Tibbenders//finished

[BigSister]

aww i wasnt in this one

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by BigSister
aww i wasnt in this one

Aww, sorry. You will be in next thoug.. So Dw x

[Princess]

Hah I'm hyper in this too-love it!

[BigSister]

yay thanks although i have been in quite a lot this week so im not too bothered

[Shaun]

Having an affair? :shocked:

[Princess]

Originally posted by Shaun
Having an affair? :shocked:

It was Billy who said that :P I was just asking! You're obviously not having an affair,haha.

[Tom4784]

Lol Good installment!

[Lewis.]

Thanks Guys, again :kiss:

[Christina]

LOL oh great .. im assuming i just had sex with FW? :laugh:

[Annie]

Whoo amazing work Lewis :hello:

[Jake!]

Oh no not supernoodles! I hope not anyway. LOL

[Lewis.]

Remember to join me tomorrow, and find out just what has happened to Supernoodles

[Lewis.]

Guys, I have a huge apologie to make!

Yesterday i left my Laptop at my dads house, and it had the Tibbenders saved onto it.. and i am not going to be able to get it back until tomorrow, So... There will be no Tibbenders tonight :( To make up for it, there will be a double episode tomorrow night. Sorry to those who were excited about the gun shot :xyxwave:

[Firewire]

Originally posted by Lewiis.Xx
Guys, I have a huge apologie to make!

Yesterday i left my Laptop at my dads house, and it had the Tibbenders saved onto it.. and i am not going to be able to get it back until tomorrow, So... There will be no Tibbenders tonight :( To make up for it, there will be a double episode tomorrow night. Sorry to those who were excited about the gun shot :xyxwave:

Typical. JOKE

lol

Can't wait until tomorrow.

[amby]

when will I be in it?:tongue:

[Annie]

Awww boo Lewis. Cant wait to read some more and find out what happens. :cheer2:

[Lewis.]

Not been able to get laptop back but Dad emailed me the next episode, But not one after.. So it is only a single episode tonight and i will have an extra one tomorrow :)

Here is tonights episode!

_______________________
The Vic
Christina: What was that!
The rest of the vic gather outside to see what the gunshot was about

Ninastar and Foms house
Ninastar looks out of the window

Supernoodles house
Fom is Standing outside shouting. He is trying to knock the door down
Fom: Supernoodles! Supernodles!
She opens the door and falls into his arms. There is a gun on the doormat but no sign of injury to Supernoodles
Supernoodles: I couldn't do.. I couldn't!
Fom: Just calm down Babe, we need to get you to hospital
Supernoodles: No! You don't understand! I didn't do it!
she is hysterically crying and breathing very heavily
Fom: C'mon, We need to sort you out
Supernoodles: NO!
She runs back into her house and slams the door behind her

OUtside
There is now a huge crowd of people looking up at Supernoodles Flat, all staring at Fom
Gregalz: Fom mate, What has happened?
Fom: Just leave it to me, she is fine. Now what are you all staring at! C'mon, Get on with your own lives!
Ninastar runs out of her house
Ninastar: Fom! What has happened darling
Fom: I will talk to you later. You will catch your death, go back inside!
Ninastar: Tell me.. NOW!
Fom: Just go back inside babe!
Ninastar: NOW!
Fom: Look i Don't have time!
Fom kicks the door down and runs in.. Ninastar running straight after him
Ninastar: Fom, I told you to..
She walks in to find Supernoodles in a heap on the floor, Crying
Ninastar: Supernoodles, What is the matter dar..
Supernoodles: Tell Her Fom!

Princess, Shaun and Billy's house
Princess is staring at a holiday catalogue
Princess: Oh my god, it is gorgeous
Shaun: Only the best for my beautiful wife
They satart kissing again
Billy: Mum, Dad, Why not go to, Bingo or something and do that!
Princess: Billy! All the years i have heard you and the ladies up in your Room, you'd be surprised!
Billy: Mum!
Shaun: Aww, Billy getting all embarrassed? Anyway hunny, I am off out now.
Princess: Where to?
Shaun: To See a man about a dog. See you later

Firewires House
Christina and Firewire are sat in his bed, Both panting
Firewire: Wow
Christina: You look amazed?
Firewire: I am!
Christina: What is that supposed to mean!
Firewire: Nothing!
They both start giggling and go under the covers

Princess, Shaun and Billy's house
Billy: You know what mum, I am going out to, Catch you later
Princess: Oh, Well Bye

JDIZZELS House
Shaun and JDIZZEL are kissing on the Sofa, there is a knock at the door
JDIZZEL: Huh!
Shaun: Just ignore it
JDIZZEL: I didn't lock the door!
The Door opens
Billy: JDIZZEL, you i...
Shaun: Billy!
JDIZZEL: Billy!
Billy: Dad!

Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath

Supernoodles house
Fom: What!
Ninastar: What?
Supernoodles: Tell her or i Will!
Fom: Tell her what
Ninastar: Tell me What!
Supernoodles: Tell her! She needs to know
Fom: Tell her What!
Supernoodles: YOU KNOW WHAT!
Fom: Ninastar, just go home..
Ninastar: Tell me what!
Fom: It's nothing
Supernoodles: Tell Her!
Ninastar: Tell me!
Fom: Just go Home!
Supernoodles: We've been Seeing eachover! That's what he has to tell you!
_______________________

Come back tomorrow for episode 8!

[Tom4784]

Awww lol FW and Christina.

[Ninastar]

Awww ok lol x IT was AMAZING !!!! x

[Jen]

Shaun :lovedup:

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by JDIZZEL
Shaun :lovedup:

You and Shaun sitting in a tree :lovedup:

[Jen]

Hes 45 I'm 17.
True Love.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by JDIZZEL
Hes 45 I'm 17.
True Love.

So Obviously

:lovedup:

[30stone]

Aw poor ninastar )=

and twice in one day christina NICE!

[Jen]

I want to have an affair with Ben.
For funsies.


:lovedup:

[30stone]

For "realsies" ?

:whistle:

LOL.

[Novo]

Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sam!]

I'm liking it Lewiss :) What the hell does your dad think it is? lol

[Jen]

Originally posted by 30stone
For "realsies" ?

:whistle:

LOL.

Oh babez.

:lovedup::lovedup::lovedup:

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

[Novo]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

its great

:joker:

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Sam!
I'm liking it Lewiss :) What the hell does your dad think it is? lol

Haha, He does not really care :joker:

[Christina]

LOOOOL!

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by .Andy.
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

its great

:joker:

http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/hump.gif

[Christina]

Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Grr.

[30stone]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

its great

:joker:

http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/hump.gif

LOL

she'll be up to 3 times a day soon.

[Christina]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

its great

:joker:

http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/hump.gif Ewww.

[Christina]

Andy, Ben and Lewis.. feel ashamed :bored:

[Jen]

Ethan and Annie.

:lovedup:

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Christina
Andy, Ben and Lewis.. feel ashamed :bored:

Aww.. Only joking Hun.. Love you really :love:

[Sam!]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

its great

:joker:

http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/hump.gif

I'm disturbed.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Sam!
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

its great

:joker:

http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/hump.gif

I'm disturbed.

For me, That was quite funny

Would you rather they were under the covers? http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/thedeed.gif

Or on their own? http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/jackoff.gif

Haha, This site is so cool!

http://www.mysmiley.net/free-adult-smileys.php

[Jen]

Oh Lordy.

[Wildcat!]

Lewis! eww!!

