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Scarlett.
09-11-2020, 04:48 PM
...the song as well...perfectly chosen for those tears to fall, Scarlett ...</3...

It's one my mother used to sing to me too :)

Ammi
09-11-2020, 04:52 PM
It's one my mother used to sing to me too :)

....awwwww, that personal value to you, makes it beyond perfect, Scarlett...:lovedup:...

Scarlett.
09-11-2020, 04:57 PM
....awwwww, that personal value to you, makes it beyond perfect, Scarlett...:lovedup:...

I did think it'd be weird to have the song in Crystalla, but I just thought it doesn't really matter xD

Ammi
09-11-2020, 07:20 PM
I did think it'd be weird to have the song in Crystalla, but I just thought it doesn't really matter xD

...it makes perfect sense to attach your own personal associations, Scarlett...not weird in any way at all, it makes that scene in the book feel all the more emotional and touching for the reader as well, to know that...:love:..

Scarlett.
09-11-2020, 07:51 PM
...it makes perfect sense to attach your own personal associations, Scarlett...not weird in any way at all, it makes that scene in the book feel all the more emotional and touching for the reader as well, to know that...:love:..

Good to hear :D

Scarlett.
10-11-2020, 12:17 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ema9db5XcAI1lD0?format=jpg&name=900x900

Scarlett.
10-11-2020, 01:00 AM
Another! :D
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmbGmA5XEAIuokz?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
10-11-2020, 07:51 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ema9db5XcAI1lD0?format=jpg&name=900x900

...Rainfall/..the title.. and the rain downpour at the funeral service just feel so completely right and fitting ... because such a downpour often brings a rainbow...?..and Amanda was indeed a mother/...a person of many colours in who she was...she was a multicoloured character...?...

Scarlett.
10-11-2020, 07:52 PM
...Rainfall/..the title.. and the rain downpour at the funeral service just feel so completely right and fitting ... because such a downpour often brings a rainbow...?..and Amanda was indeed a mother/...a person of many colours in who she was...she was a multicoloured character...?...

Indeed! Rainfall suits the funeral too, as it cleans away everything that was before. Also, follows on from Sunshine :)

Ammi
10-11-2020, 07:53 PM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/609861

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Ammi
10-11-2020, 08:00 PM
Another! :D
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmbGmA5XEAIuokz?format=jpg&name=small

...an ending and then a new beginning....Ashe and Ariel...:lovedup:...and Ruby as the ring carrier, adorable...:love:..

Ammi
10-11-2020, 08:01 PM
...Your title design graphics are gorgeous btw, Scarlett...:flutter:..

Scarlett.
10-11-2020, 08:51 PM
...an ending and then a new beginning....Ashe and Ariel...:lovedup:...and Ruby as the ring carrier, adorable...:love:..

I loved writing this chapter, thought it was important for the first wedding in the Crystalla Universe to be LGBT too :D

Scarlett.
10-11-2020, 08:52 PM
...Your title design graphics are gorgeous btw, Scarlett...:flutter:..

Thank you! The latest one is one of my all time favourites :D

Scarlett.
11-11-2020, 12:23 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmgInamWMAAH7VE?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
11-11-2020, 01:34 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmgYq_FXEAAnSod?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
11-11-2020, 07:25 AM
I loved writing this chapter, thought it was important for the first wedding in the Crystalla Universe to be LGBT too :D


....yeah, although there are obviously parallels, it’s a ‘new world’ as it were, without any history attached in the same way...it really is perfect to have that first official bonding of love, be Ariel and Ashe....and also for that new beginning ceremony to follow Amanda’s funeral..Those chapters flow beautifully...:love:...


Thank you! The latest one is one of my all time favourites :D

...:love:...

Scarlett.
11-11-2020, 04:10 PM
Indeed! The last few chapters of the book are less of an overarching story, and more of tying off some loose ends in Sanctuary :D

Scarlett.
12-11-2020, 03:58 AM
New chapter
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmmC60gXYAE5hKz?format=jpg&name=small

And.. it's actually my birthday today, but I didnt plan on this coinciding xD

Scarlett.
12-11-2020, 04:31 AM
And another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmmKyhsXcAAo56y?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
12-11-2020, 06:30 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmgInamWMAAH7VE?format=jpg&name=small

...just such a joyful chapter to have Ruby fly between friendships and friendships and conversation to conversation...and just feeling the vibe they’re all feeling right now in celebrating Ashe and Ariel’s love..:lovedup:...Ruby has to be the most adorable dragon ever..maybe some Crystalla merchandise and Ruby plush toys would be such a coveted thing...?...:love:...

Ammi
12-11-2020, 06:35 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmgYq_FXEAAnSod?format=jpg&name=small

...Aodhan...:lovedup:....a new world of inclusivity for every one of them...a truly perfect world...:love:...if only....

Scarlett.
12-11-2020, 06:43 AM
...just such a joyful chapter to have Ruby fly between friendships and friendships and conversation to conversation...and just feeling the vibe they’re all feeling right now in celebrating Ashe and Ariel’s love..:lovedup:...Ruby has to be the most adorable dragon ever..maybe some Crystalla merchandise and Ruby plush toys would be such a coveted thing...?...:love:...

I'd love a plush of little Ruby the Dragon :laugh:

This was a nice relaxed chapter to write :D

Ammi
12-11-2020, 06:45 AM
New chapter
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmmC60gXYAE5hKz?format=jpg&name=small

And.. it's actually my birthday today, but I didnt plan on this coinciding xD

...Roisin and Ruby, mother and daughter...:lovedup:...how perfect as well, that you and Roisin now have the same birthday, Scarlett...that’s somehow just as it’s meant to be, eh...:love:..it fits with the twin she is with Syl, but also with her creator..a very happy birthday to Roisin and a very joyful birthday to you, Scarlett...I hope that your day brings many lovely moments...:love:...

https://media.giphy.com/media/26Ff8ITF041HC5Ucw/giphy.gif

Scarlett.
12-11-2020, 06:45 AM
...Aodhan...:lovedup:....a new world of inclusivity for every one of them...a truly perfect world...:love:...if only....

