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Old 12-11-2020, 05:47 AM #526
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...Roisin and Ruby, mother and daughter......how perfect as well, that you and Roisin now have the same birthday, Scarlett...that’s somehow just as it’s meant to be, eh.....it fits with the twin she is with Syl, but also with her creator..a very happy birthday to Roisin and a very joyful birthday to you, Scarlett...I hope that your day brings many lovely moments......
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Final chapter in Sanctuary II added!
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First chapter added to the new book! No prologue this time...
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...I’m going to think of our government as Varla... mainly fighting for themselves/their own self gain, not for the people......so genius to keep one drone and that will be her eternal companion...
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...I’m going to think of our government as Varla... mainly fighting for themselves/their own self gain, not for the people......so genius to keep one drone and that will be her eternal companion...
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Indeed, she always wanted her self as company so now she has it xD
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Where could she have gone?
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...NOoooooooooooo...not Roisin, she can’t die...
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...wow, an ending...OMg, the cliffhanger....and good to have Rychard’s death but Treleva live to hopefully meet his death in a final battle...so well written, Scarlett...such a blend of celebrations with the ominous world they’re living in......and leading perfectly to the next part of their journey...really perfectly ended with so much uncertainty..
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...wow, an ending...OMg, the cliffhanger....and good to have Rychard’s death but Treleva live to hopefully meet his death in a final battle...so well written, Scarlett...such a blend of celebrations with the ominous world they’re living in......and leading perfectly to the next part of their journey...really perfectly ended with so much uncertainty..
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Indeed! The final pieces are now in play! Who will survive the coming storm
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Indeed! The final pieces are now in play! Who will survive the coming storm
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...I’m going to have to take deep breaths to begin the final journey because I have such fears for Roisin...
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...I’m going to have to take deep breaths to begin the final journey because I have such fears for Roisin...
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Rory seems to be plotting to undermine her perhaps
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...and the dying, blood stained blossoms feels as though we’re going to say goodbye to some very loved characters in this book...it’s starting to have a feel of sadness...
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...and the dying, blood stained blossoms feels as though we’re going to say goodbye to some very loved characters in this book...it’s starting to have a feel of sadness...
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Indeed, it's not quite the all out war that everyone is used to.

I thought, instead of picking up the Crystalla of Fate plot where it was left off in Sanctuary I, I would pick it up as if the story had proceeded without us


I loved that cover, thought I'd do something special
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A very early teaser for what comes after The Crystalla Series
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...the image is truly stunning.....the dazzling of light...
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Thank you I'm still deciding on many things about it, but I have a rough idea now
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