[Lewis.]

Childish Lewis is in Full force tonight

:xyxwave:

[Novo]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Sam!
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by .Andy.
Firewires House
Christina is getting changed, at the end of the bed. Firewire is still in the bed
Firewire: Twice in a day, You're good
Christina: Firewire, Don't be like it!
They Both Laugh
Christina: You know, I have fancied you for years now? I always dreamed we would get married one day and have hundreds of kids
Firewire: You know what, I Love you, and always have to be honest.. So lets do it! No mater what anyone else thinks!
Christina: What! Have Hundreds of kids! I was exaggerating then you know!
Firewire: No, Lets get married
Christina Smiles Gleefully and takes a deep breath



LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You love it http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/scared/scared0005.gif

its great

:joker:

http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/hump.gif

I'm disturbed.

For me, That was quite funny

Would you rather they were under the covers? http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/thedeed.gif

Or on their own? http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/adult/jackoff.gif

Haha, This site is so cool!

http://www.mysmiley.net/free-adult-smileys.php

http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/fighting/fighting0040.gif

:thumbs:

[Christina]

Originally posted by JDIZZEL
Ethan and Annie.

:lovedup: Wayy better than Naomi and Ethan :P
I love Dixon and Silver :lovedup:

[Firewire]

Brilliant episode tonight.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Firewire
Brilliant episode tonight.

I bet it was :thumbs:

[Tom4784]

Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by JDIZZEL
Ethan and Annie.

:lovedup: Wayy better than Naomi and Ethan :P
I love Dixon and Silver :lovedup:

I don't want Ethan and Annie to get together, too much annoying angst!

I hope she stays with Ty.

[30stone]

Firewire & Christina.

Firestina
Christonathon
Christwire.


What should they be called?

Any others?

[Shaun]

I'm such a tool to Princess, it's brilliant.
Great work, Lewis!

[Christina]

Originally posted by 30stone
Firewire & Christina.

Firestina
Christonathon
Christwire.


What should they be called?

Any others?

:bawling:

[Novo]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Firewire
Brilliant episode tonight.

I bet it was :thumbs:

LOL!!!!!!!!

firewire is loving it

[Lewis.]

Thanks Shaun. Your character still has not really come out of his shell yet though

[Lewis.]

Episode 8!

________________________
Supernoodles Flat
Ninastar: What!
Fom: Look, it was nothing babe..
Supernoodles: Yes it was!
Fom: I don't know what she is talking ab..
Ninastar: Seeing eachover. Seeing eachover.. Please god No!
Supernoodles: I am so sorry, I rea..
Ninastar: Sorry! SORRY! Who the hell do you thin..
Fom: Go home Ninasta..
Ninastar slaps Fom, Hard around the face
Ninastar: No! Now you tell me everything that happened

Annie, BigSister and Darenns house
Annie: Night guys! I am off out now
Darenn: see you later hun
BigSister: Bye
Annie walks out
BigSister: Hmm, I wish i had a nice man in my life
Darenn: Same.. Hmm.
BigSister: Just a bit of fun would be nice
Darenn: Ooh, i agree to that!
BigSister: Well what are we waiting for then!
Darenn: What do you mean? You know i am..
Bigsister: Yes! And i don't care!
She grabs his face and snogs him. He pulls away
Darenn: BigSister! I thought i could trust you when i moved in!
Darenn walks out of the lounge and into the street

Supernoodles Flat
Fom: It was nothing hun! Just a kiss!
Supernoodles: Just a kiss, Don't be stupid!
Ninastar: Tell me the truth, or i will never speak to you again
Fom: Fine, we kissed and stuff but nothing happened!
Supernoodles: You know that things happened! You were going to run away with me and everything! That is why he was at the airport earlier Ninastar! He wanted to take me away
Ninastar: You Lie, Lie and Lie Fom! Is that all you do! What about our baby!
Supernoodles: Your baby? What about our baby Fom! Does she know about that!

The Square
It is now about 10pm. A large car pulls up. The door opens and Redmoon jumps out, holding SiaSiaSia's hand. He is 42 and she is 34. They both look very scruffy. Redmoon opens the back door of the car, 30stone(21), Andy(19), Hugo(14), 30stones girlfriend Amby(20) and their Son Dezzy(6), all jump out making a racket
Dezzy: Are we here mummy!
Dezzy is running around excitedly
Amby: Shut up son, it is late!
Dezzy: Daddy are we here!
30stone: Did you just hear your mother! She said Shut it!
Sia: Hey, 30stone, Don't be so harsh on the poor lad. Yes love we are here! At our new house!
Andy: I aint living here!
Sia: Well it is all we can get, with this family's reputation we need to do what the social say, or Hugo and Dezzy are gone!
Hugo: I aint scared of no social services
Sia: C'mon, Get inside!


Supernoodles Flat
Ninstar: Your baby!
Fom: Ninstar, look, words cannot describe how sor...
Ninstar: YOur baby?
Supernoodles: Mine and Foms Baby!
Ninstar: What!
Ninastar jumps on Fom and starts attacking him. Supernoodles grabs the gun, and Shoots

_________________________

Cannot be on long because of Family. just posted that :)

Next episode tomorrow x

[Firewire]

Not as good because I wasn't in it. lol

[jaybitches]

Whn do i come into it haha

[Jen]

"She grabs his face and snogs him. He pulls away"


LMFAO

[Tom4784]

I'm 6 years old! BUHAHAHAHA! I love it.

I loved Ninastar on the rampage and BigSister's attempts on Darenn.

[Christina]

Great ep!

[BigSister]

hehe.....

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Christina
Great ep!

She says, Letting out a sigh of relief :devil:

[30stone]

Ben has arrived!

lol though im 21 with a 6 year old son and i sound like a bad dad already ! LOL

I like tonight the best obviously, though i did miss the firewire christina story.

[amby]

fab Lewis!!!


errrmmm.....was I in that scene or was it a mistake?
*is confused*

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by amby
fab Lewis!!!


errrmmm.....was I in that scene or was it a mistake?
*is confused*

Yeah you are, got the name wrong.. Edited it! You only have one line but feature more later on in week when Supernoodles thing is over :kiss: x

[amby]

haha. seems like I'm in a dysfunctional family lol.

can't wait to read more !!

[Jen]

Originally posted by amby
haha. seems like I'm in a dysfunctional family lol.

can't wait to read more !!

Don't worry Orla.
I'm a 17 year old home wrecker.

[Christina]

Originally posted by amby
haha. seems like I'm in a dysfunctional family lol.

can't wait to read more !! Dont worry i have sex twice a day with 13 year olds lmao..:tongue:

[amby]

Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by amby
haha. seems like I'm in a dysfunctional family lol.

can't wait to read more !! Dont worry i have sex twice a day with 13 year olds lmao..:tongue:

LMAO!

[Tom4784]

Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by amby
haha. seems like I'm in a dysfunctional family lol.

can't wait to read more !! Dont worry i have sex twice a day with 13 year olds lmao..:tongue:

YOU'RE THE ONE OFF THE NEWS!!!!!!

Fiend!

:joker:

[amby]

Dezzy, I'm your mother!:laugh3:

[Tom4784]

Originally posted by amby
Dezzy, I'm your mother!:laugh3:

*Turns into Zoe Slater*

You ain't mah mutha!!!!!!!!

