[Gusto Brunt]

Originally Posted by Kazanne

So many people just missing the point,
Their noses are well out of joint
The bugs and critters are set for a task
although its wrong,they have to pass
the beetle was just roaming it's place
no need for Colin to get in its face
and pick it up without a care
and watch its little body flare.
so theres the difference,get the point
no need for noses so out of joint..............

That's a good effort, I must admit
Quite frankly I thought it would be s***
No seriously that's a good one it's true
It's hard in a poem just to be you

But you managed to bring forth zest
Although where is the rest?
A long poem would do you good
Try one, I am sure you should

Do it, write loads, pages if you like
And recite it in front of a mic

Stand up and utter your poem out loud
Bring forth a listening crowd!

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