[Macie Lightfoot]

This series is in major need of a driving protagonist. There's no Deana or Gina to through your support behind so it's hard to be passionate in rooting for people. There are plenty of people to root against but no real protagonists.

Also the divide isn't much of a divide? The dynamics aren't clear-cut at all, there's just a group of vile cool kids and a bunch of others who don't like them but aren't unified.

[Doogle]

Originally Posted by troynuncdicit

This series is in major need of a driving protagonist. There's no Deana or Gina to through your support behind so it's hard to be passionate in rooting for people. There are plenty of people to root against but no real protagonists.

Also the divide isn't much of a divide? The dynamics aren't clear-cut at all, there's just a group of vile cool kids and a bunch of others who don't like them but aren't unified.

You could say Jale to an extent but I guess she isn't your standard as she's made a few silly mistakes too. I can already see her being underdog though

I also agree with the next point, they don't seem to like each other they just have a mutual hatred of the cool kids

[Macie Lightfoot]

Originally Posted by Doogle

You could say Jale to an extent but I guess she isn't your standard as she's made a few silly mistakes too. I can already see her being underdog though

I also agree with the next point, they don't seem to like each other they just have a mutual hatred of the cool kids

Jale's good but she's not entirely compelling. Like, Deana's such an awkward weirdo and her interactions with anyone were hilarious so it was so easy to get attached to her. Jale's a normal person doing normal things who just happens to be stuck in a house with ****ing lunatics. It's like a default protagonist at best; she's rootable in opposition to her oppressors but she's not driving the plot really.

[Doogle]

Originally Posted by troynuncdicit

Jale's good but she's not entirely compelling. Like, Deana's such an awkward weirdo and her interactions with anyone were hilarious so it was so easy to get attached to her. Jale's a normal person doing normal things who just happens to be stuck in a house with ****ing lunatics. It's like a default protagonist at best; she's rootable in opposition to her oppressors but she's not driving the plot really.

Hmm again true.. I just remembered moments like "GOOD HAS OVERCOME EVIL" and I realise she was so ridiculous it was impossible not to love her

She really should have won