[amby]

Originally posted by Dezzy
Originally posted by amby
Dezzy, I'm your mother!:laugh3:

*Turns into Zoe Slater*

You ain't mah mutha!!!!!!!!

you're only 6 so shut up son!:tongue:

[Tom4784]

Originally posted by amby
Originally posted by Dezzy
Originally posted by amby
Dezzy, I'm your mother!:laugh3:

*Turns into Zoe Slater*

You ain't mah mutha!!!!!!!!

you're only 6 so shut up son!:tongue:

I'll end up like Ryan in Corrie, he came in as a 13 year old and 6 months later he was celebrating his 16th birthday!

By next week i'll be sleeping with hookers and addicted to crack!

[amby]

Originally posted by Dezzy
Originally posted by amby
Originally posted by Dezzy
Originally posted by amby
Dezzy, I'm your mother!:laugh3:

*Turns into Zoe Slater*

You ain't mah mutha!!!!!!!!

you're only 6 so shut up son!:tongue:

I'll end up like Ryan in Corrie, he came in as a 13 year old and 6 months later he was celebrating his 16th birthday!

By next week i'll be sleeping with hookers and addicted to crack!

your father can deal with you when all that happens lol.

[30stone]

Lol i look like a really bad dad.

And am i married to you or just with you? lol

[Tom4784]

Your with her for a council house.

[amby]

Originally posted by 30stone
Lol i look like a really bad dad.

And am i married to you or just with you? lol

it says I'm your girlfriend.

[30stone]

LOL dezzy

Well at least i have a good girlfriend :spin2: lol , family looks a bit crazy tho lol


Though everyone seems to be cheating in this, i hope your faithful. LOL

[Jen]

Shaun is cheating on Laura... with me.
Laura is my favourite TiBB lady.
I feel bad... although it is fictional. LOL

[amby]

Ben, you better not cheat on me or eles.........

[30stone]

Or else what? :angel:


Ah why would i cheat on someone as pretty as you??

[amby]

well this is a soap so you could end up 6 feet under:devil:


edit- thank you for saying I'm pretty:)

[30stone]

Lol ohhh dear you will turn into tanya and bury me??? evil!

its cool :) *cough* could return the compliment *cough*

lol

[amby]

oh Ben you're so gorgeous!:tongue:

(I so didn't mean Ben Adams:tongue:)

[30stone]

Lol damn im reduced to begging for a compliment how sad!!

[amby]

can't wait to see what my character is like!!!

[30stone]

you had a kid at 14!!!! ahahha

[Tom4784]

Oh my god we're like the Gallaghers lol I'm Liam! :laugh2:

[amby]

Originally posted by 30stone
you had a kid at 14!!!! ahahha

you knocked me up so it was your fault!!!:tongue:

[30stone]

I love you dezzy <3 son.

I didnt you wanted me at such a young age... i just gave in..

[Christina]

Originally posted by Dezzy
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by amby
haha. seems like I'm in a dysfunctional family lol.

can't wait to read more !! Dont worry i have sex twice a day with 13 year olds lmao..:tongue:

YOU'RE THE ONE OFF THE NEWS!!!!!!

Fiend!

:joker: LOL .. well... :whistle::tongue:

[amby]

new ep tonight??

[30stone]

ahh hope so, also lewis you havent explain what we look like yet?

[30stone]

guess not )=

[Lewis.]

New episode coming in half an hour! :blush2:

[bronaaaa]

:dance:

[30stone]

YEah where have you been young man?!?

[Lewis.]

I have been eating tea and watching American idol :)

i just need to make some last minute changes to the episode, and then i will broadcast it ;)

[30stone]

Alreet cool, ive been really looking forward to todays lol.

[Jen]

Will I be making out with Shaun in tonights episode?

[Lewis.]

Supernoodles flat
Fom: Ninastar!
Supernoodles: Oh my god
Ninastar is lying on the floor in a pool of blood
Ninastar: Huh, No!
Fom: Ninastar!
Fom bends down and rests her head on his hand
Ninastar: That baby, please, just call an ambulance!
Fom: What HAVE YOU DONE! (To Supernoodles)
Supernoodles: Oh my god!
Supernoodles picks up the gun and puts it to her head, Themichael0 comes running in
themichael0: Oh my god, what h.. Supernoodles no!
Supernoodles shoots, and drops to the floor dead. Themichael0 screams. Fom drops the phone as Ninastar passes out

Annie, BigSister and Darenns house
Bigsister is sitting on the sofa, crying, Darenn walks in
Darenn: I have been thinking
Bigsister: About what
She sits up and Darenn sits down
Bigsister: About what?
Darenn: I don't know? This place, Life, You
Bigsister: Me?
Darenn: Lets rewind
Darenn puts his hands on Bigsisters cheek, and Snogs her

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Tonight was only tiny, because i have still not got my lappy back and had to write it all up in the last 30 mins... But another half will be tomorrow along with tomorrows episode

x

[Christina]

Omg theyre all dying lol!
Great ep!

[amby]

wow! dramatic!!

[Benjamin]

when do I come in and trick the ladies?

[30stone]

Whoo does that mean double episode tomorrow?

Poor Caitlin and Laura...

I didnt get how Caitlin got hurt tho or was that in the last episode il have to read thru again lol.

[Jen]

YEY Bigsister and Darenn :lovedup:

[Tom4784]

That episode was like a Quentin Tarrantino film! Good Eppy, I liked the out of the blue coupling of Bigsis and Darenn!

[xDramatick]

Originally posted by JDIZZEL
YEY Bigsister and Darenn :lovedup:

LOL, and there's me hoping I'd be a gay ***** :sad:

Haha, interesting twist Lewis.

&BigSister :wink:

[30stone]

Wow laura shot caitlin... harsh..

[Lewis.]

Thankyou to all of the great feedback on last nights episode!

As you know, last nights episode was a tiny one! ?But tonight Tibbenders is back with a bang, with a double episode! Will Ninastar die? What is going on between Bigsister and Darenn? What are the new family hiding from the square? What is Firewire hiding from Christina?

All will be revealed shortly!

[Lewis.]

Hey Guys :)

New episode tonight! Last one of this week! Will post a week round up tomorrow when have more time! Quite busy with family right now.. so, you will have to wait :pat:

Here is the final episode of week 2! Come back on Monday for the next episode!


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Bigsisters house
Bigsister and Darenn are lying on the floor under a cover
Darenn: My father will be so happy
Bigsister: Huh?
Darenn: Never mind
Annie walks into the house
Annie: Mum, i'm home
Bigsister: Oh no, what do we do!
Darenn: I don't know!
Annie walks into the living room
Annie: Mum!
Bigsister: Hi Hunny

Supernoodles flat
The police and Ambulance are now at the flat. Supernoodles is being carried out to an ambulance in a body bag, and Ninstar is still unconcious, in the back of another ambulance with Fom
Fom: Ninastar, please wake up! Please!
He starts crying. Meanwhile themichael0 is sitting on a park bench on his own, crying

JDIZZELS house
Billy: I cannot believe it
Shaun: You cannot tell your mother son
Billy: How can i not tell her dad!
Shaun: Just please! Do not tell her!
Jdizzel: Me and your dad, we are in love!
Billy: What about mum? What about her? You have been married for the last 12 years and now you are going to chuck it down the drain for a girl who is more than half your age
Shaun: Me and your mum have been on the rocks for years son!
Billy: Don't be stupid! You love eachover, everyone knows that! What about Venice?
Jdizzel: He's taking me, arent you hunny
Billy: What!
Shaun: Son, that was just a lie to your mum!
Billy: When are you going?
Shaun: Well, tomorrow?
Billy: What so you were just going to leave me and mum and run off with Barbie!?
Jdizzel: How dare you!
Shaun: Do not talk to her like that!
Billy: This is unbelievable dad!
Billy runs out of the front door
Shaun: Billy! Billy!

