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Old 13-08-2009, 01:02 PM #1
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Default My Song (opinions appreciated)

I wasnt sure if this should have been in creative writing or not, so i put it here in musc. Anyway here goes:

Tremors

[electric guitar / electro-pop intro]

You abused my trust.
You are known for your lust.
I should have expected less,
to try avoid this mess.
I should have known better,
but im not gonna letcha
be the epicentre
of this catastrophe


[music build up]

*You make me tremor
but i cannot remember
was it my birthday, or mabe december?
Coz i wont protect you, If all i hear from you is;
Lies, Lies Lies; that i see in your eyes*

Permission denied, dont need you by my side,
so dont come come dare crawling back,
after all the times you lied
but i still cannot believe;
you stole from my heart


[music solo, followed by build up]

**You make me tremor
but i cannot remember
was it my birthday, or mabe december?
Coz i wont protect you, If all i hear from you is;
Lies, Lies Lies...
You make me tremor
but i cannot remember
was it in April or mabe november?
Coz i wont protect you, If all i hear from you is;
Lies, Lies Lies; that i see in your eyes**


[slow vocal] She took my soul and carved her three initials out,
Ohhhh, she didnt mess about,
She didnt take her time she was quick to
sew her name to mine;

[build up=] Just to rip it out, rip it out, rip it out
Oh rip it out!


**You make me tremor
but i cannot remember
was it my birthday, or mabe december?
Coz i wont protect you, If all i hear from you is;
Lies, Lies Lies...
You make me tremor
but i cannot remember
was it in April or mabe november?
Coz i wont protect you, If all i hear from you is;
Lies, Lies Lies; that i see in your eyes**


[snap out]





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