Yep! It's the start of a new age for all of Crystalla! Old Ishtallian sounds very similar to Irish :laugh:

Scarlett.
12-11-2020, 06:47 AM
...Roisin and Ruby, mother and daughter...:lovedup:...how perfect as well, that you and Roisin now have the same birthday, Scarlett...that’s somehow just as it’s meant to be, eh...:love:..it fits with the twin she is with Syl, but also with her creator..a very happy birthday to Roisin and a very joyful birthday to you, Scarlett...I hope that your day brings many lovely moments...:love:...

https://media.giphy.com/media/26Ff8ITF041HC5Ucw/giphy.gif

Thank you! And I agree, it fits perfectly! This was another nice chapter to write, Ruby's got a good grasp on speaking now :D

Also, I love FFX-2 Yuna :D

Scarlett.
12-11-2020, 08:18 PM
The flag of Aodhan!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Empd5tfWEAA_80k?format=png&name=360x360

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 01:59 AM
Two more chapters!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmqnAlyWEAEkkUv?format=png&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmqxU2BXEAAeSFl?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 05:30 AM
Final chapter in Sanctuary II added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmrhfgWXUAEAH7s?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 06:04 AM
First chapter added to the new book! No prologue this time...
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/622658

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmrpriBXUAAxU57?format=png&name=900x900

Ammi
13-11-2020, 06:54 AM
And another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmmKyhsXcAAo56y?format=jpg&name=small

...I’m going to think of our government as Varla... mainly fighting for themselves/their own self gain, not for the people...:laugh:...so genius to keep one drone and that will be her eternal companion...

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 06:58 AM
...I’m going to think of our government as Varla... mainly fighting for themselves/their own self gain, not for the people...:laugh:...so genius to keep one drone and that will be her eternal companion...

Indeed, she always wanted her self as company so now she has it xD

Ammi
13-11-2020, 07:01 AM
Two more chapters!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmqnAlyWEAEkkUv?format=png&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmqxU2BXEAAeSFl?format=jpg&name=small

...Roisin...OMG...:sad:..

Ammi
13-11-2020, 07:01 AM
The flag of Aodhan!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Empd5tfWEAA_80k?format=png&name=360x360

...:lovedup:...beautiful...

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 07:04 AM
...Roisin...OMG...:sad:..

Where could she have gone? :o

Ammi
13-11-2020, 07:08 AM
Two more chapters!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmqnAlyWEAEkkUv?format=png&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmqxU2BXEAAeSFl?format=jpg&name=small

...NOoooooooooooo...not Roisin, she can’t die...

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 07:09 AM
...NOoooooooooooo...not Roisin, she can’t die...

Yus :sad:

Ammi
13-11-2020, 07:15 AM
Final chapter in Sanctuary II added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmrhfgWXUAEAH7s?format=jpg&name=small

...wow, an ending...OMg, the cliffhanger....and good to have Rychard’s death but Treleva live to hopefully meet his death in a final battle...so well written, Scarlett...such a blend of celebrations with the ominous world they’re living in...:love:...and leading perfectly to the next part of their journey...really perfectly ended with so much uncertainty..

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 07:19 AM
...wow, an ending...OMg, the cliffhanger....and good to have Rychard’s death but Treleva live to hopefully meet his death in a final battle...so well written, Scarlett...such a blend of celebrations with the ominous world they’re living in...:love:...and leading perfectly to the next part of their journey...really perfectly ended with so much uncertainty..

Indeed! The final pieces are now in play! Who will survive the coming storm D:

Ammi
13-11-2020, 07:25 AM
Indeed! The final pieces are now in play! Who will survive the coming storm D:

...I’m going to have to take deep breaths to begin the final journey because I have such fears for Roisin...

Scarlett.
13-11-2020, 07:27 AM
...I’m going to have to take deep breaths to begin the final journey because I have such fears for Roisin...

Rory seems to be plotting to undermine her perhaps :o

Scarlett.
14-11-2020, 03:59 AM
New chapter (with a slightly different graphic this time)
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmwWPUIXIAASune?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
15-11-2020, 06:27 AM
First chapter added to the new book! No prologue this time...
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/622658

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmrpriBXUAAxU57?format=png&name=900x900

...Roisin...:sad:...

Ammi
15-11-2020, 06:33 AM
New chapter (with a slightly different graphic this time)
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EmwWPUIXIAASune?format=jpg&name=small

...this cover is gorgeous...:lovedup:......and the dying, blood stained blossoms feels as though we’re going to say goodbye to some very loved characters in this book...it’s starting to have a feel of sadness...

Scarlett.
15-11-2020, 06:48 AM
...this cover is gorgeous...:lovedup:......and the dying, blood stained blossoms feels as though we’re going to say goodbye to some very loved characters in this book...it’s starting to have a feel of sadness...

Indeed, it's not quite the all out war that everyone is used to.

I thought, instead of picking up the Crystalla of Fate plot where it was left off in Sanctuary I, I would pick it up as if the story had proceeded without us :D

I loved that cover, thought I'd do something special :D

Scarlett.
15-11-2020, 06:49 AM
A very early teaser for what comes after The Crystalla Series
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em2GcHDXcAAqJHF?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
15-11-2020, 06:52 AM
...the image is truly stunning...:lovedup:..the dazzling of light...

Scarlett.
15-11-2020, 06:58 AM
Thank you :D I'm still deciding on many things about it, but I have a rough idea now :D

Scarlett.
15-11-2020, 07:27 AM
New chapter added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em2P2dnXUAEemFw?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
16-11-2020, 03:21 AM
Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em6g8kcXUAAL3NX?format=jpg&name=900x900

Scarlett.
16-11-2020, 06:12 AM
Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em7IcHoXEAImUDd?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
16-11-2020, 10:53 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/622658



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Ammi
16-11-2020, 10:59 AM
New chapter added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em2P2dnXUAEemFw?format=jpg&name=small

...Ruby, the child...and yet, the wise one...which can often be the way, as we know....Roisin has to learn to trust and to believe in the people she loves...

Ammi
16-11-2020, 11:14 AM
Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em6g8kcXUAAL3NX?format=jpg&name=900x900

Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em7IcHoXEAImUDd?format=jpg&name=small

...is this a new star...unifying two to become one...?...

Scarlett.
16-11-2020, 04:04 PM
...Ruby, the child...and yet, the wise one...which can often be the way, as we know....Roisin has to learn to trust and to believe in the people she loves...

Indeed! Trust will be vital for the trials ahead

Scarlett.
16-11-2020, 04:06 PM
...is this a new star...unifying two to become one...?...

Infernus is different from any of the villians so far, in that he carries no hate, aspirations or fears. He exists soley to carry out the will of his masters

Ammi
16-11-2020, 05:34 PM
Infernus is different from any of the villians so far, in that he carries no hate, aspirations or fears. He exists soley to carry out the will of his masters

...yeah, Infernus couldn’t really be more contrasting to Varla, which gives a completely different vibe to the early chapters...although Infernus is not there to ‘declare war’ or wage war or vengeance etc...they do hold a selection list of file names for elimination possibly..?....because the resistance has been carefully chosen...

Scarlett.
16-11-2020, 06:05 PM
...yeah, Infernus couldn’t really be more contrasting to Varla, which gives a completely different vibe to the early chapters...although Infernus is not there to ‘declare war’ or wage war or vengeance etc...they do hold a selection list of file names for elimination possibly..?....because the resistance has been carefully chosen...

