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Scarlett.
29-01-2021, 06:15 PM
...Evermore and Nevermore, two perfect cult linked chapters...Roisin and Keegan...:lovedup:...defeating their pasts to move forward to their futures...

Indeed! Now they're ready to face the future!

Ammi
29-01-2021, 06:42 PM
Indeed! Now they're ready to face the future!

...that wasn’t meant to say perfect cult, it was meant to say perfectly linked ...:laugh:...this iPad keyboard is truly evil....

Scarlett.
29-01-2021, 08:19 PM
...that wasn’t meant to say perfect cult, it was meant to say perfectly linked ...:laugh:...this iPad keyboard is truly evil....

Haha, that makes more sense :D

Scarlett.
01-02-2021, 11:07 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
01-02-2021, 01:33 PM
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Ammi
01-02-2021, 01:38 PM
New chapter!
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...that’s such an interesting way to ponder it, Scarlett...to ‘stay within the dream’ and be controlled by the dream ...?...but if it was a ‘kind dream/a good dream’ where none of the people you loved ever died...obviously that wouldn’t be reality but it’s an interesting concept..?.... maybe you’d never have to feel the loss of anyone you loved...

Scarlett.
01-02-2021, 02:16 PM
...that’s such an interesting way to ponder it, Scarlett...to ‘stay within the dream’ and be controlled by the dream ...?...but if it was a ‘kind dream/a good dream’ where none of the people you loved ever died...obviously that wouldn’t be reality but it’s an interesting concept..?.... maybe you’d never have to feel the loss of anyone you loved...

Indeed, it'd be a nice place to visit, but I think to live in a world like that would end up driving you mad

Ammi
01-02-2021, 02:31 PM
Indeed, it'd be a nice place to visit, but I think to live in a world like that would end up driving you mad

...yeah, we often use ‘perfect world’/type expressions as an ideal associate... but in reality..?...it’s ‘imperfection’ that defines our human... and so creates the environment that human often thrives in and finds that ‘meaning of life/self purpose’ in, I feel......

Scarlett.
01-02-2021, 02:57 PM
...yeah, we often use ‘perfect world’/type expressions as an ideal associate... but in reality..?...it’s ‘imperfection’ that defines our human... and so creates the environment that human often thrives in and finds that ‘meaning of life/self purpose’ in, I feel......

Indeed, I believe that a Utopia where everything is perfect would very quickly slide into being a dystopia

Scarlett.
09-02-2021, 01:10 AM
New chapter (at last!)
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Ammi
09-02-2021, 10:08 AM
New chapter (at last!)
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...so that was worth the wait...:love:...


...you’ve written the anticipation for that final day beautifully, Scarlett...:love:...as always, you leave us completely not knowing who will survive and who won’t and will any of our friends and heroes...?..I hope so but Ughhhh I fear so much as well...One of the things that I was drawn to is obviously the Crystalla of Dark and Light and how they won’t appear how we would expect them to....such mystery, I’m excited to read on....

Scarlett.
09-02-2021, 10:51 AM
Indeed, we're into the final stretch now!

Scarlett.
09-02-2021, 04:24 PM
New chapter!
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Ammi
10-02-2021, 07:54 AM
New chapter!
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...I’d forgotten about Varla and thought uggggghhhhh...and the elevator hit her and killed her...?...that was like watching it play out in a movie and how sudden/shocking/unexpected it was ...no big build up of fight etc....?...which she didn’t deserve anyway, she deserved to just be hit by the elevator...:laugh:...karma....

Scarlett.
11-02-2021, 12:13 AM
Yep! I thought it would be a perfect way to end her character, since she'd undoubtedly use the chaos to try to escape xD

New chapter!
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Scarlett.
12-02-2021, 12:19 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
12-02-2021, 10:56 AM
Yep! I thought it would be a perfect way to end her character, since she'd undoubtedly use the chaos to try to escape xD

New chapter!
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...there’s a sentence/phrase that really stands out, Scarlett in how it associates with our world atm and the pandemic losses of life V the country economy...’nations can be rebuilt so long as people survive”...and that’s so true and how I’ve personally always felt...there will be no economy anyway without life, life is always first...great chapter..:love:...

Scarlett.
12-02-2021, 12:30 PM
Agreed, people before anything :D

Scarlett.
12-02-2021, 11:29 PM
New chapter!
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Ammi
13-02-2021, 07:37 AM
New chapter!
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...that they’re all saying goodbye to each other just isn’t feeling great for the ending and that they’ll all survive...:sad:...I’m having such a sinking feeling...

Scarlett.
13-02-2021, 12:36 PM
Will they all survive? :o

Scarlett.
13-02-2021, 11:43 PM
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Scarlett.
14-02-2021, 11:55 PM
Another chapter!
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Ammi
15-02-2021, 07:05 AM
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Ammi
15-02-2021, 07:08 AM
New chapter!
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...Ruby wants to learn how it is to be human so that she will have more wisdom and understanding...yet, she already at her young age, has more wisdom and understanding than most humans at a much older age of life experiences....Ruby..:lovedup:...she’s the most lovely heart of wisdom.....

Ammi
15-02-2021, 07:13 AM
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...who is the golden haired lady in white...you really keep and hold our attention, Scarlett...

Ammi
15-02-2021, 07:13 AM
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Ammi
15-02-2021, 07:19 AM
Another chapter!
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...will Roisin fade, was she always doomed with the Crystal powers...they were a curse, rather than a gift and her fate had always been sealed...

