[AProducer'sWetDream]

Originally Posted by Jake.

It could do with a bit of work (I'd personally get rid of the two people standing near the end and perhaps have things go a bit more sped up), but good for a first attempt

Thankyou! I definitely agree about the pace, and it's something I'll work more on as I add other elements into the sequence (I'm thinking of replacing things like the barbed wire and people at the end with some shots of the house as they are a bit dull).