Indeed, he's trying to instill the idea into the people of the world that everything is hopeless and that their time would be best spent making peace with the end, rather than fighting a pointless battle.

He also knows the names of those who would ignore this advice and fight against him to the bitter end

Scarlett.
17-11-2020, 05:54 AM
Didn't get any new chapters done tonight >.< I did make this though!

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em99xV7WMAg9B3o?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
17-11-2020, 04:46 PM
Didn't get any new chapters done tonight >.< I did make this though!

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Em99xV7WMAg9B3o?format=jpg&name=small

...:lovedup:...stunning...

Scarlett.
18-11-2020, 12:27 AM
Thank you! :D

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnEMe63XcAE8V9k?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
18-11-2020, 02:16 AM
Another chapter :D
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnElYbhXMAI5B1b?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
18-11-2020, 07:05 AM
Thank you! :D

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnEMe63XcAE8V9k?format=jpg&name=small

...kindness and repaying, I love the history and back story chapters, Scarlett...:love:...

Ammi
18-11-2020, 07:12 AM
Another chapter :D
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnElYbhXMAI5B1b?format=jpg&name=small

...oh, we’re really starting to understand the cruelty of Infernus as an enemy because their ‘soul’ has no emotion at all, it’s built on logic only...terrifying, even ‘hate’, like Varla, would have weakness...this is an ultimate enemy as logic has no weak points...

Scarlett.
18-11-2020, 02:32 PM
...kindness and repaying, I love the history and back story chapters, Scarlett...:love:...

Me too! I also enjoyed showing a bit more what Inchaya culture was like back then too. I messed up on the number, its more like 34 years ago than 20 :D

Scarlett.
18-11-2020, 02:36 PM
...oh, we’re really starting to understand the cruelty of Infernus as an enemy because their ‘soul’ has no emotion at all, it’s built on logic only...terrifying, even ‘hate’, like Varla, would have weakness...this is an ultimate enemy as logic has no weak points...

Indeed, he has no will of his own, and will execute his orders without emotion. He can't be reasoned with or talked down, only dealt with

Also, the world he spoke about... ;)

Scarlett.
19-11-2020, 02:00 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnJrc_-XEAYJ6gJ?format=jpg&name=900x900

Scarlett.
19-11-2020, 02:40 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnJ0kzAXUAED5l_?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
19-11-2020, 12:00 PM
Celebrating Wes!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnL0gDAXUAAWu09?format=jpg&name=medium

Ammi
20-11-2020, 07:25 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnJrc_-XEAYJ6gJ?format=jpg&name=900x900

...Roisin and Syl...:love:...I’m still hoping that she won’t die, that the power won’t kill her...

Ammi
20-11-2020, 07:32 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnJ0kzAXUAED5l_?format=jpg&name=small

...the lack of any emotion with Infernus is terrifying ...and ughhhhh, Rychard...

Ammi
20-11-2020, 07:33 AM
Celebrating Wes!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnL0gDAXUAAWu09?format=jpg&name=medium

...Wes..:love:...just how I would imagine Wes to be as well...

Scarlett.
20-11-2020, 02:50 PM
...Roisin and Syl...:love:...I’m still hoping that she won’t die, that the power won’t kill her...

It was good to do a full chapter between the two, explore their relationship more

Scarlett.
20-11-2020, 02:51 PM
...the lack of any emotion with Infernus is terrifying ...and ughhhhh, Rychard...

Indeed, he cannot be reasoned with or bargained with D:

Scarlett.
20-11-2020, 02:51 PM
...Wes..:love:...just how I would imagine Wes to be as well...

Indeed! Him and Anya have taken a backseat recently, I wanna fix that :D

Scarlett.
21-11-2020, 12:44 AM
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnTWl1ZWMAcHQqH?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!

Scarlett.
21-11-2020, 03:07 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnUNXYZXcAc67X8?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
21-11-2020, 07:02 AM
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnTWl1ZWMAcHQqH?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!

...again, another lovely chapter, Scarlett...so great to get to know Lotte and Atlas much more...:love:..

Ammi
21-11-2020, 07:11 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnUNXYZXcAc67X8?format=jpg&name=small

...Project Auxiliary Paradise is horrific... and that some are waking up.../...are awake through this barbaric process...their screams would unimaginable...

Scarlett.
21-11-2020, 07:23 AM
...again, another lovely chapter, Scarlett...so great to get to know Lotte and Atlas much more...:love:..

They're a great pairing :D

Scarlett.
21-11-2020, 07:23 AM
...Project Auxiliary Paradise is horrific... and that some are waking up.../...are awake through this barbaric process...their screams would unimaginable...

Indeed, all in pursuit of Rychard's dream of being a hero

Scarlett.
22-11-2020, 01:41 AM
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnZDwwIW4AYRYpl?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!

Scarlett.
22-11-2020, 04:11 AM
Another one!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnZl6ssXIAQSKOR?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
22-11-2020, 07:43 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/622658

Ammi
22-11-2020, 07:44 AM
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnZDwwIW4AYRYpl?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!

...that’s so incredibly sad...I know that it was the merciful thing to do but to actually do it....heartbreaking...

Ammi
22-11-2020, 07:48 AM
Another one!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnZl6ssXIAQSKOR?format=jpg&name=small

....totally gorgeous...:lovedup:..

Scarlett.
22-11-2020, 05:35 PM
...that’s so incredibly sad...I know that it was the merciful thing to do but to actually do it....heartbreaking...

Indeed, Rychard has a lot to awnser for

Scarlett.
22-11-2020, 05:36 PM
....totally gorgeous...:lovedup:..

A bit of light in the dark :D

Scarlett.
23-11-2020, 02:49 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Enec4aTW8AAwWnT?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
23-11-2020, 03:59 AM
and another :D
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnertwqWMAABAWO?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
23-11-2020, 04:08 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Enec4aTW8AAwWnT?format=jpg&name=small

...hmmmmm, it’s interesting that Infernus said he would kill Roisin slowly...which is surely quite an emotive thing ...and he’s not really convincing Syl either, with his lack of emotion...

Ammi
23-11-2020, 04:14 PM
and another :D
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnertwqWMAABAWO?format=jpg&name=small

...oh, so now that Roisin has channelled some of her powers into Seb, it might mean that she may survive..

Scarlett.
23-11-2020, 04:18 PM
...hmmmmm, it’s interesting that Infernus said he would kill Roisin slowly...which is surely quite an emotive thing ...and he’s not really convincing Syl either, with his lack of emotion...

Indeed, could he harbour emotions after all?

Scarlett.
23-11-2020, 04:19 PM
...oh, so now that Roisin has channelled some of her powers into Seb, it might meant that she may survive..