Scarlett.
15-02-2021, 01:00 PM
Indeed, the final confrontation looms near!

Scarlett.
15-02-2021, 11:19 PM
New chapter!
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Ammi
16-02-2021, 12:30 PM
New chapter!
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...gosh, the Luna’s are all gathering together as if some silent horn sounding had summoned them all, almost..’they gazed into the middle of the city where the old Academy stood, now encased in nanomachines...’....that so jumps from the page and evokes a vision, Scarlett...the ruin and devastation that were once such familiar sights ...getting so close to the end of their journey and yet so far still to go...and will their very lives lay in ruin and death when their journey ends....

Scarlett.
16-02-2021, 02:17 PM
Indeed! I also picked the Acropolis as the picture for this chapter, as I always imagined the old Academy standing like it does :D

Ammi
16-02-2021, 08:18 PM
Indeed! I also picked the Acropolis as the picture for this chapter, as I always imagined the old Academy standing like it does :D

...I always imagine and visualise it as that as well, Scarlett...because it’s so symbolic of a long lost world but also still conjures lives that would almost feel touchable still if you reached out...lost souls reaching and screaming out...?.....

Scarlett.
16-02-2021, 09:56 PM
...I always imagine and visualise it as that as well, Scarlett...because it’s so symbolic of a long lost world but also still conjures lives that would almost feel touchable still if you reached out...lost souls reaching and screaming out...?.....

Indeed, and also, the Acropolis imagery is very closely linked with the Pantheon of Gods, which is close to what Lumina Academy was

Scarlett.
17-02-2021, 12:15 AM
New chapter!
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Scarlett.
18-02-2021, 01:52 AM
New chapters!
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Scarlett.
19-02-2021, 12:17 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
19-02-2021, 07:40 AM
New chapter!
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...I love this chapter..:love:...you just balance things so perfectly, Scarlett, which is why it’s so east to feel the visual as well...you just keep the friendships and the more ‘everyday’/human type touch so much in the story...them all being preoccupied in different things as they approach the city when we know that their real thought preoccupation is the huge anticipation and fear they must be feeling and whether any of them even, will survive and feeling a doom that there will be many personal losses etc..but their course is fixed and that has to be...‘I mean, it doesn’t have to be the end’...but we know that they feel it most definitely will be ....great writing in how you evoke the actual feelings that they are having...and the sombreness of it all...

Ammi
19-02-2021, 07:41 AM
...I’ll catch up more a bit later...:love:..

Scarlett.
19-02-2021, 03:34 PM
Indeed, rather than think about what is ahead of them, they distract each other with thoughts of what might be :D

Scarlett.
21-02-2021, 02:35 AM
New chapter added
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Ammi
21-02-2021, 04:00 PM
New chapters!
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...excuse me, did we just lose Aran.?...sad:...wow at those two chapters, Scarlett...the build up was immense and the Battle of Crystalla felt so much longer, which is exactly perfect for such a crucial and important chapter that it’s all built to...I love your writing...:love:...you know that I love the friendship bonds but that last chapter was tremendous...:lovedup:...

Ammi
21-02-2021, 04:08 PM
New chapter!
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...I did think that you were going to take Syl from us as well, Scarlett...:laugh:....don’t make Roisin angry, you wouldn’t like her when she’s angry...:cool:...

Scarlett.
21-02-2021, 05:18 PM
...excuse me, did we just lose Aran.?...sad:...wow at those two chapters, Scarlett...the build up was immense and the Battle of Crystalla felt so much longer, which is exactly perfect for such a crucial and important chapter that it’s all built to...I love your writing...:love:...you know that I love the friendship bonds but that last chapter was tremendous...:lovedup:...


It was indeed a much longer chapter than usual, over 1500 words :D Felt right for it to last so long though :D

Scarlett.
21-02-2021, 05:19 PM
...I did think that you were going to take Syl from us as well, Scarlett...:laugh:....don’t make Roisin angry, you wouldn’t like her when she’s angry...:cool:...

I did actually consider it, but I like his character too much, and we already lost a good amount last chapter :laugh:

Scarlett.
22-02-2021, 01:09 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
22-02-2021, 08:19 AM
New chapter added
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...in A Strange New World, Scarlett..?....again it’s that association to our world now that you do so well...securing a brighter future for those who had fallen...and that really attaches so much to those many lives that have been sadly lost to COVID...and that’s such an awful thing and such terrible losses to face, but will ironically lead to the vaccines etc...and a brighter future and world we hope is there for us again..it really is a battle now also...and so much loss to still face before the world can be brighter and we can feel that true light....


...and hmmmm, New Horizon..?...it’s lovely to see Roisin take up her new role...but did I miss something are/were Mizu and Roisin siblings...?...

Scarlett.
22-02-2021, 02:01 PM
Nah, Roisin's mother, Ruby saved Mizu by making her into a Crystalla years ago :D

Scarlett.
23-02-2021, 01:25 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
23-02-2021, 07:23 AM
New chapter!
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...Captain Elf and the Sundance Kid...:laugh:...it’s so lovely to feel the rebuilding and imagine how they’re all feeling right now...that they can be in that new age of building their futures...the Crystalla of Fate is very intriguing...

Ammi
23-02-2021, 07:24 AM
...I’ll read Bittersweet a bit later because I’m not sure if the bitter will mean that we’ll lose someone...so I’ll build myself up for that possibility...

