[Ammi]

..I've voted for the two I think kind of stand out a little more but they're all very good...

[Jake.]

Originally Posted by Shaun

oops i am durnk i did not see you can vote for two in that case i shall pick another when I AM SOBER but jake's just stood out yes yes

thanks and thanks to everybody for the votes!

[Kate!]

Statistics

article required a minimum of 500 words. Did everyone comply? Nope

(Cheeky beggars)

Here's how it went.....

Jake - 496 ()
Loukas - 1144 (man of many words)
Jordan - 542 including quotes, 457 without quotes (crafty, but all credit for being cheeky )
Pothuthic 501 (just about squeaking over the line)
Drew - 278 ()

[Ammi]

..I did think that I had read the mention of 500 words somewhere.....(I would have been rubbish/probably around 50,000 and that would be before I even got to mention the candidate..)....

[Jake.]

My word counter lied to me

[Shaun]

*withdraws vote for jake and issues an apology to the public*

no but I vote Jake/Loukas pls

[Kate!]

Ty Shaun - that'll be added.

#bloodyskivingpisshead

[Loukas]

Originally Posted by Shaun

*withdraws vote for jake and issues an apology to the public*

no but I vote Jake/Loukas pls

Thank you Lord ShuGrr and to everyone else that voted for me, even to the people that read it all. It took me a good hour, if not more, to write and look back at what Drew actually said and incorporate his words into the writing

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by Loukas

Thank you Lord ShuGrr and to everyone else that voted for me, even to the people that read it all. It took me a good hour to write and look back at what Drew actually said and incorporate his words into the writing

Further Feedback

Jake - My favourite piece of the 5. Gave an accurate account and tempered it with good natured humour and wit. Very imaginative and an enjoyable read.

Jordan - In a similar vein to Jake's, Jordan's write up was nicely detailed, well presented and 'flowed' well. Written in a warm chatty style, it captured my attention from the start (both these entries did in fact)

What I also liked was that both candidates managed to throw shade (lol) while keeping it humorous and not insulting. That's to their credit IMO.

To qualify, Jake's had the (slight) edge for me, it was a little more polished. That's the only way I could differentiate between the two. Cracking efforts

Loukas. This was an outstanding piece of writing. The effort and enthusiasm Loukas put in was clear to see. His work ethic has been consistently good throughout all the tasks, he lacks a little in style here compared to Jake and Jordan's work, which had a bit more spark and personality, that's just my opinion, but quality is top notch and at this stage I'd venture to say he's the one to beat.

Pothuthic. Placing him fourth felt really mean, and it's not because there was anything to fault with this presentation, again it was merely down to how high I found the quality of work across this task in general. He obviously worked hard on it, it was a good read, and there was plenty of detail.

Drew. In all honesty I placed this last purely because it was so brief, fell substantially short of the required word count and paled in comparison with the others, a fact that Drew acknowledged himself at the time of posting. I have to add for the record however, that Drew's an excellent candidate, all 5 are the cream of the crop or they wouldn't have gotten this far.

[Mitchell]

Thanks all x

[Kate!]

[Loukas]

Originally Posted by *Kate*

Further Feedback


Loukas. This was an outstanding piece of writing. The effort and enthusiasm Loukas put in was clear to see. His work ethic has been consistently good throughout all the tasks, he lacks a little in style here compared to Jake and Jordan's work, which had a bit more spark and personality, that's just my opinion, but quality is top notch and at this stage I'd venture to say he's the one to beat.

thank you Kate

[Shaun]

Originally Posted by *Kate*

LOL... it was inevitable...

[Kate!]

There will be the following adjustments to the poll at the end as well to be taken into consideration.

Sam's votes for Drew, Loukas and Pothuthic to be cancelled out as he voted for all 5 candidates and then decided his permitted TWO choices would be Jake and Jordan

Vanessa added a vote for Drew to her original one vote.

Kazanne added a vote for Loukas to her original one vote.

Shaun added a vote for Loukas to his original one vote.

Voting as it currently stands therefore is.....

Drew 1
Jake 15
Jordan 7
Loukas 8
Pothuthic 6

[Pete.]

Jordan being shaded in top 2

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by Petemitch

Jordan being shaded in top 2

Sorry what?

[Mitchell]

Good luck x

[Jordan.]

it's good to see none regulars like getitgotitgood, chuff and x-evenstar-x are following the game <3

[Shaun]

[Kate!]

[AnnieK]

[Natalie.]

[Mitchell]

Originally Posted by Jordan.

it's good to see none regulars like getitgotitgood, chuff and x-evenstar-x are following the game <3

I know Linda (Chuff) is following as I have spoken to her on Facebook about it throughout the series

[Vanessa]

Originally Posted by Pothuthic

I know Linda (Chuff) is following as I have spoken to her on Facebook about it throughout the series

She would make an amazing candidate.

[Mitchell]

Chuff would make a fantastic candidate, she is extremely good at putting her point across