Perhaps! It remains to be seen though :o

Scarlett.
24-11-2020, 01:38 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnjVJ32XEAAti6N?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
24-11-2020, 02:20 AM
Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnjfzJjWEAAfdIJ?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
24-11-2020, 06:06 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnjVJ32XEAAti6N?format=jpg&name=small

...so Treleva/Trel Luna...I was going to say that the Crystal powers are all being transferred to Luna descendants...but the lightning crystal was already with a descendant in Treleva...

Ammi
24-11-2020, 06:12 AM
Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnjfzJjWEAAfdIJ?format=jpg&name=small

....ughhhh, Trel Luna gave way to the dark side and to revenge...and he’s now going to have to play his part in destroying Roisin....

Scarlett.
24-11-2020, 03:52 PM
...so Treleva/Trel Luna...I was going to say that the Crystal powers are all being transferred to Luna descendants...but the lightning crystal was already with a descendant in Treleva...

Indeed! The Crystal was thought previously lost as it was assumed Treleva had destroyed it

Also, Seb got lucky with his Crystalla power, he can shape shift using animal powers, and his passive Crystalla ability is the creation of new fauna for the world

Scarlett.
24-11-2020, 03:52 PM
....ughhhh, Trel Luna gave way to the dark side and to revenge...and he’s now going to have to play his part in destroying Roisin....

Indeed, his story is a story of lonliness and betrayal

Scarlett.
25-11-2020, 12:52 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnoVV0CWMAAV0_n?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
25-11-2020, 01:38 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Enof9gDW4AIliez?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
25-11-2020, 06:25 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/622658

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Ammi
25-11-2020, 06:32 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnoVV0CWMAAV0_n?format=jpg&name=small

...what will Ruby do without the treats...:laugh:...I honestly think that this is some kind of trick on ‘the abomination’...if they make her believe that there is no other way than to give her life...then she will give her life without question...?...she doesn’t have to give her life, she only has to believe that she does, so her resistance will be lowered....

Ammi
25-11-2020, 06:37 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Enof9gDW4AIliez?format=jpg&name=small

...okay, so Syl isn’t going to let her die, he isn’t going to allow it and that’s that of that...she’s going nowhere....

Scarlett.
25-11-2020, 07:17 AM
...what will Ruby do without the treats...:laugh:...I honestly think that this is some kind of trick on ‘the abomination’...if they make her believe that there is no other way than to give her life...then she will give her life without question...?...she doesn’t have to give her life, she only has to believe that she does, so her resistance will be lowered....

Indeed, the Senior Partners are quite under handed!

Scarlett.
25-11-2020, 07:18 AM
...okay, so Syl isn’t going to let her die, he isn’t going to allow it and that’s that of that...she’s going nowhere....

Indeed, a promise is a promise!

Scarlett.
26-11-2020, 12:34 AM
New chapter

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Enta6IdW4AIdzgB?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
26-11-2020, 04:18 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnuOKTXXcAMvivb?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
26-11-2020, 11:20 PM
Taken a break from writing today to make this! The map of Farenai!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnxpvHxXYAQWcQj?format=jpg&name=small

It's still incomplete though :D

Full size (https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnxpvHxXYAQWcQj?format=jpg&name=orig)

Ammi
27-11-2020, 07:03 AM
New chapter

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Enta6IdW4AIdzgB?format=jpg&name=small

...it feels as though the Luna’s are all gathering and somehow that’ll save Roisin....

Ammi
27-11-2020, 07:09 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnuOKTXXcAMvivb?format=jpg&name=small

....hmmm, so it doesn’t have to be Roisin but it does have to be a Luna ...and Aran looks a lot like Roisin as well....hmmmm...

Ammi
27-11-2020, 07:11 AM
Taken a break from writing today to make this! The map of Farenai!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnxpvHxXYAQWcQj?format=jpg&name=small

It's still incomplete though :D

Full size (https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EnxpvHxXYAQWcQj?format=jpg&name=orig)

...I love your maps, Scarlett...they really do help to get a bearing because it’s hard to visualise with fantasy worlds...and they’re just so beautifully presented as well...:lovedup:..

Scarlett.
27-11-2020, 07:17 AM
...it feels as though the Luna’s are all gathering and somehow that’ll save Roisin....

Possibly! She has a lot of people on her side :D

Scarlett.
27-11-2020, 07:19 AM
....hmmm, so it doesn’t have to be Roisin but it does have to be a Luna ...and Aran looks a lot like Roisin as well....hmmmm...

Indeed, but would Roisin let anyone else die to save her?

Scarlett.
27-11-2020, 07:19 AM
...I love your maps, Scarlett...they really do help to get a bearing because it’s hard to visualise with fantasy worlds...and they’re just so beautifully presented as well...:lovedup:..

I really enjoy making them too :D

Scarlett.
28-11-2020, 08:50 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/En5fjUwXUAE1NBQ?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
29-11-2020, 03:42 PM
Haven't written much these last few days due to my sleep pattern breaking, but I slept proper today so Im in the right frame of mind :D

Scarlett.
30-11-2020, 12:08 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoB6UCdXMAAJY8Q?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
30-11-2020, 11:28 PM
Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoG7rpbXMAcQFyQ?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
01-12-2020, 03:16 AM
Two more!

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoHpaToW4AArvUl?format=jpg&name=small
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoHu5DkXUAYLBiq?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
01-12-2020, 05:25 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoINjHbW8AMquGZ?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
01-12-2020, 06:23 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/En5fjUwXUAE1NBQ?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoB6UCdXMAAJY8Q?format=jpg&name=small

Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoG7rpbXMAcQFyQ?format=jpg&name=small

...just catching up a bit...

...wow, and hardly pausing for breath...Lotte is pretty awesome in kicking cyber wolf ass...:cool:...

Scarlett.
01-12-2020, 06:26 AM
...just catching up a bit...

...wow, and hardly pausing for breath...Lotte is pretty awesome in kicking cyber wolf ass...:cool:...

Indeed! I wanted to give more time to Atlas and Lotte :D I'm feeling at this point, this will be the longest book as there is a lot of ground to cover before the planned ending to this book xD

Ammi
01-12-2020, 06:32 AM
Indeed! I wanted to give more time to Atlas and Lotte :D I'm feeling at this point, this will be the longest book as there is a lot of ground to cover before the planned ending to this book xD

...I guess that’s the thing as well, that you’re led by the characters and the story they have to tell you...and it obviously wouldn’t come together so well if you didn’t allow them that and allow them their stories and their words etc...Lotte and Atlas are such likeable and interesting characters anyway...there are so many layers to them to explore, you know...

Scarlett.
01-12-2020, 06:43 AM
...I guess that’s the thing as well, that you’re led by the characters and the story they have to tell you...and it obviously wouldn’t come together so well if you didn’t allow them that and allow them their stories and their words etc...Lotte and Atlas are such likeable and interesting characters anyway...there are so many layers to them to explore, you know...