Firewires house
Christina and Firewire are sitting on the sofa together
Christina: We can have a huge white wedding and everything! I have to tell dad!
Firewire: Your dad, i thought you hated him
Christina: Well, i like to forgive and forget

The hospital
Princess: I came as soon as i heard!
Fom: Oh, god! you gave me a fright!
Princess: Sorry, how is she doing?
Fom: I don't know, they wont tell me anything or let me in!
Suddenly, a loud beeping noise comes from the emergency room Ninstar is in and a crowd of doctors and nurse run in
Fom: Oh my god! No!

Firewires house
Christina is on the phone to her father, Mark, who is still in hospital after breaking his leg
Christina: Yeah, we are getting married!... What do you mean, don't be stupid!.. Yeah... Yeah.. But we are in love dad!.. You know what, i don't care!
Christina puts the phone down
Christina: Oh god
Firewire: Dad being a pain?
Christina: First he rings up because i am calling him at 9 at night. Now he doesn't want me as a stepdaughter anymore, and is going to call me his "Widow daughter"
Firewire: Come here
He gives her a big hug
Firewire: It will be alright

The Kestle house
Everybody has now moved into the house and unpacked. The whole family are in the living room
Sia: Right, we all know the rules okay!
30stone: Mum, i am 21, i don't need rules!
Sia: Keep out of trouble and make
Hugo: Me proud. We know, heard it all before!
Sia: ESPECIALLY you Hugo! You have school on Monday! We have to get your uniform done tomorrow and on Sunday i am taking you out for a treat!
Hugo: Treat, what's that!
Andy: Can't i have a treat?
30stone: And me!
Dezzy: And me
Amby: Dezzy, don't be so rude son
30stone: Amby, Shut up.. he can do what he wants
Amby: And that is how he will end up like you!
Amby stands up, takes dezzy's hand and walks him up to bed
30stone: Good! You can't beat me!
Redmoon: Oh shut it son, you are so full of yourself
Amby: (From upstairs) Where are Dezzy's Pyjamas?
Sia: In the airing cupboard love
Amby: Thanks
Redmoon: Shouldn't you be up putting him to bed too son
30stone: No, don't be silly. That is what a woman is for
Sia: Oi you! Shut it!

The hospital
Fom walks out of the Dr's pffice to Princess, he is crying
Fom: It's gone. The baby's gone

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Thanks for reading :)

[Firewire]

Yay!

[Lewis.]

Lol ^^^

[BigSister]

aww no the babys gone!

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by BigSister
aww no the babys gone!

Supernoodles is Dead, so her baby is gone and so is Ninastars.. Death day :(

[amby]

ooh, looks like 30stone will be trouble!!

[Dom:D]

Nooo!!!! Don't die Ninastar:(

[Tom4784]

It's all hapeneing on Tibb Square aint it?

[Christina]

Aww the babies both died :(
And lol what an awful stepfather i have :bawling:

[Lewis.]

Mark hates you Xtina :love:

[Lewis.]

Bump :)

[30stone]

Originally posted by amby
ooh, looks like 30stone will be trouble!!

I love you really ill be a good dad and boyfriend :sad:

lol give me time.

[Lewis.]

Lol, Time is a definate need ;)

[30stone]

Lol that doesnt sound good..:hugesmile:

[Lewis.]

I know it doesn't :wink:

[Sam!]

Wow thats good. You should do a family tree thing or sumin.

[amby]

I can't wait to read more!!!!!

[amby]

new ep???

[Lewis.]

Not tonight :( Been really busy with coursework over the last few days, not had time to finish it off and laptop left at school for tonight because i have media tomorrow 1st thing.. Double tomorrow ;)

sorry

[30stone]

Im getting withdrawal symptoms lewis!!!

[amby]

post some Lewis!!

you have time to refresh the elimination thread thousands of times!!!

[30stone]

Originally posted by amby
post some Lewis!!

you have time to refresh the elimination thread thousands of times!!!

Yeah been resreshing the elimination page instead of finishing this lewis :nono:

[amby]

yeah Lewis!!!

[Lewis.]

Lapppy at school

[amby]

then what are you using to post!?

[Magic]

We are still owed two episodes...now its three :nono::nono::nono:

[30stone]

Falling behind now..

[amby]

triple ep tomorrow!!!

[Lewis.]

Episode Will be posted in about 30 minutes!

[Lewis.]

Here is tonights episode! There was no episode yesterday :( so the episode before this can be found in the week two sum up, which is linked in the front post of this thread! There will be another episode tomorrow because of the missing episode yesterday!

Episode 11 :)

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The Square
It is morning in the square and it is silent. A car pulls up outside of the vic and David jumps out of the car. He is wearing a suit and has a rolex watch. He is a tall man in his early 40's with a medium build

The Kestle house
The whole Family is Gathered in the kitchen
Hugo: What is going on?
Andy: Mum has an announcement
Sia: Yes indeed, i do!
Amby: Well come on then, i need to get Dezzy to his new nursery!
Sia: Calm down, Calm down!
30stone: Who cares about nursery! Let him be free, that is the way to life!
Redmoon: Would you be quite! Your mother is trying to talk!
Dezzy: I'm Hungry mummy!
Amby: shh son, i will get you something in a minute
Dezzy: But i am HUNGRY!
He stamps his feet
30stone: Oi son! Shut your moaning little face and listen to nanny! You don;t want a smacked bottom again do you!
Sia: Thankyou! Right, as you know, we are having a fresh start! No more trouble, no more booze, no more Drugs and no more David threatening us!
Redmoon: Thank god for that
Sia: Ehem, i am trying to talk!
30stone: Yeah Dad!
Hugo: Shut up 30stone!
30stone: You shut up!
Amby: You two, Both shut up!
Sia: Yes, Thankyou! AS i was saying! I want you all to have a brilliant day and not let anything get in the way of you! Make me proud!
Hugo: We wil mum, now can i go! I just want to get today over with!
Andy: Aww, schoolchild! I am going to go out today! Not doing ANY schoolwork, because i have no school!
Sia: Not until we find a decent college or job for you Andy! And you 30stone, you are going to have to look for a job today!
30stone: What about Amby?
Amby: Hey, don't drag me into this. I am busy looking after our son!
Dezzy: HUNGRY! FEED ME!

The hospital
Ninastar is still in intensive care, being kept alive by a breathing machine. Fom is sat in the chair next to her
Fom: Oh god, i wish you would just come back babe. I wish i could re-wind time, make everything go back! This is all my fault!
TheMichael0: Yes it is!
fom: Oh my god! You surprised me!
Themichael0 runs up and grabs Fom by the neck
Themichael0: YOU KILLED HER! IT WAS YOU! YOU KILLED Supernoodles AND NOW I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!
FOm: Help!
A Doctor runs into the room to find Themichael0 choking Fom. He grabs themichael0 and pulls him away
Doctor: SECURITY!
themichael0: I am gonna kill you! You are not getting away with this!

Princess, Billy and Shauns house
Billy is sitting on the sofa on his own, Shaun walks in
Shaun: Son, thanks for not telling
Billy: You either break it with Jdizzel tonight, or mum is going to know!
Princess walks in in a dressing gown
Princess: Break what with Jdizzel and tell me what!