Scarlett.
23-02-2021, 04:09 PM
Indeed! A whole new world :D

Scarlett.
24-02-2021, 01:33 AM
New chapter added!
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Scarlett.
25-02-2021, 02:05 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
25-02-2021, 07:18 PM
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Ammi
25-02-2021, 07:24 PM
New chapter!
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....feeling Anya and Wes at their bonding ceremony and Roisin and Keegan dancing together and Atlas and Lotte...?...and the thought of Ruby trying to use a phone etc...?...while listening to Sigur Ros..might just be the best thing ever, Scarlett...:lovedup:...

Ammi
25-02-2021, 07:32 PM
New chapter added!
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...eeeek, that didn’t last for the next two years and Roisin’s new position...but they’re reconciled now and Roisin is still Roisin and any distance will hopefully begin to heal now between them all as they spend closer time together...

Ammi
25-02-2021, 07:41 PM
New chapter!
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...Ariel and Ashe adopting ...:lovedup:...and a huge friendship for Ruby who will no longer be the baby, she can share being an adoptive mom herself...?..something that will give her life so much more meaning ...I love these chapters of reminiscing and putting past things to rest and reconciling so many things...looking to the sky for the future...:love:...

Scarlett.
25-02-2021, 09:18 PM
I'm really enjoying writing these chapters, because, while there is a little drama, in the characters gradually growing apart and living their own lives, they also are still super close. It's nice to write the closure for a lot of characters :D

Scarlett.
26-02-2021, 02:12 AM
New chapter added!
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Scarlett.
27-02-2021, 03:00 AM
New chapter!
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Scarlett.
28-02-2021, 01:58 AM
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Ammi
28-02-2021, 07:07 AM
New chapter added!
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...I wonder what Ruby’s favourite food is...:laugh:...baby Amy and Ruby will totally fall in love with each other, I think...it’ll be one of the greatest friendships of all time...:lovedup:..

Ammi
28-02-2021, 07:11 AM
New chapter!
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...Roisin and Dex...:flutter:...

Scarlett.
28-02-2021, 07:27 AM
...I wonder what Ruby’s favourite food is...:laugh:...baby Amy and Ruby will totally fall in love with each other, I think...it’ll be one of the greatest friendships of all time...:lovedup:..

I bet it's something grilled :laugh:

Scarlett.
28-02-2021, 07:29 AM
...Roisin and Dex...:flutter:...

:D

Ammi
28-02-2021, 07:31 AM
I bet it's something grilled :laugh:

...:laugh:...and a bit burnt because it’s hard to get that heat setting just right...

Scarlett.
28-02-2021, 07:33 AM
...:laugh:...and a bit burnt because it’s hard to get that heat setting just right...

I imagine she likes food extra charred :laugh:

Ammi
28-02-2021, 07:39 AM
I imagine she likes food extra charred :laugh:

...she might need replacement phones quite a bit because she’s such a little phone lady now....when she sneezes etc...it might be, oh not another one...I wonder if Roisin and Dex keep a supply cupboard for her...

Scarlett.
28-02-2021, 07:45 AM
...she might need replacement phones quite a bit because she’s such a little phone lady now....when she sneezes etc...it might be, oh not another one...I wonder if Roisin and Dex keep a supply cupboard for her...

Can imagine Roisin putting her face in her hands and saying "Not another one!" :laugh:

Scarlett.
01-03-2021, 05:38 AM
The first book of a new tale set in the Crystalla universe. An Impossible Wish. A much smaller, more personal story set over 300 years following the events of the original Crystalla Series.

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Scarlett.
01-03-2021, 06:25 AM
Chapter art for the first chapter of the new book!

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Ammi
01-03-2021, 08:25 AM
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...so, I’m not going to say much about this ending, Scarlett...other than it was perfect...:lovedup:...it really has been a journey with a perfect ending that for us readers...and that annoying young girl that Roisin was...?....:laugh:..she couldn’t have done any of it without her friends..?...they were all a very part of who she is and kind of like branches of the Crystal powers, themselves..?...and so the legacy passes down and many future friendships will have that same importance to the new generation of battles yet to be fought...I love it, I loved the ending and the whole journey leading up to it..:lovedup:..thank you, Scarlett...:hug:...

Ammi
01-03-2021, 08:28 AM
...I’ll start your new book in a few days, Scarlett...but I’m loving the artwork already, it really is your thing and talent as well...:love:..

Scarlett.
01-03-2021, 08:52 AM
...so, I’m not going to say much about this ending, Scarlett...other than it was perfect...:lovedup:...it really has been a journey with a perfect ending that for us readers...and that annoying young girl that Roisin was...?....:laugh:..she couldn’t have done any of it without her friends..?...they were all a very part of who she is and kind of like branches of the Crystal powers, themselves..?...and so the legacy passes down and many future friendships will have that same importance to the new generation of battles yet to be fought...I love it, I loved the ending and the whole journey leading up to it..:lovedup:..thank you, Scarlett...:hug:...

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! It took a while to get here, but I finally did it! Will be sad to leave Roisin, Ashe, Ariel and Dex behind. Though, while that is their definitive ending, I have mulled over doing a "Chronicles book, with various seperate stories!

Scarlett.
01-03-2021, 08:55 AM
...I’ll start your new book in a few days, Scarlett...but I’m loving the artwork already, it really is your thing and talent as well...:love:..

Thank you! I wasnt going to move onto a new book so soon, but I couldn't stay away!