Indeed, it'll be interesting to see how they change as the final book comes nearer :D

Ammi
01-12-2020, 06:44 AM
Two more!

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoHpaToW4AArvUl?format=jpg&name=small
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoHu5DkXUAYLBiq?format=jpg&name=small

...oh I love how you’ve joined these two chapters, Scarlett...this is going to get so confusing as well if Rychard succeeds in a brain/memory transplant so that no one will be able to tell the clone from Roisin...and who else would he clone...

Scarlett.
01-12-2020, 06:49 AM
...oh I love how you’ve joined these two chapters, Scarlett...this is going to get so confusing as well if Rychard succeeds in a brain/memory transplant so that no one will be able to tell the clone from Roisin...and who else would he clone...

Indeed, he's twisted and will stop at nothing to be the hero, even if it means harming the people who are actually saving Crystalla

Scarlett.
02-12-2020, 06:40 AM
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoNoNoQXUAEZoFi?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!

Ammi
02-12-2020, 07:38 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/622658

Ammi
02-12-2020, 07:42 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoINjHbW8AMquGZ?format=jpg&name=small

...okay, so I know this is all a pretty horrendous situation with the clones etc...and how are they ever going to defeat evil when it’s not clear which ones are the evil and which are the originals etc...beyond awful and terrifying....but let’s take a moment, though...Atlas and Lotte..:lovedup:...

Ammi
02-12-2020, 07:47 AM
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoNoNoQXUAEZoFi?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!

...oh so as with Elyss, those that were taken to clone/the originals, are not dead, then...they could be brought to life to defeat their clones...?...

Scarlett.
02-12-2020, 07:59 AM
...okay, so I know this is all a pretty horrendous situation with the clones etc...and how are they ever going to defeat evil when it’s not clear which ones are the evil and which are the originals etc...beyond awful and terrifying....but let’s take a moment, though...Atlas and Lotte..:lovedup:...

They're the cutest :D

Scarlett.
02-12-2020, 08:00 AM
...oh so as with Elyss, those that were taken to clone/the originals, are not dead, then...they could be brought to life to defeat their clones...?...

Elyss has become the Crystalla of Lightning :D I was unsure about this as Elyss was only introduced in Wynd Academy Retold, but it is the proper version :D

Scarlett.
03-12-2020, 01:25 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoRpkzkWEAQ3Kq5?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
03-12-2020, 06:46 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoRpkzkWEAQ3Kq5?format=jpg&name=small

...I love the chapters when you go back to the foundations of bonds and friendships, Scarlett...:love:...and also go back to establish the roots of the big ass trees...:laugh:...

Ammi
03-12-2020, 06:47 AM
...that image is actually pretty gorgeous...:lovedup:..

Scarlett.
03-12-2020, 06:51 AM
...I love the chapters when you go back to the foundations of bonds and friendships, Scarlett...:love:...and also go back to establish the roots of the big ass trees...:laugh:...

They're honestly my favourite chapters to write, its nice establishing the bonds and showing more about the characters. It's fun to see who they were :D

Scarlett.
03-12-2020, 06:52 AM
...that image is actually pretty gorgeous...:lovedup:..

Indeed, it's so pretty :D also fits with Syl (Sylvar/Silver) :D

Ammi
03-12-2020, 06:57 AM
They're honestly my favourite chapters to write, its nice establishing the bonds and showing more about the characters. It's fun to see who they were :D

...yeah, when the threats and dangers weren’t there and they could just freely be themselves...it’s very much a reflection of COVID, I feel...which is what makes it so relatable as well and what fills those chapters so much in nostalgia, you know...it’s all so mirror like, which really does give so much thought and depth...:love:...

Scarlett.
03-12-2020, 06:59 AM
...yeah, when the threats and dangers weren’t there and they could just freely be themselves...it’s very much a reflection of COVID, I feel...which is what makes it so relatable as well and what fills those chapters so much in nostalgia, you know...it’s all so mirror like, which really does give so much thought and depth...:love:...

Indeed, they've been fighting for so long, coping for so long, they've forgotten what it was like to rest >.<

Ammi
03-12-2020, 07:09 AM
Indeed, they've been fighting for so long, coping for so long, they've forgotten what it was like to rest >.<

...and it’s so important that we see those ‘non fighting/non just coping people etc as well..that we see those halcyon days that build up and make whole people with other aspects of their characters.... and show the beginning of friendships also, to understand the strength of them....and also the commitments felt to protect, you know...

Scarlett.
03-12-2020, 05:16 PM
...and it’s so important that we see those ‘non fighting/non just coping people etc as well..that we see those halcyon days that build up and make whole people with other aspects of their characters.... and show the beginning of friendships also, to understand the strength of them....and also the commitments felt to protect, you know...

Yep! Hopefully there are times such a those to come in their futures too :D

Scarlett.
04-12-2020, 03:11 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoXLaT-XcAQTq0V?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
05-12-2020, 12:52 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eoby8KLW8AISJp8?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
05-12-2020, 04:34 AM
and another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EocoBA9XUAAdrZm?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
07-12-2020, 03:11 AM
Another :D
https://i.imgur.com/buq4Lx1l.jpg

Ammi
07-12-2020, 07:31 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EoXLaT-XcAQTq0V?format=jpg&name=small

...oh that was a curious chapter...who is the girl with the pink hair, she’s a keeper of a Crystalla...

Ammi
07-12-2020, 07:37 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eoby8KLW8AISJp8?format=jpg&name=small

...Gyda...and having an asexual race, is a lovely concept, Scarlett...:love:..

Ammi
07-12-2020, 07:41 AM
and another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EocoBA9XUAAdrZm?format=jpg&name=small

...oh so learning more about the elders and ancestry of the Luna’s is really interesting...and Roisin, the rose...

Ammi
07-12-2020, 07:44 AM
Another :D
https://i.imgur.com/buq4Lx1l.jpg

...it feels as though, when the Crystalla powers are released...they attach themselves to the character of the one releasing them...so they’ll take on differing forms because they take on so much of the person...

Scarlett.
07-12-2020, 08:20 AM
...oh that was a curious chapter...who is the girl with the pink hair, she’s a keeper of a Crystalla...

Indeed! :D

Scarlett.
07-12-2020, 08:21 AM
...Gyda...and having an asexual race, is a lovely concept, Scarlett...:love:..

Indeed! I thought it was time the Lacermen were seen a little more, and an explaination for why they were so rare :D

Scarlett.
07-12-2020, 08:22 AM
...oh so learning more about the elders and ancestry of the Luna’s is really interesting...and Roisin, the rose...

