[Nicky.]

Something like this my lovelies?

[Sam]

Hmm it's quite hard to read the writing.

But I like the background. Maybe you could use the font you used for the "We don't play dirty" bit on the other banner.

[Nicky.]

[Sam]

I like it but you could always play around with different fonts, we have lots of time

Loukas is it ok if I start writing the pitch?

[Tom]

The website tagline definitely has to be on it (keeping an eye on reality tv) and maybe make tibb stand out by having those 4 letters a different colour

[Nicky.]

(GRRRR!)

Yes, I will try that now

Where shall I put

Keeping an eye on reality TV

[Loukas]

Originally posted by Snig
I like it but you could always play around with different fonts, we have lots of time

Loukas is it ok if I start writing the pitch?

Go for it sam.

[Loukas]

Sia and Tom can you please work on the blurb together and if it's ok with sam i can help him with the pitch

[Sam]

I tried something different for the pitch this time. It's a bit long, but its just some ideas.

I've been thinking of trying something new a lot lately.

Oh sorry. How are you? I'm fine. Let me introduce myself. I'm a teenager. I'm a huge television fan and I love nothing more than music. I like celebrity gossip and I love meeting new people. But life lately is just a tad bit boring. I don't know what to do anymore. Can you think of anything? A forum? I've never been on those before. Thisisbigbrother.com? Why is that different to any other forum?

Why? Oh. I know.

Because at TiBB, don't just talk about it, be in it.

TiBB is a forum like no other. People are very close and very kind. It's full of interesting people from Madonna fans to new Labour obsessives all the way to self confessed britney addicts. You can talk about music, you can talk about reality tv, but more important, at TiBB you can BE in the game.

Team Oinks has asked ourselves, WHY do we go on TiBB? And we came to that very conclusion that this forum is so interactive and gives you the chance to be in the discussion and be in many great games.

That's why we created a banner which screams "Don't just talk about it, Be in it". Big Brother fan or reality hater, you can come to this forum and just be yourself.

Who doesn't want to do just that? So James, in this task we've questioned why people would come to this forum and we've taking advantage of it.

If that doesn't bring crowds on new members, Nothing Will.

[Tom]

OK well if me & Sia write a blurb as well we can pick and choose which bit from all three

So you think its just another generic Big Brother fan forum? Well think again. TiBB has an obvious appeal, but that isn't the only talking point. Its a general entertainment forum. Speak about other reality TV shows, music and even sport. And unlike other websites, our friendly members have the chance to be the star in the forums very own exclusive versions of TV hits.

This Is Big Brother. Don't just watch it. Be in it.

General frame for now, need to add bits

[Nicky.]

Where shall I put

Keeping an eye on reality TV on the banner?

[Loukas]

Originally posted by Tom
OK well if me & Sia write a blurb as well we can pick and choose which bit from all three

So you think its just another generic Big Brother fan forum? Well think again. TiBB has an obvious appeal, but that isn't the only talking point. Its a general entertainment forum. Speak about other reality TV shows, music and even sport. And unlike other websites, our friendly members have the chance to be the star in the forums very own exclusive versions of TV hits.

This Is Big Brother. Don't just watch it. Be in it.

General frame for now, need to add bits

I really like that. Sounds great, i think you should also mention TiBB game shows and Soaps without sounding to... whats the word.. Childish?

[Loukas]

Originally posted by Nickyy
Where shall I put

Keeping an eye on reality TV on the banner?

Where ever you think it looks best, show us what you have done and we can see where to put it

[Tom]

Smaller and underneath it I think?

[Sam]

Tom what do you think of my pitch? I didn't know what really to say.

[Nicky.]

(Not animated it yet)



Like that? and it stays there the whole way through?

[Tom]

Originally posted by Snig
Tom what do you think of my pitch? I didn't know what really to say.

I like it, could do with a bit of tweaking (but so could mine) but the bones are there ...

[Nicky.]

[Sam]

Originally posted by Tom

I like it, could do with a bit of tweaking (but so could mine) but the bones are there ...

I was never good at creative writing.

We should try and send everything off tonight.

[SiaSiaSia]

sorry i went out last night i'll read this whole thread in a sec after my bath

[Tom]

So did I but I still contributed

[SiaSiaSia]

Originally posted by Nickyy
Something like this my lovelies?