Although, I have called off the Wynd Academy Retold book and merged what I wrote into the original!

Ammi
01-03-2021, 02:43 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! It took a while to get here, but I finally did it! Will be sad to leave Roisin, Ashe, Ariel and Dex behind. Though, while that is their definitive ending, I have mulled over doing a "Chronicles book, with various seperate stories!


...yeah, I feel sad also and I’ll miss them all, Scarlett...:love:..but isn’t that the thing though, when you know how much we’ll miss them ...then you know that you left their story in the perfect place and at the perfect time because we do miss them, Scarlett....

Ammi
01-03-2021, 02:45 PM
Thank you! I wasnt going to move onto a new book so soon, but I couldn't stay away!

Although, I have called off the Wynd Academy Retold book and merged what I wrote into the original!

..I’m glad that you’re feeling so much writing/creative energy atm to want to move straight on and I’m looking forward to beginning another journey with you....:love:..

Scarlett.
01-03-2021, 11:56 PM
Added a new chapter!
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Ammi
02-03-2021, 07:03 AM
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Ammi
02-03-2021, 07:06 AM
Chapter art for the first chapter of the new book!

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Added a new chapter!
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...I’ve settled straight into the new book, Scarlett...Clara and Ruby are going to be the most lovely friendship...:lovedup:...and meeting new character is going to be exciting as well...I enjoyed the first few chapters and the beginning of Ruby and Clara’s journey...:love:..

Scarlett.
02-03-2021, 07:12 AM
...I’ve settled straight into the new book, Scarlett...Clara and Ruby are going to be the most lovely friendship...:lovedup:...and meeting new character is going to be exciting as well...I enjoyed the first few chapters and the beginning of Ruby and Clara’s journey...:love:..

It's nice to be able to settle into a new story, in familiar surroundings - That being said, I am writing in a way that a newcomer would be able to follow without prior knowledge :D

Ammi
02-03-2021, 08:55 AM
It's nice to be able to settle into a new story, in familiar surroundings - That being said, I am writing in a way that a newcomer would be able to follow without prior knowledge :D

...yeah, I hadn’t really thought of it like that, Scarlett...if I imagine myself reading those two chapters as a first introduction, I would still have immediately slipped into it because it isn’t an everyday friendship, is it...the story of a young lady and a young dragon...?...and it’s just the ease of your writing style as well when you’re building those bonds...I think as a newcomer that once I’d finished this story, I would have gone back to read back stories/series, you know...but I feel they would be stand alone series as well...

Scarlett.
02-03-2021, 07:11 PM
...yeah, I hadn’t really thought of it like that, Scarlett...if I imagine myself reading those two chapters as a first introduction, I would still have immediately slipped into it because it isn’t an everyday friendship, is it...the story of a young lady and a young dragon...?...and it’s just the ease of your writing style as well when you’re building those bonds...I think as a newcomer that once I’d finished this story, I would have gone back to read back stories/series, you know...but I feel they would be stand alone series as well...

Indeed, I feel that its a big ask to make people read the whole of The Crystalla Series before this. So I wanted it to be easy to get into, and make people want to read the old books too :D

Scarlett.
03-03-2021, 02:36 AM
New chapter!
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Scarlett.
04-03-2021, 03:01 AM
New chapter art!
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Scarlett.
04-03-2021, 04:28 AM
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New map! (Large images)

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Scarlett.
05-03-2021, 01:35 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
05-03-2021, 07:38 AM
...your maps are so gorgeous, Scarlett...:lovedup:...and they so help to get a bearing and bring context to their world...and I always adore your chapter artworks much...:love:..

Ammi
05-03-2021, 07:46 AM
New chapter!
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...it’s incredible to realise that 300 years have gone by, that’s much more than I thought ...I guess that Roisin and Dex are almost myth like figures that some possibly won’t think are real, just legend story figures...

Ammi
05-03-2021, 07:54 AM
New chapter art!
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...another great early chapter that explains all of the holding of the Crystal powers now, 300 years later...

Scarlett.
05-03-2021, 05:22 PM
...your maps are so gorgeous, Scarlett...:lovedup:...and they so help to get a bearing and bring context to their world...and I always adore your chapter artworks much...:love:..

I had a lot of fun updating them!

I wanted to set it so far in the future, so that this new story had its own era :D

Scarlett.
06-03-2021, 03:09 AM
New chapter!
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Beso
06-03-2021, 03:13 AM
Can the shoes dance?

Scarlett.
06-03-2021, 04:33 AM
Who knows xD

New map!
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Scarlett.
07-03-2021, 02:22 AM
New chapter!
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New map!
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Scarlett.
08-03-2021, 01:49 AM
New chapter!
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Layout plan!
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Ammi
08-03-2021, 08:56 AM
...the chapter graphics are really very gorgeous...:lovedup:...I’ll catch up with some more chapters later, Scarlett...:love:...

Scarlett.
08-03-2021, 11:39 AM
Thank you! :D

Scarlett.
09-03-2021, 12:39 AM
New chapter added!
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Ammi
09-03-2021, 08:33 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/688176


..

Ammi
09-03-2021, 08:40 AM
New chapter!
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...we won’t worry because Clara is so going to show everyone that she holds the Crystalla power in her hands ...

Ammi
09-03-2021, 08:46 AM
New chapter!
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...it’s a bit like lockdown for Dawn with the restrictions on her life for her safety etc...