Annie, Bigsister and Darenns house
Bigsister and Annie are in the kitchen, not speaking
Bigsister: Why wont you speak to me!
Annie: Mum, He is Gay!
Bigsister: Oh well, a bit on the side, that is what he is!
Annie: It is wrong! You cannot go out with a gay man mum!
Bigsister: Oh get over it! Anyway, i need to get an outfit for supernoodles funeral
Annie: Her Funeral! What happened to her?
Bigsister: You haven't heard?

Princess, Billy and Shauns house
Princess: Go on, tell me what!
Shaun: Well, we were..
Billy: They have made a bet with eachover over you
Shaun: Yeah,
Princess: And what bet was this?
Billy: They were betting over how long it would take you to pack for Venice!
Princess: Oh, thank God! I thought you were seeing her behind my back or something! Oh well, Anyone want tea?
Billy: Er yeah please
Shaun: No thanks honey, i have to be somewhere
Princess: Okay
Princess walks out into the kitchen
Billy: You have until tonight at 7 to break it with Jdizzel, or i am spilling!

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So there you go! enjoy :)

[Lewis.]

Thoughts?

[Ninastar]

OMG!! I love it !! x

[Lewis.]

Thanks :)

[Shaun]

*has Billy killed*

:tongue:

[30stone]

Its great lewis though i HATE being an asshole to family lol

[Lewis.]

30stone

on fire night, people see the real you :wink:

[30stone]

Right so that means im going to be either a Complete wuss or a Psycho lol.

I wanna be a nice boyfriend/ dad lol.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by 30stone
Right so that means Im going to be either a Complete wuss or a Psycho lol.

I want to be a nice boyfriend/ dad lol.

Or maybe a brave dad, who trie to save his son in the fire, But will you succeed?

Ooops.. Spillage! :lovedup:

[30stone]

Wow year :hugesmile:

Psycho is still a psycho but one who loves his family. i hope i dont die.

[30stone]

Also bet its david who starts the fire!

[Tom4784]

My character reminds me of Tiffany from Eastenders.

[30stone]

Episode tonight lewis?!?

[Magic]

OH FOR GODSS AKE LEWIS WHEN AM I IN IT
SERIOUSLY I RLLY WANT TO NOW
THANKS

and good worlk :)

:thumbs2::thumbs2::thumbs2::thumbs2::thumbs2:

[Magic]

Lewis...have you quit?
We onlt get like 1 episode a week.

[Lewis.]

Yeah, Sorry! I have been really caught up with Revision For my internal exam next Friday! But i am going to take the weekend off and Tibbenders will be back Tomorrow night, with a double episode and on Sunday night with a double episode, to make up for the 4 episodes lost :) Realluy sorry! Once the exam is over, i will have a lot more time to write it and stuff and it will go back to one episode a night.. I will write a load tomorrow and have a day off of revising and everything. I have just come back from school and really cannot be bothered to do even more writing

[Lewis.]

After a week off because of The above^^^ Tibbenders is Back tonight! With 2 episodes at 7pm and 8pm! Not to be missed!

[Wildcat!]

Cool Lewis, but dont let this interfere with your exams. Its not that important:wavey:

[Firewire]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
After a week off because of The above^^^ Tibbenders is Back tonight! With 2 episodes at 7pm and 8pm! Not to be missed!

Cool Lewis. I will make sure I watch. Well read.

[Magic]

Originally posted by Aint_mad_atcha
Cool Lewis, but dont let this interfere with your exams. Its not that important:wavey:

It is!

[30stone]

Yeah!!

This should be goood

:hugesmile:

[Lewis.]

Tonights First episode! Come jpin me between 8 and 9 for the second episode!

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The Kestle house
Kate, 30stone and Andy are in the Kitchen. Amby walks into the house
Amby: Back!
She walks into the kitchen with Dezzy
Kate: How Was nursery my love
Dezzy: It was BRILLIANT! Daddy Guess what i did!
30stone: Do i look like i care what a 5 year old did at nursery?
Amby: Oi!
Kate: Don't be so ignorant!
Andy: What did you do Dezzy?
Dezzy: I built a sandcastle!
Andy: Huh! WOW! Brilliant! Well done mate!
Dezzy: I built a sandcastle daddy!
30stone: Really? How nice, but i have more intresting things to be getting on with!
Amby: Like what then?
30stone: Well, This newspaper!
He Shakes a Newspaper in her face
Amby: Are you telling me a newspaper is more important than your son!
30stone: No, but it is more important than the garbage he comes out with!
Amby: Unbelievable! i wish David had killed you when he had the Chance!
Kate: HUh! HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT!
Amby: You know what 30stone! It is over! I cannot be with you any more!
30stone: Fine go!
Amby grabs Dezzy's hand and Walks out of the front door
30stone: Oi!

The Queen Vic
The Vic is not very busy and Christina and Nickyy are talking
Nickyy: So how's your father?
christina: Oh, He is getting on with his life, Coming home today
Nickyy: Oh the joy!
Christina: Exactly
Nickyy: And how is Firewire?
Christina: Oh, he is great. Very Fine
Nickyy: Haha, Man, You are so lucky! He IS fine
Firewire walks in
Nickyy: Ooh! Speak of the Devil!
Christina: Hello Sexy
Firewire: Hello Ladies, guess who is back!
Christina: Dad!
Christina runs around the bar and outside of the vic. Mark is sitting in a wheelchair with his leg in plaster, being pushed by Gregalz
Christina: Dad!
She flings her arms around him
Mark: Get OFF! Cmon! Get out of my way and get out of my house! I don't need you any more!
Christina: What!
Mark: You can get your stuff later! Now Leave these premises! Gregalz! In!!!
Christina: What!
Firewire: This is her house too!
Mark: No! This was her mums pub and she left it to me! Her mum is Dead so Christina can now leave!
Christina bursts into tears and runs off

Billy, Princess and shauns house
Shaun is sat in the kitchen alone, he is looking at the clock, it is now 6pm. He gets up and walks out of the Front door

The park
Christina is sitting on the swing crying, Firewire walks up to her
Christina: He told my mum he would take care of me!
Firewire: Babe, He is just being stupid, he will forget this soon!
Christina starts to cry again

David's Car
David is sat in his car outside of The Kestle house. He opens his Suit and pulls a gun from the inside. He points the gun at the Kestle house
David: Bang Bang, Your Dead

[30stone]

"Christina: No! This was her mums pub and she left it to me! Her mum is Dead so Christina can now leave!" Meant to be mark saying that?


Also im such a wanker! lol its great though :laugh:

I like this ep lewis! Quality.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
"Christina: No! This was her mums pub and she left it to me! Her mum is Dead so Christina can now leave!" Meant to be mark saying that?


Also Im such a *****r! lol its great though :laugh:

I like this ep lewis! Quality.

Oh yeah.. Thanks :)

[Firewire]

Great ep Lewis. Can't wait for the second.

[30stone]

I officially helped tibbenders im happy lol. :spin2:

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
I officially helped tibbenders Im happy lol. :spin2:

:lovedup:

[Magic]

Whats happening to Ambys character now?

[30stone]

Yeh i was thinking that she hasnt been on msn in ages and i dont think on here for like 4 days now.

poor lass.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Samuel
Whats happening to Ambys character now?

What do you mean?