Indeed, they have a bit of Hubun DNA, from their long forgotten past :D

Scarlett.
07-12-2020, 08:23 AM
...it feels as though, when the Crystalla powers are released...they attach themselves to the character of the one releasing them...so they’ll take on differing forms because they take on so much of the person...

Yep, they are the people they used to be, with a sprinkling of whoever brought them back :D

Scarlett.
08-12-2020, 06:20 AM
My sleep pattern is a bit hecked atm, so not managed to do a new chapter D;

Ammi
08-12-2020, 07:16 AM
...it’s just too much stress and pressure on yourself to focus on your sleeping pattern and your writing, Scarlett...and one of those things will naturally find the other, anyway...focus on you because that’s what that wrecked pattern is trying to tell you...that you need time and attention for yourself and just to free your thoughts completely ....and the writing will come when it’s ready to come...and that’s fine because the most important thing is you and your story is there just resting...and hopefully you’ll be able to follow that lead...:hug:..

Scarlett.
08-12-2020, 07:46 AM
Indeed! I imagine it'll only be a day or so before I sort it. Probably good to take a day or two's break so I can go in refocused :D

Ammi
08-12-2020, 07:53 AM
...take as much time as your sleeping pattern tells you to, Scarlett...give it time to right itself and don’t rush it or force it...just chill and play video games etc and don’t try to focus your thoughts on anything...the story is there and isn’t going anywhere and will only get better in refreshing and resting your head, yeah...so much to think about this time of year anyway, which just adds layers of fuzz which will clear in time as well...:hug:..

Scarlett.
08-12-2020, 07:55 AM
That's true! I do have plenty of idea, its just getting them down on paper when I'm tired that's hard xD

Ammi
08-12-2020, 08:17 AM
That's true! I do have plenty of idea, its just getting them down on paper when I'm tired that's hard xD

...don’t try to get them down, Scarlett...if it’s hard to do then it means that now isn’t the time...but that it’s the time to give attention to your tiredness instead...we have to look at the layer that needs the most attention when it needs it because otherwise the story will become more and more difficult to come...it’ll only get better in having that rest because then that story gets the best of you as well...and you write with love and pleasure, it shouldn’t add to your exhaustion ...just let that exhaustion lead you for the moment and give it as long as is needed to feel rested, yeah...:hug:..

Scarlett.
08-12-2020, 08:32 AM
...don’t try to get them down, Scarlett...if it’s hard to do then it means that now isn’t the time...but that it’s the time to give attention to your tiredness instead...we have to look at the layer that needs the most attention when it needs it because otherwise the story will become more and more difficult to come...it’ll only get better in having that rest because then that story gets the best of you as well...and you write with love and pleasure, it shouldn’t add to your exhaustion ...just let that exhaustion lead you for the moment and give it as long as is needed to feel rested, yeah...:hug:..

Yep! When I'm tired I sometimes end up writing huge tangets in the story too, which just confuse the plot xD

Scarlett.
10-12-2020, 08:13 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eo3KPbWXEAAEaUt?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
11-12-2020, 10:11 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eo_TM4SW4AAaBjf?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
13-12-2020, 06:22 AM
Another new chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpGNbm5XUAAxVNt?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
14-12-2020, 02:26 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKeBItXMAAfxk2?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
14-12-2020, 04:38 AM
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKkLI5WEAEPHap?format=jpg&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKrMbBWMAAG-bB?format=jpg&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKwwLKXEAIAdZE?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
14-12-2020, 04:39 AM
The final book begins!
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/639257

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpK_UL8XYAAyA7L?format=png&name=900x900

Ammi
14-12-2020, 06:20 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eo3KPbWXEAAEaUt?format=jpg&name=small

....ughhhhh, I fear for Wes with Hazel...

Scarlett.
14-12-2020, 06:23 AM
....ughhhhh, I fear for Wes with Hazel...

Indeed, she's an unpredictable wildcard...

Ammi
14-12-2020, 06:24 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eo_TM4SW4AAaBjf?format=jpg&name=small

...I love these chapters which pause to catch up with friendships a bit...and I love Roisin and Ruby...:lovedup:..

Scarlett.
14-12-2020, 06:27 AM
...I love these chapters which pause to catch up with friendships a bit...and I love Roisin and Ruby...:lovedup:..

They're the best! It's nice to have Logan back at last too!

Ammi
14-12-2020, 06:31 AM
Another new chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpGNbm5XUAAxVNt?format=jpg&name=small

...and then then this chapter with the closeness of their relationship revisited...facing the possibility of the loss of Roisin, will it be inevitable...:sad:..

Scarlett.
14-12-2020, 06:32 AM
...and then then this chapter with the closeness of their relationship revisited...facing the possibility of the loss of Roisin, will it be inevitable...:sad:..

Yus, Dex finally has someone to chat about to about what it is like to be a Crystalla

Scarlett.
15-12-2020, 02:41 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpPt-b_XUAA6Yk3?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
15-12-2020, 06:49 AM
Another!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKeBItXMAAfxk2?format=jpg&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKkLI5WEAEPHap?format=jpg&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKrMbBWMAAG-bB?format=jpg&name=small

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpKwwLKXEAIAdZE?format=jpg&name=small


...oh my God, I just so didn’t expect that ending...Sylvaria...:love:..:sad:...no greater family love...?...red, white and black rose are just perfectly written, Scarlett...just so emotional and beautiful and the perfect ending to the book, I loved it and love that you share your beautiful writing...thank you...:lovedup:....

Ammi
15-12-2020, 06:51 AM
...I’ll settle my heart a bit and then start the final book ..:love:...this is such an emotional journey...

Scarlett.
15-12-2020, 07:22 AM
...oh my God, I just so didn’t expect that ending...Sylvaria...:love:..:sad:...no greater family love...?...red, white and black rose are just perfectly written, Scarlett...just so emotional and beautiful and the perfect ending to the book, I loved it and love that you share your beautiful writing...thank you...:lovedup:....

I'm glad you liked it! Syl got his name from one heck of an uncle!

Scarlett.
15-12-2020, 07:23 AM
...I’ll settle my heart a bit and then start the final book ..:love:...this is such an emotional journey...

I'll try and get more out before you start =D

Scarlett.
16-12-2020, 05:52 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpVjO7WWEAEyYme?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
16-12-2020, 06:16 AM
The final book begins!
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/639257

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpK_UL8XYAAyA7L?format=png&name=900x900

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpPt-b_XUAA6Yk3?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpVjO7WWEAEyYme?format=jpg&name=small


....ughhhhh, what a mess...poor Atlas, poor Roisin, poor Syl...poor all of them...:sad:...in the same way that Atlas can’t lose Roisin, she can’t lose him either...