Ammi
09-03-2021, 08:55 AM
New chapter!
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New map!
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... Clara...:sad:...to be the child of Roisin and Dex and how that must make her feel at times, even though she adores them...such difficult shoes to fill, she’s feeling...but she doesn’t have to fill her parent’s shoes, she just has to find her own confidence and greatness and believe in herself....Clara and Dawn...:lovedup:...but ‘promise me....no matter what..’ is not sounding hopeful...:sad:...

Scarlett.
09-03-2021, 03:17 PM
Indeed, she feels she has to live up to what everyone expects of her, because of her mother >.<

Ammi
09-03-2021, 09:10 PM
New chapter!
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Layout plan!
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New chapter added!
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...I’m glad that Clara stood up to Aoba a bit about Lauren tripping her but she’s still very timid and lacking in self confidence, which is sad ...she’s the daughter of Roisin and Dex, who are so iconic and legendary, it would be nice to see her with complete confidence in who she is as a Luna...and also, as Noah said...she hangs out with a dragon...:laugh:...how cool is that...plus’s she has bunny ears...:lovedup:.....it’s funny because it wouldn’t be accurate as such to say that I don’t miss Roisin and Dex because I’ve grown to love them and their friends so much...:lovedup:...but I guess because we know that they’re still there in the background and this is another generation’s story...this series has just comfortably slipped into place with the characters and feels like we’ve known them forever...well we actually have...:laugh:..while at the same time, they’re fresh and new and so different....does that make sense...?...

Scarlett.
09-03-2021, 10:35 PM
...I’m glad that Clara stood up to Aoba a bit about Lauren tripping her but she’s still very timid and lacking in self confidence, which is sad ...she’s the daughter of Roisin and Dex, who are so iconic and legendary, it would be nice to see her with complete confidence in who she is as a Luna...and also, as Noah said...she hangs out with a dragon...:laugh:...how cool is that...plus’s she has bunny ears...:lovedup:.....it’s funny because it wouldn’t be accurate as such to say that I don’t miss Roisin and Dex because I’ve grown to love them and their friends so much...:lovedup:...but I guess because we know that they’re still there in the background and this is another generation’s story...this series has just comfortably slipped into place with the characters and feels like we’ve known them forever...well we actually have...:laugh:..while at the same time, they’re fresh and new and so different....does that make sense...?...


It does :D I wanted to make Clara into a character who is both different from Roisin, but similar enough in other ways. Its also interesting writing characters like Aoba who have been around nearly as long as Roisin :D

Scarlett.
10-03-2021, 03:01 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
10-03-2021, 07:30 AM
New chapter!
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...‘she’s one of ‘those things’ isn’t she’....pfffft...I hope that Ruby sneezes on him...

Scarlett.
10-03-2021, 05:05 PM
...‘she’s one of ‘those things’ isn’t she’....pfffft...I hope that Ruby sneezes on him...

Toasted Dewitt :laugh:

Scarlett.
11-03-2021, 02:01 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
11-03-2021, 07:56 AM
New chapter!
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...gorgeous graphics for this chapter, Scarlett...:lovedup:...

...it’s so difficult for Clara, I think...as much as she’s always loved and admired her mother, she much also feel that she’s had to share her maybe too much...?...and maybe she’s felt like it’s been a circle for her, she would have liked to spend more time with her mother to feel her guidance to help her become the ‘Luna’ she was and ‘in the image of her mother’...?...but then the time she would have spent with her, would surely have more made her feel that she was so far removed from being who her mother was...when Roisin would never, ever want her to be anything other than who she was and love their differences and she would know that Cara’s story and journey would discover her own strengths and they would be every bit as amazing as Roisin’s...what’s that expression...we are born as originals, don’t live a life as a copy...or some such thing, I can’t recall...anyway, it seemed to apply...

Scarlett.
11-03-2021, 05:40 PM
Indeed, she is constantly being told to live up to her mother, but she isn't Roisin and never will be, she's Clara. Roisin and Dex have always told her as such but others try to force her to be like Roisin

Thank you :D

Scarlett.
12-03-2021, 03:11 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
12-03-2021, 07:30 AM
New chapter!
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...we knew that the relative calm wouldn’t last for too long...:laugh:...hmmmmmm, Hawke...

Scarlett.
12-03-2021, 07:33 AM
...we knew that the relative calm wouldn’t last for too long...:laugh:...hmmmmmm, Hawke...

Indeed, things have been set into motion :O

Scarlett.
13-03-2021, 12:19 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
13-03-2021, 08:03 AM
New chapter!
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....oooooo, who is the hooded figure...Noah...:love:..it’s a great starting point to have the ‘mean girls’ type bullying storyline because it’s meant that we attach to Clara immediately, in the way we did with her mother...Lauren’s horrid...

Scarlett.
13-03-2021, 04:19 PM
Indeed, Lauren is cruel, with Clara, since she has spent most of her life in one area, she has trouble picking up on some social cues, that would have saved her from ever getting to know Lauren

Scarlett.
14-03-2021, 12:58 AM
New chapter!
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Scarlett.
15-03-2021, 01:09 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
15-03-2021, 06:12 AM
New chapter!
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...Quand il pleut...?...