[MarkWaldorf]

Why do I always read this as TiBB Benders? lmao

I so need to be a returning person with vengance in mind. :lovedup:

[Dom:D]

I :love: Tibbenders:D

[Christina]

Just read the last two. Isnt Mark a sod :(

[Locke.]

It is morning in the square and it is silent. A car pulls up outside of the vic and David jumps out of the car. He is wearing a suit and has a rolex watch. He is a tall man in his early 40's with a medium build

:dazzler:

I see I've already killed someone too.... the more the better.

[Tom4784]

Ain't Firewire a ladies man? First Christina now Nickyy lol.

[Magic]

Episode Two :blush2:

[30stone]

Am Waiting for it aswell


wheres the omnibus to?

[Lewis.]

Tibbenders will be back on Rota from tonight.. With episodes on

Monday
Tuesday
Thursday
Friday

Sorry for all of the delay :)

[Christina]

Yay!

[30stone]

Yeah what time tonight?

[Lewis.]

Episode 13! New episode tomorrow night :)

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The Kestle house
All of the family are arguing in the Kitchen about Amby walking out with Dezzy
30stone: Oh Shut up mother! Why do you think it is all my fualt!
Sia: Because if you hadn't have been so rude and arrogant then she wouldn't have walked out!
30stone: What? You really think i want to hear about a stupid sandcastle!
Redmoon: That is not the point Son! He just wants some love off of you!
Andy: Yeah, you are a bad father 30stone! Go to your room!
30stone: Oh Shut up Andy!
There is a knock at the door
Redmoon: Will you get it honey?
Sia: God! Do i always have to do everything around here!
Sia Walks out of the kitchen and into the entrance. She opens the door
Sia: Oh my god!

Jdizzels house
It is now nearing 7pm and Shaun is round Jdizzels house, both sitting at the table
Shaun: We are going to have to call it off hun
Jdizzel: What!
Shaun: I ust cannot risk mine and Princesses marraige going down the drain!
Jdizzel: I cannot believe you! You were going to take me to Venice though! You had tickets and everything!
Shaun: I have given them to Princess. We are going tomorrow
Jdizzel: But, You Can't!
shaun: I'm sorry
Shaun stands up and walks out leaving Jdizzel on her own. She stands up and looks out of the window. She see's Shaun and Shouts
Jdizzel: SHAUN!

The Square
Shaun walks up to Billy who is walking home with some chips, billy hears Jdizzel shout and sees his father storming towards him
Shaun: Happy now son! We loved eachover! I thought you were going to stand by me! Obviously not!
Shaun Storms away toards the vic

The Kestle house
David grabs Sia by the arm and holds a gun up to her head
Sia: Please Go
David: Now you will shut up or i will shoot!
Sia: Please, No
David: Upstairs now!
Sia: No!
David: Do you want this bullet to be lodged in your brain!
Sia: No
She starts crying
David: Then tell me where he is!
Sia: Who!
David: You know who!
Sia: I don't know! Please! i don't know!
David: Tell me! Where is Magic!

The Queen vic
Nickyy: Well, I better be off now, Been in here since half 3 drowning my sorrows!
TheMichael0: What Sorrows, You think you have it bad, then look at me! My girlfriend was killed and it was all Foms fault!
nickyy: I wouldn't say that Darling!
Themichael0: When he comes back from the hospital he is going to pay for what he did!
nickyy: Don't talk stupid! You are drunk, you just need to get home and go to bed
Fom walks into the Vic
Annie: Fom Love, What is happening!
Fom: Ninastar is going to be fine! She will be out in a couple of weeks!
Annie: Oh thanks god!
Everybody in the Vic starts to clap
Darenn: Well, What a relief!
Nickyy: Well done Fom!
Gregalz: Well done mate!
The Michael0 stands up
Michael0: And what about Supernoodles! What about her! You killed her! You Killed her!
Bigsister: Don't be silly mate!
Michael0: Don't be silly, Don't be Silly.. I'm NOT!
The Michael0 walks past Fom
TheMichael0: You are going to pay for what you did
He walks out of the vic and onto the square

The Kestle house
David has grabbed Sia by the hair and is leading her into the Kitchen with a gun in his hand. He walks into the kitchen
Redmoon: Huh!
David: Everyone Get on the floor now!
He waves the gun around and the family fall to the floor in terror
David: Where is he! WHERE IS Magic!

[Lewis.]

After a few Character mix ups Btw..

In the last episode i accidentally said Kate a few times, This was supposed to be Sia :)

[Greg.!]

omg did my character get killed off coz i aint been in it since week 1

[Lewis.]

You were in it tonight :)

[Magic]

You said I would be in it 2 weeks back :puzzled::puzzled:

[Lewis.]

You will be in tomorrow.

[Greg.!]

lol im not an idiot you edited it lol

[Lewis.]

I didn't? you were in there because i remember writing your name and thinking "He needs a storyline soon"

[Christina]

Great eppy, ooh i wonder what Magic has done :P

[Lewis.]

Thanks Christina :) You will find out tonight :tongue:

[Lewis.]

Remember to stay tuned for the Episode tonight at about 7pm :)

[xDramatick]

will Darenn ever find boy love? :O

[Lewis.]

Hey guys! Here is tonights episode! Next episode is on Thursday!

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Episode 14

The Kestle house
David is waving the gun around and still has Sia by her hair
David: You know where he is! All of you do! Now tel me, or she gets it!
Sia is Crying hysterically
Sia: No, Please no!
Redmoon: David. We don't know. Please just let her go!
David: Tell me now!
30stone: Just tell him mum!
Sia: I can't!
David: Tell me!
Sia: Please stop this! I really can't!
Andy: Mum! Tell him!
Sia: I DONT KNOW!
David shoots his gun at the wall and smiles
David: Now tell me where Magic is

The Vic
Shaun: I have got one thing to advise you mate
Shaun is VeryDrunk
Fom: What's that?
Shaun: Never.. NEVER.. Have kids! They stab you in the back when you aint looking and ruin all of your plans
Fom: Well, Thanks to this shooting, i am not going to have kids anytime soon
Fom has a tear rolling down his eyes
Fom: Anyway! Don't you think you should get home now mate?
Shaun: Don't be silly! Another drink please Annie
Annie: I think you should go home now Darling?
Shaun: No! It is only 9pm! I am staying for another drink!
Annie: Then i refuse to serve you! You are going to do something you don't want to if you drink anymore! So go on, Go home and get a good nights sleep
Shaun: Aghh. Bloody bunch of Party poopers! Right, i am going! See you bores tomorrow!
Shaun gets off of his seat and falls onto the floor just as Princess walks in
Princess: Shaun Darling!
Shaun: Gah! You can get lost aswell! I am fine! Now leave me alone!
Princess: C'mon you! We are going home!
Princess grabs him by the arm and drags him out of the door

Firwires house
Christina and Firewire are both sat on the sofa
Firewire: Another drink?
Christina: No. I better go to bed really. Go and sort things out with Mark tomorrow. Can i stay here tonight?
Firewire: Of course babe, Because, i think i need to get to bed too, and i don't want to get lonely. So yeah!
Christina: Lets go to bed, although i am not tired?
Firewire: And neither am i!
They Kiss and run off into the bedroom giggling

Bigsisters house
Bigsister and Darenn are sitting at the table having tea together
Darenn: God, look at me! I am sittting having tea with a woman who is old enough to be my mother!
Bigsister: Excuse me! I am only 10 years older than you!
Darenn: Yeah, and with the state of Britain these days that is an average for someone to have a baby i would expect
They both Laugh
Darenn: Man, I am going to miss you when i go back!
Bigsister: Then dont go! Stay, here with me!
Darenn: Don't be silly. The men around here are all jerks. I could never have fun with a bloke around walford, even though they are quite tasty! I like a bit of passion!
Bigsister: You've always got me?
Darenn: But i'm gay dear. So unless you have a secret son somewhere..
Bigsister: I don't care. I Love you..
Darenn: Where would i stay?
Bigsister: Here! You could stay and look after me. Annie is always working at the vic these days and i hate being alone! I could open up the loft and you could have a room up there!
Darenn: You really are serious about this aint you!
Bigsister: Very. I don't care whether you are gay, we don't have to sleep with eachover or find eachover attractive to be together. I really mean it, I love you
Darenn starts crying and gives bigsister a hug
Darenn: Look at what you've done now
Bigsister: So what do you say?
Darenn: Oh go on then!

