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31-12-2009, 08:24 PM
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Haha. Aww. Not planning on having children then Enid?
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31-12-2009, 08:28 PM
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Very good start Lewis,
keep up the good work 
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31-12-2009, 09:14 PM
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that was surprisingly entertaining
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31-12-2009, 09:17 PM
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Going to write another little bit now guys
 May do 3 parts tonight Oh and Ninastar you are in the next scene Thanks guys! |
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31-12-2009, 09:25 PM
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Haha Lolz.
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31-12-2009, 09:56 PM
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The Queen Vic
The Queen Vic is full of customers.. all getting ready for a long evening. Lili is behind the bar, talking to Brona Lili: I expect tonight will be a long night. Brona: Yepp. Well, I plan for it to be. Lili: Isn't Ross with you? Brona: Naah. He's going to have the night to himself with a few beers. Lili: Typical bloke Brona: Yeah. Where's Remy? Lili: He's upstairs putting Courtney to bed. I expect he will be down a bit later when we get busier. Brona: Aww. how old is she now? Lili: Courtney is 9 and Jonathan is 15. It's crazy how time flies being a parent. Brona: I don't think I could cope with having children yet.. I'm only 18. I want to enjoy life first. Lili: I wish I did the same. I'm 30 years old and have a 15 year old child.. You can tell I haven't really lived life to the full. Brona Laughs and Princess walk into the pub Princess: Hiya love. Brona: Heya, do you want a drink? Princess: ohh yeah.. a Vodka and coke please Lili Lili: Sure thing Princess love, tell you what, have it on the house.. Remy wont ever know! Lili smirks as she goes off to make Princess's drink. The Allotments Shaun: but I thought you were gay.. MarkW: Yeah, well things change. I'm 22.. My mind is al over the place.. But I can't stop thinking about her Shaun.. And I don't think I can cope any longer.. seeing her walking around the square all alone. Shaun: Have you not got any consideration for my feelings? MarkW: Shaun.. we had a one night stand.. It's not as if we are married? Shaun: But I love you MarkW: Well.. I don't love you Shaun. Shaun steps up and slaps Mark. He bursts into tears and runs off, leaving Mark standing alone. Mark sighs whilst rubbing his cheek The Vic It is now 9pm. Brona and Princess are in the Vic, both very drunk. Andy walks up to Brona Andy: Hiya babe, do you want a drink? Brona: Oooh. Ello Love... You're a sexy fellaa Princess laughs loudly Princess: Ooh. Bronaaaaaaaaaaa. Cut it out you silly billy. What about Rod!! Brona: Who the Bloody hell is Rod my dear? Princess: Rod.. What am I on about...... Princess laughs loudly Princess: I mean Rosssssssss Brona laughs. Brona: He's my boyfriend isn't he? Andy: You have a boyfriend? What a lucky fellaa! Andy looks Brona up and down Brona: I love you.. whatever your name is!! Andy: Err.. It's Andy sweetheart... What is yours? Brona: Andy? she laughs Brona: ANDY PANDY Brona and Princess blast out in a fit of laughter Brona: Come with me Andy Pandyyyyyyy. Brona grabs Andy's T-Shirt and leads him into the toilets. They get into a cubicle and Brona laughs before snogging Andy. Andy: Let's go back to mine babe. I've got some booze and a bed Brona: Lets do it Andy Pandyyy Andy smiles Ross's house Ross is lying on the Sofa in his dressing gown. He pours a glass of red wine and then pours another. A woman walks into the living room in her underwear Ninastar: Shall we go upstairs? Ross grins Part 2 of tonight.. There will be another part a bit later
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31-12-2009, 09:59 PM
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It's terrible isn't it. :P
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31-12-2009, 10:31 PM
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pmsl!
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01-01-2010, 12:13 AM
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Thanks Sammy
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I love it!
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