...there is a lovely bond and understanding with Clara and Dawn, their family life and childhoods were completely different but they’re still both having similar feelings about their independence and finding themselves...Dawn has obviously never been able to trust anyone’s sincerity and honesty through her life in people just wanting to please her father so not knowing if any friendship was ever real...?...and Clara was so surrounded by love with her own parents and their friends, that she felt as though she lived in the shadow of who they all were and has struggled to feel as though she had ‘greatness’ herself...?...which she obviously does have but is still yet to find it within herself...but yeah, both feeling a weight of living in the shadow of their parents in completely different ways but still creating an understanding they can both relate to...

Ammi
15-03-2021, 06:20 AM
New chapter!
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...Professor Hart...:fan:...it’s nice learning about the different races living in their world, I didn’t know that Hubuns had two hearts, I don’t know if I missed that...

Scarlett.
15-03-2021, 07:19 PM
...Quand il pleut...?...

...there is a lovely bond and understanding with Clara and Dawn, their family life and childhoods were completely different but they’re still both having similar feelings about their independence and finding themselves...Dawn has obviously never been able to trust anyone’s sincerity and honesty through her life in people just wanting to please her father so not knowing if any friendship was ever real...?...and Clara was so surrounded by love with her own parents and their friends, that she felt as though she lived in the shadow of who they all were and has struggled to feel as though she had ‘greatness’ herself...?...which she obviously does have but is still yet to find it within herself...but yeah, both feeling a weight of living in the shadow of their parents in completely different ways but still creating an understanding they can both relate to...

Indeed, in many ways they're the opposite of each other, but in other ways they're quite similar :D

Scarlett.
15-03-2021, 07:20 PM
...Professor Hart...:fan:...it’s nice learning about the different races living in their world, I didn’t know that Hubuns had two hearts, I don’t know if I missed that...

It's the first time that the races have been fully detailed, I wanted them to have more diversity between them, rather than just like, a human with different ears :laugh:

Scarlett.
16-03-2021, 12:54 AM
New chapter art!
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Scarlett.
16-03-2021, 06:40 AM
Another!
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Ammi
16-03-2021, 07:40 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/688176

Ammi
16-03-2021, 07:47 AM
New chapter art!
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Another!
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Scarlett.
16-03-2021, 07:57 AM
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:bawling:

Scarlett.
17-03-2021, 02:58 AM
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New chapter!

Ammi
17-03-2021, 07:25 AM
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New chapter!

....awwww, so will Ruby become more parent to Clara now, I wonder...I think she may do...:love:...


...such great graphics, Scarlett...:lovedup:...

Scarlett.
17-03-2021, 07:58 AM
....awwww, so will Ruby become more parent to Clara now, I wonder...I think she may do...:love:...


...such great graphics, Scarlett...:lovedup:...

Indeed, she's a great role model :D

The rose was always the symbol of Roisin :D

Scarlett.
18-03-2021, 01:58 AM
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New chapter

Scarlett.
19-03-2021, 02:49 AM
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Ammi
19-03-2021, 07:33 AM
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New chapter

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...oh go Clara with the bullies, she’s finally standing up to one of them, go girl...:love:...I think that the cremation is going to bring lots of emotion and I wonder which of the friends will be there or will many of them have already passed....

...hmmmm, in a different vein...there seems a little triangle of romantic emotion with Clara, Dawn and Noah...

Scarlett.
19-03-2021, 07:49 AM
...oh go Clara with the bullies, she’s finally standing up to one of them, go girl...:love:...I think that the cremation is going to bring lots of emotion and I wonder which of the friends will be there or will many of them have already passed....

...hmmmm, in a different vein...there seems a little triangle of romantic emotion with Clara, Dawn and Noah...

Indeed, there may be a familiar face or two :D

Unless Noah and Imogen are mistaken :o

Scarlett.
20-03-2021, 02:40 AM
New chapters!
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Ammi
20-03-2021, 07:13 AM
New chapters!
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...it’s so easy to see why Clara feels so much responsibility of ‘living up to her parents’...not just because she’s the daughter of such incredible legends but also because they both gave up their immortality to have her in their life..but that’s the thing, they would only hope for her to be who she was and to be happy...they wouldn’t have had any higher expectations...oh, Ruby as Hubun...:lovedup:...will she still have her fire as a Hubun...?...but wow, what a great twist to add....

Scarlett.
20-03-2021, 07:17 AM
...it’s so easy to see why Clara feels so much responsibility of ‘living up to her parents’...not just because she’s the daughter of such incredible legends but also because they both gave up their immortality to have her in their life..but that’s the thing, they would only hope for her to be who she was and to be happy...they wouldn’t have had any higher expectations...oh, Ruby as Hubun...:lovedup:...will she still have her fire as a Hubun...?...but wow, what a great twist to add....

Indeed, althought Roisin and Dex never wanted her to feel that burden :D

Ruby's only just starting to discover her new powers! :D

Scarlett.
21-03-2021, 01:59 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
21-03-2021, 07:45 AM
New chapter!
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....hmmmmm, not exactly the homecoming that Clara would have expected with Dawn, she’s very distant...

Scarlett.
21-03-2021, 03:47 PM
....hmmmmm, not exactly the homecoming that Clara would have expected with Dawn, she’s very distant...

I wonder whats eating away at her D:

Scarlett.
22-03-2021, 03:32 AM
Two new chapters added (plus epilogue!)
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Book 2!
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Scarlett.
23-03-2021, 02:07 AM
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Ammi
23-03-2021, 07:05 AM
Two new chapters added (plus epilogue!)
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Book 2!
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https://t.co/oCtyiGKCbK?amp=1

...wow, I’m just catching my breath after the ending of the first book, Scarlett...that was such an ending, well done...:love:...I’m just starting the second one now...

