[Jack.]

Originally Posted by *Kate*

It's great Jack, starting to know the characters a bit, like that you've got different story strands ongoing

Thanks Kate

[mizzy25]

im still loving it, want to know who the weird texts to elissa are off and who has just rang mayas phone and why?? Its great.

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

im still loving it, want to know who the weird texts to elissa are off and who has just rang mayas phone and why?? Its great.

Elissa is getting stalked but i'm not going to say who by. you will find out yourself next month!!

[mizzy25]

cant wait lol

[Jack.]

Episode 6

The episode starts with A campervan turning into the estate. There is music blasting out of the van. Jackie west is staying outside having a fag when the van parks up right outside her house. "Tanya get out here now" Shouts Jackie to Tanya. Tanya quickly runs down the stairs to see what is happening. " Who the hell are they" Says Tanya. Jackie says she thinks that they are moving in next door. Jackie takes one more look at them before walking back into the house with Tanya

Meanwhile on the estate. Andrea is sitting in the pub waiting for Maya. As Andrea gets up to go to the toilet. Frank walks over to her table"Why didn't you answer my call the other" Frank asks Andrea quietly. Andrea tells him that Maya had her phone so she couldn't pick up the phonecall. As Maya walks in the pub Frank quickly rushes off back behind the bar. "Hiya sweetheart, No Jarrad with you today." Andrea says. Maya tells her that Jarrad has had to rush up to Leeds because his dad has had a heart attack.

Elsewhere at the solicitors. Daz is nervously waiting for his appointment. As his name is called to go in. Daz's heartbeat goes through the roof. As he goes to stand up he falls to the floor. He starts to struggle to breath. The receptionist quickly runs to the phone to ring for a ambulance. As they are waiting for the ambulance. Daz starts fitting on the floor. No one has no idea what to do. Just as Daz stops fitting the paramedics turn up.


Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Jarrad is sat alone in the kitchen with a glass of whiskey in his hand. As he sits there's tears drop into his whiskey. Jarrad can not believe that he has lost his father. Just as he is about the drink the whiskey the front door opens. Andrea and Frank stumble in. As they start passionately kissing and starting to take each other's clothes off. Jarrad walks into the hall"What the hell are you doing" Jarrad says to Andrea. Andrea and Frank suddenly stop when they hear Jarred's voice. "Frank I think you should go" says Andrea. As Frank walks out the door. Andrea begs Jarrad to not tell anyone about what he just seen.

At the student house. Izzie, Ollie and dan are having a house warming party. Ziggy and Will walk in. "Sorry do I know you" Izzie asks. Dan tells Izzie that will is his cousin and that Ziggy is his friend. "So Ziggy where's your girlfriend" ask Izzie. Ziggy tells her that he doesn't have a girlfriend. Dan goes outside to have a fag. As he is looking around he sees Frank coming out of the flats doing his shirt up. "Uncle frank,Uncle Frank over here" shouts Dan. Frank crosses the road to see Dan. "You alright dan what are you doing around here" Ask Frank. Dan tells him that him and his mates have just moved in.

[Jack.]

Feedback welcomed

[mizzy25]

jack cud u do me a favour and send me a pm when u put a new episode up please? I just happened to be browsing tonight and found a new episode I didn't even know it was up. so id really appreciate a pm as id hate to miss any.

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

jack cud u do me a favour and send me a pm when u put a new episode up please? I just happened to be browsing tonight and found a new episode I didn't even know it was up. so id really appreciate a pm as id hate to miss any.

Yeah sure mizzy

[mizzy25]

thanks jack and im still enjoying it, I love me soaps lol

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

thanks jack and im still enjoying it, I love me soaps lol

Thanks yeah me too I'll be doing an episode an day for a week at the end of June

[mizzy25]

Il look forward to that jack, your very talented, I wish I could think of a storyline, but I cant lol

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

Il look forward to that jack, your very talented, I wish I could think of a storyline, but I cant lol

Thanks Mizzy glad your enjoying reading it

[Jack.]

No episode this week guys. But there will be two episodes posted next week

[mizzy25]

awww I thought u had put one up and not pm,ed me lol

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

awww I thought u had put one up and not pm,ed me lol

Lol not had enough time this weekend to write the episode

[Jack.]

Episode 7 and 8 will be up later tonight

[Jack.]

Episode 7

The episode starts with Diana sitting in the bedroom window looking over at the estate. She quickly gets up as she hears the postman. As she walks into the kitchen with the post. She sees Frank sitting at the table. As she looks at what Mail there is. She sees a letter with "Urgent warning" Diana quickly put the letter in her back pocket before Frank seen it. "Morning darling, Anything there for me?" Frank asked. Diana tells him that there is two letters for him. She puts the letters on the table before walking out.

Meanwhile on the estate Andrea and Jarred are talking about what happened last week "He is a married man, you have to end it now or I will have to tell Maya and Diana what you and Frank have been up to together" Jarred say to Andrea. Andrea begs him not to say anything to anyone and that she will end it but in her own time. Jarred gets his coat before heading out to work.

