder.... Without warning a zombie burst through the next room's window and charged towards Shaun! It's arms grabbed hold of him and tried to lean in to bite but Shaun was having none of it. He pushed him away off the ledge but as the zombie tumbled off, he was still holding onto Shaun. Shaun began to fall backwards before Patrick grabbed his other arm and pulled him back up. Shaun felt his sleeve rip as he was pulled up and soon saw the zombie fall to the ground gripping onto the fabric. They dived into the room quickly and sighed a breath of relief.

The room was quite dark and the floor felt different...It definitely wasn't carpeted like the rest of the hotel....Could they hear rattling? Mark turned the light on and the group was greeted with an unexpected sight. The room was clad top to bottom in leather and chains hung from the ceiling.
'Who stayed in this room? Max Mosely?' Asked Shaun.
The group laughed until Mark stopped and froze in his place.
'Wait a minute....Red Moon owned this hotel.....you don't think...this was his...H-his....Sex dungeon?' The group roared with laughter.
'Red, you dark horse you!' cried Shaun. It felt good to laugh but the group knew they had to hurry before the hotel collapsed or zombies swamped the place. They exited the room and hurtled down the stairs. On this floor they found a fully working lift but they decided to quickly search the abandoned floor for any useful supplies for what might be waiting for them downstairs. Patrick and Princess came across a large room with a long table in the middle. It was some sort of meeting room but more importantly it was littered with supplies. Princess grabbed a backpack as she swept the medical supplies into it while Patrick grabbed as much ammo and ammunition belts as he could carry.

He turned around and saw a closed cupboard, he opened it without thinking and a screaming figure came hurtling out!
'Ahh!' Patrick screamed as he raised his bat and pummeled it to death. The commotion caused the rest of the group to pile into the room.
'Patrick' Said Princess 'were you sure that was a zombie?' The group looked at him in horror. His face tensed before replying.
'Umm, I'm not entirely sure...I think it was?' His face relaxed. 'Oh well if he wasn't he was probably American anyway or gay....or even worse....a gay American!' His eyes sparkled with fear at the thought. Shaun sighed before he grabbed Patrick and pulled him by the shoulder to the lift.
'Come on Mr Hitler Youth we have a Zombie Apocalypse to escape from' Said Shaun as they all clamored into the lift.

As the lift descended, the group noticed that the air was becoming very thick...too thick. Smoke started to cloud the elevator as it's doors opened to reveal that the lobby was ablaze.
'Quick! Get to the courtyard!' shouted Lemonjam. Beams started to fall from the ceiling as they made their way across the lobby. Shapes began to burst from the flames, as flaming zombies sprinted towards the group. Laura, LJ and Shaun raised their guns and fired as the group reached the courtyard.

The fresh air was a gift but they had no time to appreciate it as blazing zombies were chasing them.
'Get into the reception!' Cried Enid. They fired some shots backwards at the advancing zombies as they hurtled into the small reception room. MarkWaldorf locked the door and blocked it with a filing Cabinet. They managed to escape the hotel and were safe for now but as they looked towards the entrance they realised the nightmare was far from over.
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Can I have a cameo as a random zombie?
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Can I have a cameo as a random zombie?
You role might be bigger but you might end up a zombie who knows? So far I've only decided who the survivors are and I've decided on two people who're gonna survive and two that aren't. It's all gonna be done in a fun way though.
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Oh excellent. If I already had a role scrap that.

I like all things Left 4 Dead since the black chick wears a Depeche Mode T-Shirt. All things except Hard Rain. What a bitch of a chapter.
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Oh excellent. If I already had a role scrap that.

I like all things Left 4 Dead since the black chick wears a Depeche Mode T-Shirt. All things except Hard Rain. What a bitch of a chapter.
I love that chapter, it's quite fun if insanely difficult especially on Realism mode. It's gonna be a fun chapter to write.
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Amazing I love these stories Dean, they come from nowhere and they're always funny!!
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Amazing I love these stories Dean, they come from nowhere and they're always funny!!
Thanks Greg! Glad you're enjoying it.

The next part should be up by tommorow I think and possibly the last part of DC if I've got nothing better to do
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DEAD CENTRE
Part 2
Kickin' It To The Streets!


