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Old 30-12-2020, 02:20 PM #701
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Thank you! =D

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Indeed, Roisin has got the power, but does she know how to weild it yet?


I hope your Christmas was great too! I wanted to reply to the nice message you left on my profile page to say the same to you, but I couldnt xD
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Hmm, I think Ill go back to the latest chapter and spruce it up a bit, add a bit more detail
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I hope your Christmas was great too! I wanted to reply to the nice message you left on my profile page to say the same to you, but I couldnt xD
....oh sorry, I’ll fix that right now, Scarlett....
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I added a little bit more to the latest chapter

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More time and words exchanged between Roisin and Ruby
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...so emotion filled and beautiful.....Roisin really feels the loss of Ruby but she’s always there with her by her side...
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...so emotion filled and beautiful.....Roisin really feels the loss of Ruby but she’s always there with her by her side...
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...although the image is of two identicals battling with each other...in my head, it was a bit like the fight scene in the snow of O Ren Ishii/Kill Bill...
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...although the image is of two identicals battling with each other...in my head, it was a bit like the fight scene in the snow of O Ren Ishii/Kill Bill...
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...this is really difficult, isn’t it, Scarlett...because as you say, it was a very brutal and bloody battle with Hazel as Hazel had been inside Roisin in such a personal way...and so much is on Roisin anyway, but she also can’t become like her enemy, you know...she can’t lose herself to become anything that would betray the crystal power into more darkness...
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...this is really difficult, isn’t it, Scarlett...because as you say, it was a very brutal and bloody battle with Hazel as Hazel had been inside Roisin in such a personal way...and so much is on Roisin anyway, but she also can’t become like her enemy, you know...she can’t lose herself to become anything that would betray the crystal power into more darkness...
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I'm considering rewriting Infernus to not be sympathetic, having him turn away from villian isn't working

Edit: I made some alterations to the story, the 'Harvest' chapter is worth another look now as it has new developments!
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