Over at lays house. Lay and Ziggy are sitting listening to music full blast. Lay treats Ziggy like he is her little brother that she never had. Lay doesn't know that Ziggy fancies her like hell. "Zig do you want another drink" Lay asks. Ziggy tells her that he will have another beer. As Lay starts walking into the kitchen Ziggy plans in his head what he is going to do next.

Over at the student house. Izzie answers the door "Hi I heard you have a room to rent" Ask Cain as he looked at the floor. Izzie shouts Ollie to come to the door. "Cain is interested in renting that spare room of ours" Izzie tells Ollie. Ollie looks at Izzie and then looks at Cain. " Ok he can have the room but there is one condition he has to put £10 each week into the Drinks fund." Cain smiles and say thanks for giving him the room.

Back at the pub. Diana is sitting at the kitchen table with the letter in front of her. Diana opens the letter. Inside the letter it say that if she doesn't find £25,000 in the next month they will take the pub from her and Frank. Diana knows that she will never going to find that sort of money in just a month. She is too scared to tell Frank because he doesn't know about the loans that she has had and has not payed back.

[mizzy25]

well done once again jack im gripped already, what did she take the loans out for? will ziggy tell lay how he feels? will she laugh @ him?????

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

well done once again jack im gripped already, what did she take the loans out for? will ziggy tell lay how he feels? will she laugh @ him?????

Well if I told you that I would to kill you

[Jack.]

Episode 8&9 have been written and just need posting, I've also started episode 10

[Jack.]

Episode 8

The episode starts with Bianca unpacking her case. Just as she is about to take it upstairs. The phone rings "Hiya Bianca it's Di, I've got a massive problem, Can we meet up in the Cafe at one" Says Diana. Bianca tells her that's fine and will see her then. "Mum there is someone at the door for you" Shouts Emily. When Bianca gets to the door she is shocked to see Lee her holiday fling standing at the door. "What are you doing here?" Asks Bianca,

Meanwhile at Elissa's house. Elissa is sitting in the living room when she hears the front door come flying open. Elissa gets up to go close it. When she gets to the front door she sees that someone has written "Die bitch your not wanted on this estate" Elissa looks around to see if she can see anyone. She quickly closes the door before rushing to get her phone to phone the police.

Over at Lay's. Lay and Ziggy are having a few drinks together. Lay doesn't seem to notice that Ziggy is coming on to her. As Lay looks at Ziggy as she is just about to ask him if he wants another beer. Ziggy looks at before he starts to kiss her. Lay pushes Ziggy away "Ziggy I can't do this" Lay tells Ziggy. He doesn't listen to her. As he starts kissing her again but this time she doesn't stop him.

Back at the Spencer's house Bianca goes in the kitchen to get the phone"Hiya Di it's Bianca can't make it later sorry" As Bianca puts the phone and walks into the front room. She starts asking Lee why he has just turned up on her doorstep without even telling her he was coming. Lee tells Bianca that he has nowhere else to go. He tells her that his ex wife has kicked him out of their old house. "Well I suppose you can stay for a few nights" Bianca says to Lee.

Over at the hospital. Daz is lying in bed. He slowly sits up as he sees the doctor coming towards him "Mr Miles I've got some bad news, The results of your CT scan have shown that you have a small brain tumour. It is treatable but we will need to operate as soon as possible" Says the doctor. Daz is in a state of shock as the doctor walks. Just as the doctor lefts the room he sees Emily walk in. "Hey Daz what did the doctor want" Emily asked Daz. Daz tells Emily that he has a brain tumour but it's ok because it's treatable. Emily give Daz a hug. While Emily is hugging him Daz is holding back the tears

[Jack.]

Episode 9 will be posted later today. With episodes 10&11 being posted later in the week.

[Jack.]

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy
Stalker revealed
Wallis family arrive
A resident commits suicide
New club opens
Coming out storyline
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline)
Shock murder
A fire
7 Characters exits
Drugs storyline
Engagement
Two new characters

[Benjamin]

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy - Shaun
Stalker revealed - Greg
Wallis family arrive - Saph, Reece and Germ
A resident commits suicide - CharlieO
New club opens - Orangu For You
Coming out storyline - Most of TiBB
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline) - Marc
Shock murder - Arista kills Salman over love affair
A fire - In Nailsworth Natter
7 Characters exits - Josy, Novo, Locke, Drew (in nailsworth fire), Salman killed, Niamh and thetruth run off to start a new life together in Benidorm
Drugs storyline - Karl gets Gypsygoth into smack
Engagement - Joe and his imaginary wife
Two new characters - bwoty and thesocialgroup guy

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by Benjamin

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy - Shaun
Stalker revealed - Greg
Wallis family arrive - Saph, Reece and Germ
A resident commits suicide - CharlieO
New club opens - Orangu For You
Coming out storyline - Most of TiBB
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline) - Marc
Shock murder - Arista kills Salman over love affair
A fire - In Nailsworth Natter
7 Characters exits - Josy, Novo, Locke, Drew (in nailsworth fire), Salman killed, Niamh and thetruth run off to start a new life together in Benidorm
Drugs storyline - Karl gets Gypsygoth into smack
Engagement - Joe and his imaginary wife
Two new characters - bwoty and thesocialgroup guy

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