I think it needs a font change and a bit bolder colours?
I quite like the background!

Originally posted by Nickyy

that's really good! but i think the colours are a bit dull? :S

Originally posted by DoubleTrouble
Sia and Tom can you please work on the blurb together and if it's ok with sam i can help him with the pitch

Of course What sort of things should it entail?

Originally posted by Snig
I tried something different for the pitch this time. It's a bit long, but its just some ideas.

TiBB is a forum like no other. People are very close and very kind. It's full of interesting people from Madonna fans to new Labour obsessives all the way to self confessed britney addicts. You can talk about music, you can talk about reality tv, but more important, at TiBB you can BE in the game.

Team Oinks has asked ourselves, WHY do we go on TiBB? And we came to that very conclusion that this forum is so interactive and gives you the chance to be in the discussion and be in many great games.

That's why we created a banner which screams "Don't just talk about it, Be in it". Big Brother fan or reality hater, you can come to this forum and just be yourself.

Who doesn't want to do just that? So James, in this task we've questioned why people would come to this forum and we've taking advantage of it.

If that doesn't bring crowds on new members, Nothing Will.

is this the blurb? If so can I edit it? There a few lines which need a bit of tweaking!

Originally posted by Tom
OK well if me & Sia write a blurb as well we can pick and choose which bit from all three

So you think its just another generic Big Brother fan forum? Well think again. TiBB has an obvious appeal, but that isn't the only talking point. Its a general entertainment forum. Speak about other reality TV shows, music and even sport. And unlike other websites, our friendly members have the chance to be the star in the forums very own exclusive versions of TV hits.

This Is Big Brother. Don't just watch it. Be in it.

General frame for now, need to add bits

Oh okay i'll do that now then?

Originally posted by DoubleTrouble

I really like that. Sounds great, i think you should also mention TiBB game shows and Soaps without sounding to... whats the word.. Childish?

i know what you mean!
I'll tryyy

[SiaSiaSia]

tweaked over Toms a bit, obv still needs work:

So you think it's just another generic Big Brother fan forum? Well think again: TiBB is more than that. Reality tv, films, music, sport or graphics? They're only a minority of the things which TiBB could offer you. Unlike other websites, the friendly members of this forum give everyone a chance to belong and take part in various competitions. [[insert end line here]]

[SiaSiaSia]

Edited version of Snig:


TiBB is a forum like no other: the people are very close and amiable. It's full of interesting mixes, from Madonna fans, New Labour Obsessives and self-confessed Britney addicts. You can talk about music, you can talk about reality television; but more important, at TiBB you can BE in the game.

Team Oinks has asked ourselves, why exactly do we go on to TiBB? The conclusion was that the forum is so interactive and gives you the chance to be in the discussion and be in many different games, be it from lynching werewolves, being in a clique, battling against the opposite sex or even being the mole.

As a consequence why we created a banner which screams "Don't just talk about it, Be in it". Whether you are a Big Brother fan or reality television hater, on this forum one can just be themselves, and who doesn't want to do that? So, James; in this task we've questioned why people would come to this forum and we've taking advantage of it to its maximum potential: If that doesn't bring crowds on new members, Nothing Will.






that's the first minor edit I still think it should be expanded and edited further. what do you think so far?

[Sam]

Originally posted by SiaSiaSia
Edited version of Snig:


TiBB is a forum like no other: the people are very close and amiable. It's full of interesting mixes, from Madonna fans, New Labour Obsessives and self-confessed Britney addicts. You can talk about music, you can talk about reality television; but more important, at TiBB you can BE in the game.

Team Oinks has asked ourselves, why exactly do we go on to TiBB? The conclusion was that the forum is so interactive and gives you the chance to be in the discussion and be in many different games, be it from lynching werewolves, being in a clique, battling against the opposite sex or even being the mole.

As a consequence why we created a banner which screams "Don't just talk about it, Be in it". Whether you are a Big Brother fan or reality television hater, on this forum one can just be themselves, and who doesn't want to do that? So, James; in this task we've questioned why people would come to this forum and we've taking advantage of it to its maximum potential: If that doesn't bring crowds on new members, Nothing Will.






that's the first minor edit I still think it should be expanded and edited further. what do you think so far?

Sounds great, i love it. Your creative tweaking is justamazing.

So that's the pitch... but I think the description needs to be a bit longer.