The Kestle house
David is still holding the family in the kitchen. Amby walks into the house with Dezzy. She walks into the corridor towards the kitchen. David runs out of the Kitchen door. Amby screams. David Grabs Dezzy by his waist and runs out to his car. Amby runs after him Screaming
Amby: No! NO!
Dezzy: Mummyyyy!
Amby: Dezzy!!!
David gets into the car with Dezzy. Amby runs out in front of the car
Amby: Your not going! give him back!
The rest of the family run out of the house. David shouts out of the window
David: You should have told me!
Amby: No! Dezzy!!
Andy runs and puts his hand through the back window of the car. David puts his foot down and Drives off, straight into Amby
Amby: No! Agghh!
Andy: No!
David drives off in his car
Sia: Come back!
Redmoon: DAVID!
30stone: Dezzy!
Everyone in the family is crying hysterically apart from Amby, who is lying on the road, unable to move
Amby: whispering, lying on the road.... He.. help

Unknown block of flats
A Man, in his late 20's is sitting on the sofa in a dark room. There are no wallpapers or electricity. His phone starts ringing, He looks down at it, it is a call from "David". He sits up and answers it
David: Hello.. Hello! I have done it! Now get out of there! We need to run! Our plan worked! I have got the boy! C'mon! i am coming!
Magic: Excellent, i will be right there!
Magic spreads and evil Grin

[Magic]

YES.
I am evil haha. I am going to bring down the TiBB empire... I'll soon be owner of the Vic and Cafe.

Watch Out!

[Lewis.]

Haha. :joker:

[30stone]

Great episode tonight lewis!!

didnt see yesterdays so read that too was very good.

[Lewis.]

Thanks Ben :) Thursday and Friday will be action packed!

[Firewire]

Brilliant.

I love Magic's character.

[Jen]

I need more romance.

LOL

[30stone]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks Ben :) Thursday and Friday will be action packed!

Im always out on friday.

So ill not read til saturday but im sure it will all the good stuff usually happens on a friday.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Hey guys! Here is tonights episode! Next episode is on Thursday!

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Episode 14

The Kestle house
David is waving the gun around and still has Sia by her hair
David: You know where he is! All of you do! Now tel me, or she gets it!
Sia is Crying hysterically
Sia: No, Please no!
Redmoon: David. We don't know. Please just let her go!
David: Tell me now!
30stone: Just tell him mum!
Sia: I can't!
David: Tell me!
Sia: Please stop this! I really can't!
Andy: Mum! Tell him!
Sia: I DONT KNOW!
David shoots his gun at the wall and smiles
David: Now tell me where Magic is

The Vic
Shaun: I have got one thing to advise you mate
Shaun is VeryDrunk
Fom: What's that?
Shaun: Never.. NEVER.. Have kids! They stab you in the back when you aint looking and ruin all of your plans
Fom: Well, Thanks to this shooting, i am not going to have kids anytime soon
Fom has a tear rolling down his eyes
Fom: Anyway! Don't you think you should get home now mate?
Shaun: Don't be silly! Another drink please Annie
Annie: I think you should go home now Darling?
Shaun: No! It is only 9pm! I am staying for another drink!
Annie: Then i refuse to serve you! You are going to do something you don't want to if you drink anymore! So go on, Go home and get a good nights sleep
Shaun: Aghh. bl***y bunch of Party poopers! Right, i am going! See you bores tomorrow!
Shaun gets off of his seat and falls onto the floor just as Princess walks in
Princess: Shaun Darling!
Shaun: Gah! You can get lost aswell! I am fine! Now leave me alone!
Princess: C'mon you! We are going home!
Princess grabs him by the arm and drags him out of the door

Firwires house
Christina and Firewire are both sat on the sofa
Firewire: Another drink?
Christina: No. I better go to bed really. Go and sort things out with Mark tomorrow. Can i stay here tonight?
Firewire: Of course babe, Because, i think i need to get to bed too, and i don't want to get lonely. So yeah!
Christina: Lets go to bed, although i am not tired?
Firewire: And neither am i!
They Kiss and run off into the bedroom giggling

Bigsisters house
Bigsister and Darenn are sitting at the table having tea together
Darenn: God, look at me! I am sittting having tea with a woman who is old enough to be my mother!
Bigsister: Excuse me! I am only 10 years older than you!
Darenn: Yeah, and with the state of Britain these days that is an average for someone to have a baby i would expect
They both Laugh
Darenn: Man, I am going to miss you when i go back!
Bigsister: Then dont go! Stay, here with me!
Darenn: Don't be silly. The men around here are all jerks. I could never have fun with a bloke around walford, even though they are quite tasty! I like a bit of passion!
Bigsister: You've always got me?
Darenn: But i'm gay dear. So unless you have a secret son somewhere..
Bigsister: I don't care. I Love you..
Darenn: Where would i stay?
Bigsister: Here! You could stay and look after me. Annie is always working at the vic these days and i hate being alone! I could open up the loft and you could have a room up there!
Darenn: You really are serious about this aint you!
Bigsister: Very. I don't care whether you are gay, we don't have to sleep with eachover or find eachover attractive to be together. I really mean it, I love you
Darenn starts crying and gives bigsister a hug
Darenn: Look at what you've done now
Bigsister: So what do you say?
Darenn: Oh go on then!

The Kestle house
David is still holding the family in the kitchen. Amby walks into the house with Dezzy. She walks into the corridor towards the kitchen. David runs out of the Kitchen door. Amby screams. David Grabs Dezzy by his waist and runs out to his car. Amby runs after him Screaming
Amby: No! NO!
Dezzy: Mummyyyy!
Amby: Dezzy!!!
David gets into the car with Dezzy. Amby runs out in front of the car
Amby: Your not going! give him back!
The rest of the family run out of the house. David shouts out of the window
David: You should have told me!
Amby: No! Dezzy!!
Andy runs and puts his hand through the back window of the car. David puts his foot down and Drives off, straight into Amby
Amby: No! Agghh!
Andy: No!
David drives off in his car
Sia: Come back!
Redmoon: DAVID!
30stone: Dezzy!
Everyone in the family is crying hysterically apart from Amby, who is lying on the road, unable to move
Amby: whispering, lying on the road.... He.. help

Unknown block of flats
A Man, in his late 20's is sitting on the sofa in a dark room. There are no wallpapers or electricity. His phone starts ringing, He looks down at it, it is a call from "David". He sits up and answers it
David: Hello.. Hello! I have done it! Now get out of there! We need to run! Our plan worked! I have got the boy! C'mon! i am coming!
Magic: Excellent, i will be right there!
Magic spreads and evil Grin

just posting it from last page :)

[Lewis.]