Scarlett.
16-12-2020, 07:15 AM
....ughhhhh, what a mess...poor Atlas, poor Roisin, poor Syl...poor all of them...:sad:...in the same way that Atlas can’t lose Roisin, she can’t lose him either...

Indeed, the secret has blown the family apart, but with the end coming, will they be ready?

Scarlett.
17-12-2020, 04:06 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpaUtGIW4AE1aLU?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
18-12-2020, 04:56 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpfptWMXMAElF-B?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
20-12-2020, 02:31 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpsAc8RWwAIwfyK?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
22-12-2020, 07:02 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpaUtGIW4AE1aLU?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpfptWMXMAElF-B?format=jpg&name=small

...oh, I just had to take a pause to say...the Life Crystal...:amazed:...so, maybe some hope for Roisin with the power of the Crystal saving her and giving her life...

Ammi
22-12-2020, 07:04 AM
...oh I think that I misquoted the chapters there, Scarlett...The Fate of the Lion Prince is the next chapter for me...

Ammi
22-12-2020, 07:07 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EpsAc8RWwAIwfyK?format=jpg&name=small

...okay, up to date now and another excellent chapter...:love:..

Scarlett.
22-12-2020, 07:51 AM
...oh, I just had to take a pause to say...the Life Crystal...:amazed:...so, maybe some hope for Roisin with the power of the Crystal saving her and giving her life...

Indeed! Let's just hope she gets there in time!

Scarlett.
22-12-2020, 02:45 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ep2XGZkXUAcsaUZ?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
23-12-2020, 05:42 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ep2XGZkXUAcsaUZ?format=jpg&name=small

...this is so clever, Scarlett...and so tense...will Hazel get to the Crystal first and take the life power from Roisin...

Scarlett.
23-12-2020, 05:44 AM
...this is so clever, Scarlett...and so tense...will Hazel get to the Crystal first and take the life power from Roisin...

Indeed! With only 70 hours left, there is no time to waste!

Scarlett.
24-12-2020, 04:57 AM
With it being Christmas, chapters might get a little more spaced out :D

Ammi
24-12-2020, 06:49 AM
With it being Christmas, chapters might get a little more spaced out :D

...you and your loved ones have the most wonderful Christmas that these crazy times allow, Scarlett...:love:...

Scarlett.
24-12-2020, 07:06 AM
and you too, Ammi!
I may do a new map over Christmas :D

Scarlett.
27-12-2020, 05:38 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EqQugN5WMAE4xkA?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
30-12-2020, 02:53 PM
Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EqflcKwWMAEbrBs?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
30-12-2020, 03:07 PM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/639257

Ammi
30-12-2020, 03:11 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EqQugN5WMAE4xkA?format=jpg&name=small

Another chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EqflcKwWMAEbrBs?format=jpg&name=small

..I hope that your Christmas with your loved ones was really special, Scarlett...:love:


...so incredibly sad for Roisin and Ruby to say goodbye to each other again...:sad:...now Roisin has the Crystal, though...:love:...will this be the end of Hazel...

Ammi
30-12-2020, 03:13 PM
...I love those last two images, Scarlett...you’re so fabulous with graphics/design...:love:...

Scarlett.
30-12-2020, 03:20 PM
Thank you! =D

Indeed, Roisin has got the power, but does she know how to weild it yet?

I hope your Christmas was great too! I wanted to reply to the nice message you left on my profile page to say the same to you, but I couldnt xD

Scarlett.
30-12-2020, 08:34 PM
Hmm, I think Ill go back to the latest chapter and spruce it up a bit, add a bit more detail

Ammi
31-12-2020, 06:40 AM
Thank you! =D

Indeed, Roisin has got the power, but does she know how to weild it yet?

I hope your Christmas was great too! I wanted to reply to the nice message you left on my profile page to say the same to you, but I couldnt xD

....oh sorry, I’ll fix that right now, Scarlett....

Scarlett.
31-12-2020, 05:33 PM
I added a little bit more to the latest chapter

More time and words exchanged between Roisin and Ruby

Ammi
01-01-2021, 07:01 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/639257

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Ammi
01-01-2021, 07:01 AM
I added a little bit more to the latest chapter

More time and words exchanged between Roisin and Ruby

...so emotion filled and beautiful...:lovedup:..Roisin really feels the loss of Ruby but she’s always there with her by her side...

Scarlett.
01-01-2021, 02:09 PM
...so emotion filled and beautiful...:lovedup:..Roisin really feels the loss of Ruby but she’s always there with her by her side...

Indeed! :D

Scarlett.
02-01-2021, 03:33 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EqsmvyKXEAApRIe?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
02-01-2021, 05:00 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EqsmvyKXEAApRIe?format=jpg&name=small

...although the image is of two identicals battling with each other...in my head, it was a bit like the fight scene in the snow of O Ren Ishii/Kill Bill...

Scarlett.
02-01-2021, 01:20 PM
...although the image is of two identicals battling with each other...in my head, it was a bit like the fight scene in the snow of O Ren Ishii/Kill Bill...

Indeed! Also, unlike most fights in this series, this was bloody and brutal D:

Scarlett.
04-01-2021, 03:02 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eq2x772WMAIX1Qj?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
04-01-2021, 07:15 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eq2x772WMAIX1Qj?format=jpg&name=small

...this is really difficult, isn’t it, Scarlett...because as you say, it was a very brutal and bloody battle with Hazel as Hazel had been inside Roisin in such a personal way...and so much is on Roisin anyway, but she also can’t become like her enemy, you know...she can’t lose herself to become anything that would betray the crystal power into more darkness...

Scarlett.
04-01-2021, 02:39 PM
...this is really difficult, isn’t it, Scarlett...because as you say, it was a very brutal and bloody battle with Hazel as Hazel had been inside Roisin in such a personal way...and so much is on Roisin anyway, but she also can’t become like her enemy, you know...she can’t lose herself to become anything that would betray the crystal power into more darkness...

Indeed, she's dealt with so much since the first book, that it is really starting to take its toll on her

Scarlett.
06-01-2021, 04:00 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErBS2wuXMAEd8LH?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
06-01-2021, 08:00 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErBS2wuXMAEd8LH?format=jpg&name=small

...what the heck does Rychard have, that’s very ominous...ughhh, he’s horrid...

Scarlett.
06-01-2021, 03:49 PM
Indeed, lets just hope he uses it against the right target

Scarlett.
09-01-2021, 07:55 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErRllRgWMAASnpz?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
10-01-2021, 06:08 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErRllRgWMAASnpz?format=jpg&name=small

...GIANT....SPIDERS....Oh....

Scarlett.
10-01-2021, 06:44 AM
...GIANT....SPIDERS....Oh....

