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22-02-2014, 05:08 PM
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The new website for the estate. It's not finished yet but you can have a look now.
http://theestate.inweby.info/section/7094 |
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22-02-2014, 11:49 PM
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Episode 5
The episode starts with Daz and George sitting on the sofa. Daz asks George if he wants a glass of wine. After Daz pours George a glass of wine they start talking about Heather. George tells Daz that he doesn't want a relationship with Heather, when Daz Asks why George tells him that she is too full on and that he just wants her for a easy ride. Daz tell George that he should tell Heather that he doesn't love her before it's goes to far. Meanwhile on the estate. Andrea is at the pub drinking her sorrows away. As she looks up to order another drink she sees Thomas Potter in front of her. Andrea try's to chat Tom up. Tom Starts flirting with Andrea. Just as Andrea is about to give Tom her number Samantha walks around the corner. "Hiya Babe, I've missed you" Says Sam. As Tom helps Sam take her bags up the stairs he tells Andrea to leave her number behind the till for him and that he will ring her later. Meanwhile At Elissa's office. Elissa is busy finishing off one of her articles when she gets a text on her phone saying the following'Think I'm going to let you get away with the **** you have caused my family. You better sleep with one eye open I'm always watching you" Elissa quickly writes down the number it was sent for before quickly ringing. But went she rings the mobile there is no answer. Elissa is starting to worry after what happened the other week. Elissa quickly rushes out of her office and heads to the police station. Back at Heathers house. Daz and George are enjoying. George doesn't like Daz that much. George is only staying at the house with him because of the free wine that is there. Daz goes to get another bottle of wine. As Daz is walking back to the sofa he falls over Georges feet and falls on top off George. Daz looks into George eyes. Daz kisses George on the lips. George quickly pushes Daz off"What the hell do you think your doing,You queer" says George, Daz tells George that he thinks it's time for him to leave. Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Andrea is sitting at the kitchen table waiting for a text or phone call from Tom. Maya walks in the kitchen to make a cup of tea. "Do you want a cuppa mum" Maya asks. Andrea leaves her phone on the table while she goes to the loo. Just as Andrea get to the loo Maya here's her mothers phone going off. So she picks up the phone to see who it is. Just as Maya is about to look at the message Andrea walks back in"What the hell do you think your doing with my phone" Andrea asks Maya. Maya tells her that she heard it go off so see went to look who it was. |
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23-02-2014, 12:09 PM
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25-02-2014, 11:45 AM
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im still loving it, want to know who the weird texts to elissa are off and who has just rang mayas phone and why?? Its great.
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25-02-2014, 12:04 PM
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25-02-2014, 02:57 PM
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cant wait lol
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02-03-2014, 02:40 PM
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Episode 6
The episode starts with A campervan turning into the estate. There is music blasting out of the van. Jackie west is staying outside having a fag when the van parks up right outside her house. "Tanya get out here now" Shouts Jackie to Tanya. Tanya quickly runs down the stairs to see what is happening. " Who the hell are they" Says Tanya. Jackie says she thinks that they are moving in next door. Jackie takes one more look at them before walking back into the house with Tanya Meanwhile on the estate. Andrea is sitting in the pub waiting for Maya. As Andrea gets up to go to the toilet. Frank walks over to her table"Why didn't you answer my call the other" Frank asks Andrea quietly. Andrea tells him that Maya had her phone so she couldn't pick up the phonecall. As Maya walks in the pub Frank quickly rushes off back behind the bar. "Hiya sweetheart, No Jarrad with you today." Andrea says. Maya tells her that Jarrad has had to rush up to Leeds because his dad has had a heart attack. Elsewhere at the solicitors. Daz is nervously waiting for his appointment. As his name is called to go in. Daz's heartbeat goes through the roof. As he goes to stand up he falls to the floor. He starts to struggle to breath. The receptionist quickly runs to the phone to ring for a ambulance. As they are waiting for the ambulance. Daz starts fitting on the floor. No one has no idea what to do. Just as Daz stops fitting the paramedics turn up. Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Jarrad is sat alone in the kitchen with a glass of whiskey in his hand. As he sits there's tears drop into his whiskey. Jarrad can not believe that he has lost his father. Just as he is about the drink the whiskey the front door opens. Andrea and Frank stumble in. As they start passionately kissing and starting to take each other's clothes off. Jarrad walks into the hall"What the hell are you doing" Jarrad says to Andrea. Andrea and Frank suddenly stop when they hear Jarred's voice. "Frank I think you should go" says Andrea. As Frank walks out the door. Andrea begs Jarrad to not tell anyone about what he just seen. At the student house. Izzie, Ollie and dan are having a house warming party. Ziggy and Will walk in. "Sorry do I know you" Izzie asks. Dan tells Izzie that will is his cousin and that Ziggy is his friend. "So Ziggy where's your girlfriend" ask Izzie. Ziggy tells her that he doesn't have a girlfriend. Dan goes outside to have a fag. As he is looking around he sees Frank coming out of the flats doing his shirt up. "Uncle frank,Uncle Frank over here" shouts Dan. Frank crosses the road to see Dan. "You alright dan what are you doing around here" Ask Frank. Dan tells him that him and his mates have just moved in. |
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04-03-2014, 08:29 PM
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jack cud u do me a favour and send me a pm when u put a new episode up please? I just happened to be browsing tonight and found a new episode I didn't even know it was up. so id really appreciate a pm as id hate to miss any.
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04-03-2014, 08:50 PM
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04-03-2014, 08:58 PM
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thanks jack and im still enjoying it, I love me soaps lol
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04-03-2014, 09:10 PM
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yeah me too  I'll be doing an episode an day for a week at the end of June
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04-03-2014, 09:29 PM
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Il look forward to that jack, your very talented, I wish I could think of a storyline, but I cant lol
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04-03-2014, 09:32 PM
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08-03-2014, 04:00 PM
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awww I thought u had put one up and not pm,ed me lol
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08-03-2014, 04:46 PM
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20-03-2014, 04:48 PM
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Episode 7
The episode starts with Diana sitting in the bedroom window looking over at the estate. She quickly gets up as she hears the postman. As she walks into the kitchen with the post. She sees Frank sitting at the table. As she looks at what Mail there is. She sees a letter with "Urgent warning" Diana quickly put the letter in her back pocket before Frank seen it. "Morning darling, Anything there for me?" Frank asked. Diana tells him that there is two letters for him. She puts the letters on the table before walking out. Meanwhile on the estate Andrea and Jarred are talking about what happened last week "He is a married man, you have to end it now or I will have to tell Maya and Diana what you and Frank have been up to together" Jarred say to Andrea. Andrea begs him not to say anything to anyone and that she will end it but in her own time. Jarred gets his coat before heading out to work. Over at lays house. Lay and Ziggy are sitting listening to music full blast. Lay treats Ziggy like he is her little brother that she never had. Lay doesn't know that Ziggy fancies her like hell. "Zig do you want another drink" Lay asks. Ziggy tells her that he will have another beer. As Lay starts walking into the kitchen Ziggy plans in his head what he is going to do next. Over at the student house. Izzie answers the door "Hi I heard you have a room to rent" Ask Cain as he looked at the floor. Izzie shouts Ollie to come to the door. "Cain is interested in renting that spare room of ours" Izzie tells Ollie. Ollie looks at Izzie and then looks at Cain. " Ok he can have the room but there is one condition he has to put £10 each week into the Drinks fund." Cain smiles and say thanks for giving him the room. Back at the pub. Diana is sitting at the kitchen table with the letter in front of her. Diana opens the letter. Inside the letter it say that if she doesn't find £25,000 in the next month they will take the pub from her and Frank. Diana knows that she will never going to find that sort of money in just a month. She is too scared to tell Frank because he doesn't know about the loans that she has had and has not payed back. |
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20-03-2014, 09:24 PM
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well done once again jack im gripped already, what did she take the loans out for? will ziggy tell lay how he feels? will she laugh @ him?????
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20-03-2014, 09:37 PM
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