Ammi
23-03-2021, 07:10 AM
Two new chapters added (plus epilogue!)
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Book 2!
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https://t.co/oCtyiGKCbK?amp=1


...I can’t work Dawn out, she can ruthlessly and coldly kill but is she with her father or not with her father....hmmmmmm....

Ammi
23-03-2021, 07:17 AM
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...wow, I love how you’ve done this, Scarlett...how you’ve showed Clara with all of her uncertainties and now these events will bring her to being the Luna that was born to become...:love:...from the ashes of Roisin and Dex, eh...

Scarlett.
23-03-2021, 06:43 PM
...I can’t work Dawn out, she can ruthlessly and coldly kill but is she with her father or not with her father....hmmmmmm....

She is a complicated person, not completely cold blooded, but also slightly ruthless

Scarlett.
23-03-2021, 06:44 PM
...wow, I love how you’ve done this, Scarlett...how you’ve showed Clara with all of her uncertainties and now these events will bring her to being the Luna that was born to become...:love:...from the ashes of Roisin and Dex, eh...

Somthing small that you might have missed - when she confronted Dawn in on the connecting bridge, she summoned a Crystalla weapon with ease, as she had finally found inner strength, albeit from the anger and hatred she felt in that moment

Scarlett.
24-03-2021, 01:57 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
24-03-2021, 06:31 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ExNWB5QXIAMs74x?format=jpg&name=360x360

...yeah, sorry I did miss that bit on the connecting bridge, Scarlett....wow, this book is really filled with treachery from the start, so exciting...:love:..

Scarlett.
24-03-2021, 01:12 PM
...yeah, sorry I did miss that bit on the connecting bridge, Scarlett....wow, this book is really filled with treachery from the start, so exciting...:love:..

It was written in a way that didn't point attention to it, so dont worry :D Yeah, this book goes in a completely different direction than book 1 :o

Scarlett.
24-03-2021, 11:53 PM
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New chapter!

Ammi
25-03-2021, 06:50 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/700348

Ammi
25-03-2021, 06:55 AM
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New chapter!

....atm, there feels very little about Dawn that would be redeemable but you’ve said that she’s complicated, Scarlett...and we know the control and ruthlessness of her father...so I’ll try to hold thoughts about her atm...

Scarlett.
25-03-2021, 04:39 PM
Indeed, she's probably going to be a hard person to root for from now on

Scarlett.
26-03-2021, 01:38 AM
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New chapter!

Scarlett.
27-03-2021, 01:45 AM
New chapter!
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Ammi
27-03-2021, 06:52 AM
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New chapter!

New chapter!
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...:sad:..I’m feeling a little for Dawn now, it’s almost as if she’s under a spell and hates herself and her actions but is compelled to take those lives...well, take the Crystal powers really is what she’s doing...

Ammi
27-03-2021, 07:03 AM
...oh btw, Scarlett...reading that made me want to wake up to seagulls and the sea air...it gave me a great longing to leave lockdown days at home and rush down to the coast...:lovedup:.../nostalgia series....

Scarlett.
27-03-2021, 04:52 PM
...:sad:..I’m feeling a little for Dawn now, it’s almost as if she’s under a spell and hates herself and her actions but is compelled to take those lives...well, take the Crystal powers really is what she’s doing...

Indeed, the way she was raised has a lot to do with it :(

Scarlett.
27-03-2021, 04:53 PM
...oh btw, Scarlett...reading that made me want to wake up to seagulls and the sea air...it gave me a great longing to leave lockdown days at home and rush down to the coast...:lovedup:.../nostalgia series....

I wake up hearing them everyday, so I find seagulls more annoying :laugh: but the sea air is nice :D

Ammi
27-03-2021, 04:55 PM
I wake up hearing them everyday, so I find seagulls more annoying :laugh: but the sea air is nice :D

...you have no idea how much I envy you right now, Scarlett...:laugh:...just to drive down to the coast and walk along the front feels like the most magical thing...:lovedup:..

Scarlett.
27-03-2021, 05:45 PM
Indeed, the sound of waves is calming too :D

Scarlett.
29-03-2021, 02:28 AM
New chapter!
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Scarlett.
30-03-2021, 03:54 AM
New chapter added!
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Ammi
01-04-2021, 08:02 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ExnQazhXAAIdNTq?format=jpg&name=small

...the muscle boosters, so grim....but it does make me think if that we’re real and because of that power they would give before destroying someone...?...would many still make a choice of using them and I sadly think, maybe...yes, that some would focus on the power and less on the long term...

Ammi
01-04-2021, 08:08 AM
New chapter added!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/ExsttfKWUAEo7Us?format=jpg&name=small

...oh my goodness...:sad:...now we know the back story..poor Diana, poor Daniel and the legacy of bitterness and loss now handed down...incredibly sad...

Scarlett.
01-04-2021, 11:02 AM
Indeed, some people will want power at any cost, even to themselves. I took a day or two off from writing but will get back to it today :D

Scarlett.
02-04-2021, 01:34 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ex7qjtrWEAMfbL5?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
02-04-2021, 05:36 AM
Indeed, some people will want power at any cost, even to themselves. I took a day or two off from writing but will get back to it today :D

...take your time, Scarlett ...enjoy the Spring and the sunshine as well and enjoy being able to get outdoors more and enjoy Final Fantasy also...(...I think that you’re playing atm...)...just write when the vibe takes you and if it doesn’t then enjoy other things because it will happen when it’s ready, you know...

