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Banned
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And I'm done.
I liked it a lot, the story was a little predictable and the fact that it's a play is limiting in terms of how big the scope of the story is. I'm really eager for the inevitable Film/TV adaptations though, if each part runs for about an hour and half on stage then I imagine the films may add more material to them to buff the running time to 2-2.5 hours which could help fill out the plot a little more and allow the story to breathe a bit. Pros - Albus and Scorpius are good lead characters. - The opening scenes are great and I look forward to see them expanded upon when the adaptations happen. - The parallels between Albus and Harry and their relationship is well handled. - The character moments are excellent. - Harry is far more compelling in this then he's ever been in the other books. Cons - The dialogue lacks that JK-ness about it. It's a little clumsy in parts. - The story is a little too fast paced but it's understandable given that it's a play. - The focus is squarely on a small number of characters and it's irksome that some characters get snubbed completely but then again it's a play so it's forgivable -The overarching plot is a little messy and overly convenient. The script succeeds when it comes to smaller moments and relationships but the overall plot needs refining and expanding upon. |
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