The Survivors raised their weapons and slowly crept towards the front door of the Hotel. Princess carefully reached out to open the door as the others waited with baited breath, nervous and scared about what was on the other side. CLICK.
'Oh.....It's locked.' Said a surprised Princess. 'There must be a key around here have a look around guys unless you want to live here'.
Shaun leapt over the desk and opened the drawers.
'Nope no keys he- oh dear!' He shut the draw quickly before letting out a little giggle.
'What is it?' Said LemonJam. Shaun smiled before answering.
'To say his name is Red, he certainly loves his blue.'
'Aha I found it!' said Mark. ' It was underneath the doormat'

A few seconds later the group burst out the front door with their weapons raised only to find an empty street. They lowered their weapons slightly and carefully moved up the street.
'It's too quiet' Enid commented. 'It's making me nervous'
Right on cue, a zombie leapt from behind a car and beelined straight towards the group. Princess was a step ahead however and with one swift bullet to the head, she dispatched the zombie. Another zombie emerged from an alley and headed straight for Patrick but Shaun quickly took it out.
'We're even now' He said to the shaken Patrick.

They moved beyond the street and across a small park with little trouble, which most of the group was thankful for except Enid, It really was too quiet. It had only been a short while since they came to the Hotel and these streets were a lot more zombie infested then. What could have made them disappear? Did they simply leave to feed elsewhere or was there another reason? Enid couldn't think of many plausible theories so she just focused on making it to the Shopping Centre alive.

They drew near a car and an electric traffic sign that read 'Busy Road' when they heard a sudden 'Hey' behind them. They jumped at the sound and initially raised their weapons and spun around to find themselves faced with a nervous but happy Stephanie and Jack.
'Oh my God I can't believe you're alive!' said a jubilant Stephanie.
They exchanged pleasantries before Mark asked them what they were doing.
'We were originally heading towards the Hotel but then we saw the helicopters leave and so we were just looking for somewhere safe and then we came across you' Explained Jack.'How about you?'
'We're heading to the Shopping Centre, We've heard there's an evacuation site there so there could be some transport out of here or at least it'll be a safe place to stay a while'
'Cool, can we come? We got snacks!' Said Stephanie.
'Sold!' Said LemonJam as he looked through Stephanie's bag of food. They turned around the corner and found themselves faced with a street covered in burning wreckage and bodies.
'I've never seen anything so tragic' Said Shaun
'I know' replied LemonJam 'She didn't bring any Jaffa Cakes with her! (chry/)'.

Unable to stomach the sight Princess turn around and looked back at the car and sign....Something caught her eye.
She called to the group as they walked backwards towards the electric sign.
'The message changed' She told them.

The sign now read 'BEWARE OF THE TANK. UTTER FACT'.
'Tank? There's a tank around here? Maybe we can use it?' inquired Mark. Jack looked unconvinced.
'I don't know, Why would we need to beware of it? The Modforce is the only people who would have something like that and they wouldn't attack us and zombies aren't clever enough to use one...I think we should keep this in mind though.' Said Jack
'Who sent this message though and how? It's bothering me' Enid stated. Nobody had an answer to give but they couldn't worry about that now. They needed to get to the Centre. The returned to the wrecked street and at the end of it they could see the Shopping Centre. Princess couldn't help but smile. 'Nearly there' she thought.

Halfway down the street, the ground begun to rumble slightly.
'What the hell? An Earthquake?'
The shaking got worse and suddenly they heard a loud roar from behind them. They turned to see a car flying towards them, they threw themselves out the way and got up to see a strange creature running towards them. It was a hulking monster which was musclebound and decayed. Stephanie screamed at the sight of it and ran towards the Centre. The group followed on behind her although Shaun and Princess fired some shots at the monster but for all the damage it did they might as well have hit it with pillows.

It moved surprisingly fast for it's size and soon it was within range of Enid. It swung for her but she ducked and slid underneath a car safely to the other side she got up and rejoined the others. The monster ran towards the car and punched it at the survivors but they managed to avoid it by leaping out the way. Annoyed at how evasive they were, the creature ran up to a lamppost and ripped it from the ground. It swung the pole widely but all the survivors managed to leap over it except for Patrick. The lamppost swept him off his feet. He called to the others but they continued to run towards the building. The creature dropped the pole is it neared him, it clasped it's hands together and raised them high, It was going to smash Patrick to death. He screamed as the thing went to strike him but at the last moment he felt a hand pull him out the way.
'Get up and run' shouted Princess, his savior. He got to his feet as the monster raised it's hands from the small crater in the ground it created.

The rest of the survivors were safely within the Centre, they watched with terrified eyes as they tried to cheer on Patrick and Princess to outrun the hulking beast. Jack however was typing in a code on a nearby keypad. The thick, steel shutters slowly began to descend over the entrance.
'What are you doing!' screamed Shaun
'If I don't start them now then they won't be in place to stop that thing getting in here!' He retorted.
Shaun glared at him before screaming madly at the pair to run faster. Princess saw the shutters and grabbed Patrick's hand, She bolted towards the building and kept a firm eye on the shutters. They were halfway down now, Princess and Patrick only had a few seconds left before they would be trapped outside. They were within feet of the Centre but the gap was drawing smaller and smaller. Were they going to make it in time?
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