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Old 07-11-2020, 12:21 AM #476
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...just because I keep losing the link and searching to find the page it’s on...I’ll pop this here and keep carrying it forward each page...oooooops......

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/609861
...hello new page......
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... Varla/Trump...?...I love how you always draw parallels to real events, Scarlett...it makes your stories so easily relatable...Varla really does encompass ‘pure evil’ in her feelings that killing/taking human life and lives..?...is how she feels life and energy etc, breathed into her...there is nothing redeeming, not one thing...her evil is completely undiluted...
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...City of Duplicated Chaos...a city of Varla’s is the worst type of nightmare...how many times will they have to defeat her and how will they know that she’s been defeated....ughhhhh....(...how do we know, Scarlett...that Trump hasn’t done the same...?...how will we know when he’s actually gone ...dun, dun, dun....
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... atlas in her true form which reflects her soul...the form of evil...Lotte, though......
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Indeed, she's much more cunning than she has let on so far, she planned to push the people down to the point where they would fight back
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...so Dex has given Roisin full strength again, he’s returned her body to before her injuries and repairs etc..?...
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Indeed, each Crystalla has a power, such as Brannam's being able to walk the Dreamscape, Tristal can see time and Dex can heal wounds! Roisin is back to her old self!
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... Varla in her true form which reflects her soul...the form of evil...Lotte, though......
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Yep, though, this isn't the end of her story, or the book! There's more to come!

It's good to have Lotte back also, to note that Hubun's had for so long been oppressed by Humans, now two of them are city leaders
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...the song as well...perfectly chosen for those tears to fall, Scarlett ...</3...
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