Scary! D:

Scarlett.
12-01-2021, 04:34 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErgUQD5XMAQwjms?format=jpg&name=small

Scarlett.
14-01-2021, 02:12 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErqHNeUXMAEICK3?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
14-01-2021, 09:00 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErgUQD5XMAQwjms?format=jpg&name=small

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErqHNeUXMAEICK3?format=jpg&name=small

...OMG, Hades/Satan...it really does feel as though Roisin may not survive this, even with the Crystal power...

Scarlett.
14-01-2021, 06:35 PM
Indeed, the Old Ones are far more powerful than anything they've encountered

Scarlett.
14-01-2021, 08:28 PM
I'm considering rewriting Infernus to not be sympathetic, having him turn away from villian isn't working

Edit: I made some alterations to the story, the 'Harvest' chapter is worth another look now as it has new developments!

Scarlett.
15-01-2021, 07:42 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErwcQ3dXMAM8HWA?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
15-01-2021, 08:28 AM
...I’m so on the drag this morning, Scarlett...but I’ll catch up with your rewrite of Harvest and the new chapter either later today or tomorrow morning...:love:...I’m glad that you rewrote some if it wasn’t feeling right to you and not telling how you wanted it to...(...it always fits perfectly for me but you’re obviously the hand that will guide it to perfection..)....

Scarlett.
15-01-2021, 08:48 AM
Hope you enjoy when you're able to read them!

Ammi
15-01-2021, 05:01 PM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/639257

Ammi
15-01-2021, 05:11 PM
...the changes with Harvest....


....wow, the changes really do work, Scarlett...it really is conveying ‘evil’, pure evil because all emotion is stripped away and that’s what it has to be, for Roisin...the complete opposite of her....?...the power of the crystals will be hers through the power of her emotions and their battle will be against a complete lack of any mercy whatsoever...?...’Tartarus’ is a spectacular name...

Ammi
15-01-2021, 05:32 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ErwcQ3dXMAM8HWA?format=jpg&name=small

....hmmm, so I’m confused...it’s obviously not real but what meaning, though...is Jasmine an indication of the future and that those three survive...

Scarlett.
15-01-2021, 06:46 PM
...the changes with Harvest....


....wow, the changes really do work, Scarlett...it really is conveying ‘evil’, pure evil because all emotion is stripped away and that’s what it has to be, for Roisin...the complete opposite of her....?...the power of the crystals will be hers through the power of her emotions and their battle will be against a complete lack of any mercy whatsoever...?...’Tartarus’ is a spectacular name...

Indeed, Tartarus is the Greek name for a deep underground demonic dungeon! I love the name

Scarlett.
15-01-2021, 06:47 PM
....hmmm, so I’m confused...it’s obviously not real but what meaning, though...is Jasmine an indication of the future and that those three survive...

Or is it a means of keeping them surpressed D:

Scarlett.
16-01-2021, 03:42 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Er0u5PXXAAIN9wh?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
16-01-2021, 07:18 AM
Or is it a means of keeping them surpressed D:

...oh I didn’t think of that.../...so sinister and yeah, that would be the perfect way to control...

Ammi
16-01-2021, 07:25 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Er0u5PXXAAIN9wh?format=jpg&name=small

...oh, you were right, then ...they are being controlled ...jeez it’s as if you were writing it, Scarlett..so it’s the dream controlling crystal and it’s not controlling Ruby, though, I hope that she can somehow get through to their memories.../lead them to the memory crystal...?...

Scarlett.
16-01-2021, 08:51 AM
...oh, you were right, then ...they are being controlled ...jeez it’s as if you were writing it, Scarlett..so it’s the dream controlling crystal and it’s not controlling Ruby, though, I hope that she can somehow get through to their memories.../lead them to the memory crystal...?...

Indeed! At least she has the assistance of Brannam now!

Scarlett.
18-01-2021, 06:29 AM
New chapter added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Er_oTPXXYAgXlpZ?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
18-01-2021, 04:35 PM
New chapter added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Er_oTPXXYAgXlpZ?format=jpg&name=small

...I.think that the controlling of dreams is probably one of the most terrifying of the powers in terms of how controlling it is ...

Scarlett.
18-01-2021, 04:39 PM
...I.think that the controlling of dreams is probably one of the most terrifying of the powers in terms of how controlling it is ...

Indeed, its as if they control reality itself D:

Scarlett.
21-01-2021, 03:31 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EsOcbq5W8AAuBZL?format=jpg&name=small

arista
21-01-2021, 03:44 AM
Is that Stolen from a Marvel Film?

Scarlett.
21-01-2021, 04:01 AM
Is that Stolen from a Marvel Film?

Nope, its a poster using a stock image :p

I believe this is what your were thinking of xD
https://comicvine1.cbsistatic.com/uploads/original/11112/111127507/5258768-1799003475-ec4e6.png

arista
21-01-2021, 04:14 AM
Yes that's One.


Cheers

Ammi
23-01-2021, 07:04 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EsOcbq5W8AAuBZL?format=jpg&name=small

...this is actually really fascinating because Ruby is obviously concerned and fears that Roisin will prefer her dream daughter of Jasmine and will want to stay within that dream to spend her time with Jasmine...but I do think that Roisin’s love for Jasmine and her need for her in her life, will be what will break the dream and break the control over Roisin atm...but it creates great interest...

Scarlett.
23-01-2021, 10:44 AM
...this is actually really fascinating because Ruby is obviously concerned and fears that Roisin will prefer her dream daughter of Jasmine and will want to stay within that dream to spend her time with Jasmine...but I do think that Roisin’s love for Jasmine and her need for her in her life, will be what will break the dream and break the control over Roisin atm...but it creates great interest...

Indeed, she needs the time to heal, but at the same time, she can't rest yet :(

Scarlett.
26-01-2021, 02:03 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Esqc5z2XAAA709l?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
27-01-2021, 08:16 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Esqc5z2XAAA709l?format=jpg&name=small

...OMG, Yay...not only that the dream spell was broken but also, that Roisin’s love for Ruby as her daughter was the thing that broke it ...Ruby was ‘the dream’ that Roisin most wanted to be real and obviously it was real...:lovedup:...I love that chapter...:laugh:...

Scarlett.
27-01-2021, 01:33 PM
...OMG, Yay...not only that the dream spell was broken but also, that Roisin’s love for Ruby as her daughter was the thing that broke it ...Ruby was ‘the dream’ that Roisin most wanted to be real and obviously it was real...:lovedup:...I love that chapter...:laugh:...

Indeed! Now it's time for Keegan to be freed!

Scarlett.
29-01-2021, 04:12 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Es3yf5yW8AIzbR4?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
29-01-2021, 01:24 PM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Es3yf5yW8AIzbR4?format=jpg&name=small

...Evermore and Nevermore, two perfectly linked chapters...Roisin and Keegan...:lovedup:...defeating their pasts to move forward to their futures...