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Old 13-03-2020, 05:50 AM #1
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....chapter 9 spoiler...


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...so is Roisin really the one true empress, what is her connection to the ancient Emperor, Andre...is she a descendant...and the power and significance of her dreams, which is something her mother also experienced, so this is a huge ‘bloodline’ chapter, Scarlett../...another great chapter......
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I meant to publish a new chapter last night but forgot to hit the button, its up now!

I didn't write a new chapter today though, I went back and tidied up some grammar and spelling errors in Wynd Academy
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....oh exciting, I’ll look forward to reading the chapter a bit later...(..when I’m fully awake..)....
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Ch. 4 spoilers
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Indeed, and Victoria isn't completely in the wrong in wanting vengance, Ariel did steal her life and identity, even if she had no awareness of her being captured
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...spoilers, chapters 5 and 6...

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...wow, so much to absorb again, you really do write skilfully in the layers that you build, Scarlett.....the alter of light and the powers it has given Rory and what is the fifteenth element...its power must surely be greater than the sword of light and surely defeat it..long live the Empress, hmmmmm...?....And Corporal Manners is an interesting new character, the story is building beautifully...(...and very exciting..)...
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...spoilers, chapters 5 and 6...

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...wow, so much to absorb again, you really do write skilfully in the layers that you build, Scarlett.....the alter of light and the powers it has given Rory and what is the fifteenth element...its power must surely be greater than the sword of light and surely defeat it..long live the Empress, hmmmmm...?....And Corporal Manners is an interesting new character, the story is building beautifully...(...and very exciting..)...
Ch. 5 & 6 spoilers
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Thank you! Someone on the site didn't seem to be happy that Roisin had gotten powers, and thought Rory was a bad villain because he's weird

I'm looking forward to revealing more as time goes on

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Indeed, I felt this chapter was a good time to expand on Atlas' story, while telling more of Roisin's past too, there's definitely more to tell about what happened after that night
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We're finding out more and more about the Luna bloodline as time goes on now
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...chapter 10 spoiler...

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...oh Lord, no time to rejoice the defeat of Rory...(..Lumina is darkness personified...)...but the Wynd Academy, is it doomed to the fate of the Snow White eyes..oh my Lord...
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...chapter 10 spoiler...

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...oh Lord, no time to rejoice the defeat of Rory...(..Lumina is darkness personified...)...but the Wynd Academy, is it doomed to the fate of the Snow White eyes..oh my Lord...
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...it’s been a strange few days and I haven’t done any reading but I’m going to try to catch up with this later, Scarlett... I’m looking forward to it.....
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...it’s been a strange few days and I haven’t done any reading but I’m going to try to catch up with this later, Scarlett... I’m looking forward to it.....
Indeed it has! I took a few days break from writing to recharge, real life stuff was making it harder to do!

(Didnt notice you'd replied btw!)
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I did posters for the four main characters!
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Began work on a map!
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Got quite a bit more done since the last post, I'm now on the fifth book!
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...oooooo exciting.....I’ll re-read the last chapter I read/chapter 10 and pick up from there...I’m looking forward to it, Scarlett...
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...I re-read chapter 10 and read chapters 11, 12, 13 and 14...


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...so Rory is still alive, that was a bit of a twist...plus they other’ is another bit of a plot twist, it must be someone we know but who..?...I love the characters, Scarlett...plus the battles of light and dark, it’s a really absorbing read and it’s lovely that I have quite a bit to catch up on.....
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I hope you enjoy it! The Luna Legacy seems like a while ago now
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I finished the maps a while back

Eastern Continent:
https://imgur.com/7Qd2Dwj

South Pole:
https://imgur.com/4A86Zms

and one in progress, the Western Continent:
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Eastern Continent:
https://imgur.com/7Qd2Dwj

South Pole:
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and one in progress, the Western Continent:
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These are gorgeous.
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Eastern Continent:
https://imgur.com/7Qd2Dwj

South Pole:
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and one in progress, the Western Continent:
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Updated Western Continent (still in progress)
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...ughhhh, your maps are absolutely gorgeous, Scarlett.......


...I’m hoping to start Legacy of Darkness later if I get any time and looking forward to it.....
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...I’m up to chapter 19 next and it really is a wonderful read... you’re very talented, Scarlett....those maps are fabulous also because they’re very much needed in fantasy worlds, to be able to get your bearings with distance and time etc...
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Thank you! I loved making them, it does help me plan things out better in my head
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