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...we won’t worry because Clara is so going to show everyone that she holds the Crystalla power in her hands ...

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...it’s a bit like lockdown for Dawn with the restrictions on her life for her safety etc...

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... Clara......to be the child of Roisin and Dex and how that must make her feel at times, even though she adores them...such difficult shoes to fill, she’s feeling...but she doesn’t have to fill her parent’s shoes, she just has to find her own confidence and greatness and believe in herself....Clara and Dawn......but ‘promise me....no matter what..’ is not sounding hopeful......

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Indeed, she feels she has to live up to what everyone expects of her, because of her mother >.<

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Originally Posted by Scarlett.

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...I’m glad that Clara stood up to Aoba a bit about Lauren tripping her but she’s still very timid and lacking in self confidence, which is sad ...she’s the daughter of Roisin and Dex, who are so iconic and legendary, it would be nice to see her with complete confidence in who she is as a Luna...and also, as Noah said...she hangs out with a dragon......how cool is that...plus’s she has bunny ears........it’s funny because it wouldn’t be accurate as such to say that I don’t miss Roisin and Dex because I’ve grown to love them and their friends so much......but I guess because we know that they’re still there in the background and this is another generation’s story...this series has just comfortably slipped into place with the characters and feels like we’ve known them forever...well we actually have.....while at the same time, they’re fresh and new and so different....does that make sense...?...

[Scarlett.]

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...I’m glad that Clara stood up to Aoba a bit about Lauren tripping her but she’s still very timid and lacking in self confidence, which is sad ...she’s the daughter of Roisin and Dex, who are so iconic and legendary, it would be nice to see her with complete confidence in who she is as a Luna...and also, as Noah said...she hangs out with a dragon......how cool is that...plus’s she has bunny ears........it’s funny because it wouldn’t be accurate as such to say that I don’t miss Roisin and Dex because I’ve grown to love them and their friends so much......but I guess because we know that they’re still there in the background and this is another generation’s story...this series has just comfortably slipped into place with the characters and feels like we’ve known them forever...well we actually have.....while at the same time, they’re fresh and new and so different....does that make sense...?...

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It does I wanted to make Clara into a character who is both different from Roisin, but similar enough in other ways. Its also interesting writing characters like Aoba who have been around nearly as long as Roisin

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Originally Posted by Scarlett.

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...‘she’s one of ‘those things’ isn’t she’....pfffft...I hope that Ruby sneezes on him...

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...‘she’s one of ‘those things’ isn’t she’....pfffft...I hope that Ruby sneezes on him...

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Toasted Dewitt

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Originally Posted by Scarlett.

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...gorgeous graphics for this chapter, Scarlett......

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...it’s so difficult for Clara, I think...as much as she’s always loved and admired her mother, she much also feel that she’s had to share her maybe too much...?...and maybe she’s felt like it’s been a circle for her, she would have liked to spend more time with her mother to feel her guidance to help her become the ‘Luna’ she was and ‘in the image of her mother’...?...but then the time she would have spent with her, would surely have more made her feel that she was so far removed from being who her mother was...when Roisin would never, ever want her to be anything other than who she was and love their differences and she would know that Cara’s story and journey would discover her own strengths and they would be every bit as amazing as Roisin’s...what’s that expression...we are born as originals, don’t live a life as a copy...or some such thing, I can’t recall...anyway, it seemed to apply...

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Indeed, she is constantly being told to live up to her mother, but she isn't Roisin and never will be, she's Clara. Roisin and Dex have always told her as such but others try to force her to be like Roisin

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Originally Posted by Scarlett.

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...we knew that the relative calm wouldn’t last for too long......hmmmmmm, Hawke...

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...we knew that the relative calm wouldn’t last for too long......hmmmmmm, Hawke...

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Indeed, things have been set into motion :O

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....oooooo, who is the hooded figure...Noah.....it’s a great starting point to have the ‘mean girls’ type bullying storyline because it’s meant that we attach to Clara immediately, in the way we did with her mother...Lauren’s horrid...

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Indeed, Lauren is cruel, with Clara, since she has spent most of her life in one area, she has trouble picking up on some social cues, that would have saved her from ever getting to know Lauren

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Originally Posted by Scarlett.

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...Quand il pleut...?...

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...there is a lovely bond and understanding with Clara and Dawn, their family life and childhoods were completely different but they’re still both having similar feelings about their independence and finding themselves...Dawn has obviously never been able to trust anyone’s sincerity and honesty through her life in people just wanting to please her father so not knowing if any friendship was ever real...?...and Clara was so surrounded by love with her own parents and their friends, that she felt as though she lived in the shadow of who they all were and has struggled to feel as though she had ‘greatness’ herself...?...which she obviously does have but is still yet to find it within herself...but yeah, both feeling a weight of living in the shadow of their parents in completely different ways but still creating an understanding they can both relate to...

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Originally Posted by Scarlett.

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...Professor Hart......it’s nice learning about the different races living in their world, I didn’t know that Hubuns had two hearts, I don’t know if I missed that...

[Scarlett.]

Originally Posted by Ammi

...Quand il pleut...?...

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...there is a lovely bond and understanding with Clara and Dawn, their family life and childhoods were completely different but they’re still both having similar feelings about their independence and finding themselves...Dawn has obviously never been able to trust anyone’s sincerity and honesty through her life in people just wanting to please her father so not knowing if any friendship was ever real...?...and Clara was so surrounded by love with her own parents and their friends, that she felt as though she lived in the shadow of who they all were and has struggled to feel as though she had ‘greatness’ herself...?...which she obviously does have but is still yet to find it within herself...but yeah, both feeling a weight of living in the shadow of their parents in completely different ways but still creating an understanding they can both relate to...

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Indeed, in many ways they're the opposite of each other, but in other ways they're quite similar

[Scarlett.]

Originally Posted by Ammi

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...Professor Hart......it’s nice learning about the different races living in their world, I didn’t know that Hubuns had two hearts, I don’t know if I missed that...

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It's the first time that the races have been fully detailed, I wanted them to have more diversity between them, rather than just like, a human with different ears