Ammi
02-04-2021, 05:45 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Ex7qjtrWEAMfbL5?format=jpg&name=small

...I feel as though Dawn will die for what she’s done, she won’t survive through the story...because obviously her actions just can’t be undone or put right in any way, which leaves only one end for her...but it’s all so sad, as you said, Scarlett...she’s a complicated person, so many lives were lost that day her mother died...the whole family lost themselves...how different life could have been for them all...:sad:...

Scarlett.
02-04-2021, 10:36 AM
Indeed. Though it was her Father's want for revenge that twisted his mind and his mistreatment of his kids that lead to it :(

Scarlett.
04-04-2021, 01:03 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EyF2cyhWQAAoYcr?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
04-04-2021, 06:11 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EyF2cyhWQAAoYcr?format=jpg&name=small

...I am really loving the vibe of this story, Scarlett...we’ve been so focused on the ‘fight of the pure/the Crystalla’ but not so much on the aspects of their enemies and how the world became what it was etc...and how lives turned from light to dark as well...this is all so key to the series, isn’t it...

Scarlett.
04-04-2021, 02:16 PM
...I am really loving the vibe of this story, Scarlett...we’ve been so focused on the ‘fight of the pure/the Crystalla’ but not so much on the aspects of their enemies and how the world became what it was etc...and how lives turned from light to dark as well...this is all so key to the series, isn’t it...

Indeed, with a big good vs bad fight, lesser evils get ignored until they become a problem

Scarlett.
05-04-2021, 02:14 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EyLQXK-WUAgYjtq?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
05-04-2021, 06:26 AM
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/700348

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Ammi
05-04-2021, 06:33 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EyLQXK-WUAgYjtq?format=jpg&name=small

...it takes a bit of getting used to in imagining Ruby in her Hubun form and not her dragon form...

Scarlett.
05-04-2021, 02:24 PM
Indeed xD Though she can still turn to her Dragon form at will :D

Ammi
05-04-2021, 03:52 PM
Indeed xD Though she can still turn to her Dragon form at will :D

...whether dragon form or Hubun form, I love her equally because the beautiful heart and soul she is will never change...:lovedup:...she’s her parent’s daughter...:love:..

Scarlett.
05-04-2021, 04:05 PM
She is! She'll go to any lengths to protect Clara :D

Scarlett.
07-04-2021, 01:07 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EyVUJXRWYAAJtHU?format=jpg&name=medium

Ammi
07-04-2021, 06:30 AM
...oh my, I’ve just noticed your book cover, Scarlett...how totally gorgeous...:flutter:...

Ammi
07-04-2021, 06:34 AM
New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EyVUJXRWYAAJtHU?format=jpg&name=medium

...isn’t it strange how Ruby is such the older wise one now, she grew up before our very eyes, Scarlett...:love:...

Scarlett.
07-04-2021, 03:34 PM
Yep! She's got a lot of life experience now :D

Scarlett.
09-04-2021, 02:17 PM
Had a bit of writers block the past few days, hopefully will resume soon!

Ammi
10-04-2021, 06:59 AM
Had a bit of writers block the past few days, hopefully will resume soon!

..just spend some you time, Scarlett...when the words are ready, they’ll come and taking care of yourself and your own welfare always, will help release them anyway...there’s no rush at all but there is a need for you to spend time devoted to devoting time to other things that you enjoy as well...that block is telling you something worth slowing down and listening to...:hug:..

Scarlett.
12-04-2021, 12:16 AM
..just spend some you time, Scarlett...when the words are ready, they’ll come and taking care of yourself and your own welfare always, will help release them anyway...there’s no rush at all but there is a need for you to spend time devoted to devoting time to other things that you enjoy as well...that block is telling you something worth slowing down and listening to...:hug:..

You're right :D

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eyu3NzFWUAMTWa7?format=jpg&name=small

Ammi
12-04-2021, 10:00 AM
You're right :D

New chapter!
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Eyu3NzFWUAMTWa7?format=jpg&name=small

...that cover Image is gorgeous, Scarlett...:lovedup:...

...tick tock, tick tock releasing the hands of that writer’s block...?..:laugh:...I’m thinking that you channelled your writers block into your creativity, you genius lady...:lovedup:...well done, you...:hug:...

Scarlett.
12-04-2021, 12:59 PM
Im glad you enjoyed it! :D

Ammi
13-04-2021, 06:49 AM
Im glad you enjoyed it! :D

...it made me smile because you channelled it into the chapter which worked perfectly...:love:...but you still take your time, yeah..take care of you and it’ll flow when it makes sure that you’re ok first...:hug:...

Scarlett.
13-04-2021, 08:02 AM
I got the news last night that my Uncle passed away, so I'm taking a day or so away from writing >.<

Ammi
13-04-2021, 10:31 AM
I got the news last night that my Uncle passed away, so I'm taking a day or so away from writing >.<

...I’m so, so sorry, Scarlett...:hug:...I can imagine how in turmoil your emotions are right now and how difficult it is for your whole family...I’m so very sorry for your loss...:hug:..

Scarlett.
22-04-2021, 12:30 AM
New chapter added!

Ammi
22-04-2021, 06:42 AM
New chapter added!

...the worm virus is a brilliant plan, an excellently written chapter, Scarlett...:love:..

Scarlett.
23-04-2021, 06:01 PM
Glad you like the chapter :D