Bumping thread :) This needs to be made Sticky in Creative writing or Chat and games me thinks . :blush2:

[Christina]

Loved it!

[30stone]

Any Spoilers?

[30stone]

Tonight lewis?

[Lewis.]

Not tonight :* Like i said, Tibbenders will be on the same nights as Eastenders. :tongue: You will have to wait :devil:

[Jake!]

????

[Lewis.]

Will be posted in a min! Mum will be back in a min with my fixed lappy :)

[Christina]

Yay!

[Lewis.]

Oh my god! Tonights episode is emmence! I love it! even though i wrote it! Enjoy... The starting of.. Fire night :cheer2::devil:

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Episode 15- Fire night

The Square
Amby is still lying in the road. Sia and Hugo are sat next to her. She is awake now. Redmon, andy and 30stone have gone in the car chasing after David
Amby: It hurts!
Sia: It is okay love, the ambulance will be here soon!
Amby: Has he got Dezzy!
Sia: Yes dear. But the boys are going to get him back, trust me!
Amby: Oh nooo! Please.. Please get him back! Please!!!

Redmoons car
Andy, 30stone and Redmoon are in the car driving very fast in search for David
30stone: It is no use! We will have to let the police find him! I am going top kill him when i get my hands on him!
Redmoon: Look, we cannot give up! We know David at least has the decency and he will never hurt Dezzy, we all know he is not like that!
30stone: And where is Magic anyway! It is all because of Magic running away!
Andy: What's that!
Andy points at a big block of flats, they are empty and boarded up. Outside of the flats is a shoe, belonging to Dezzy. They all jump out of the car
30stone: Oh my god! It is Dezzy's!
Redmoon: I think they are in there!
30stone: I am going to kill him!
30stone runs into the flats shouting. He looks everywhere, but there is no sign of anyone
30stone: Dezzy... Where are you! WHERE IS HE!

The square
The ambulance still has not come, but 2 police cars are parked up. Amby is still lying on the floor. She closes her eyes, and lets out a long deep breath
Sia: Amby! AMby!
Hugo: Oh no! Amby! WAKE UP!
Sia: AMBY!!! AMBY!!
They are both stood around Amby shaking her. The Ambulance comes round the corner
Sia: AMBY.. PLEASE!
Hugo: She's dead mum! She's DEAD!
Sia: No, Not my darling Amby! Please no!
The rain starts pouring and Sia bursts into fits of tears. People have now started gathering round the ambulance to see what is happening
Annie: Sia, What's happening!
Sia: No! please! NO!
Gregalz: Sia.. What is going on!
Darenn: eww, is she dead!
Sia: Please.. Please god. Please

A small house on the outskirts of London
Magic: We should be safe here!
Dezzy: I want mummy!
David: SHUT UP STUPID CHILD!
Dezzy starts crying. David picks him up and throws him into the airing cupboard, locking the door behind him
Magic: Now, Step two... we kill the rest of them
David: What!
Magic: WE need them gone! we need to kill them all!
David: All of them!
Magic: Yes, ready to go?
David: NOW?
Magic: YES, NOW!

The Kestle house
The whole family are in the kitchen crying. The police are out searching and it is just the kestle family in the house
Sia: I cannot believe it!
30stone: I am going to kill him! I AM!
30stone stands up in frustration
Redmoon: SIT DOWN!
30stone: I hate him! I hate him!
The phone rings
Sia: It might be the police!
Redmoon: I will get it!
Redmoon walks out of the kitchen door into the living room

The Square
David and Magic are at the back of the Kestle house

The Kestle house
Redmoon walks back into the Kitchen

The Kestles back garden
David: We wait until they go upstairs

The Kestle house
Redmoon: THey've found him! They have found Dezzy!

The Kestles back garden
Magic: What we just wait?

The Kestle house
Sia: Oh thank God!

The Kestles back garden
David: Yes! I am here now! no backing out! We just have to wait! The police are gone. There is no risks!

The kestle house
Redmoon: They want us to go to the station to get him
Sia: Oh god! C'mon boys! Go and get your coats and shoes on! We have to be quick!
The whole family run upstairs to get their coats in the airing cupboard

The Kestles back garden
David: look! They have all gone up! Now is our chance! Go.. Do it!
Magic: I can't!
David: Do it! It was your idea!
Magic: I can't!
David grabs the petrol. He opens the back door and pours it all over the kitchen. He runs back out
David: Now do it! Before they come back down! We want them to be scared!
Magic: I can't!
DAvid: DO IT!!!!

The kestle house
Sia and Redmoon are in their bedroom putting their shoes on
Sia: What was that? I heard someone sho...
There is a bang and a few screams, as the house blows up

[Christina]

Ooh great ep!

[Magic]

ahahhahaha.
Im so evill.

I hope I dont get caught though, and I can be a more regular character.

[Damaris]

When do i come in?

[Lewis.]

Not yet Mambo :) But soon :)

[30stone]

Yeah great episode lewis.

Remind me saturday please as ill miss tomorrows.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Yeah great episode lewis.

Remind me saturday please as ill miss tomorrows.

Thanks! I cannot wait to post tomorrows episode! It is a real Jaw dropper!

I will u2u it to you tomorrow night :)

[MarkWaldorf]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2hqb715.jpg

[30stone]

Thanks lewis :thumbs:

[Lewis.]

Episode 16:

The Queen vic
Gregalz: Oh my god!
Billy: What was that!
Raindropz: Whoa!
Everyone in the vic runs outside to see what is happening

Firewires house
Christina and Firewire are lying in bed. She jumps up
Christina: What was that!
Firewire: What was what!
Christina: That bang?
She looks out of the window
Christina: Oh my god!

The Kestle house- Sia's Bedroom
The whole of the kitchen and hallway is on fire. Sia is lying on the floor screaming. All of the windows have shatered and there are distant cries for help from another bedroom. Redmoon is lying on the floor, With blood coming out of his head
Sia: Help.. Please!
Sia is unable to get up. Her arms are covered in blood and she is crying hysterically

The Kestle house- Andy and Hugo's bedroom
Andy is stood behind the door. He pushes it closed. HUGO is sat on the bed crying. The room is full of smoke and the windows are jammed shut
Hugo: What has happened!
Andy: I dont know! But we are going to have to get mum and dad!
Hugo: We can't! We don't know where the fire is!
Andy: We cannot stay in here! We need to get out! Come on!
Andy Opens the bedroom door and is choked back by a cloud of smoke
Andy: There must be another way we can get out!

The square
Most of the residents are outside of the house watching the fire. It has now spread throughout the whole of the first floor of the house
Gregalz: Someone needs to save them!
Firewire: Christina babe, i am going to go in!
Christina: No! You can't! please dont!
Firewire: I have to!
Firewire walks over to the house, followed by Gregalz and Billy
Princess: Bily come back!
Billy: No mum! I have to do this!
As the three men run up to the house, There is another explosion. Everyone in the square runs back in fear as there is a bang and the roof of the house falls in

Sia's bedroom
The foor falls in to the bedroom. Sia screams as it falls onto her. Part of the roof has trapped her legs and she cannot move
Sia: Help! PLEASE HELP ME!

Hugo and Andy's room
Hugo: Whoa! We need to get out! Please! I dono't want to die!
Andy: Grab a blanket! Quickly, Come on!
They both grab a blanket from the floor and put it over their mouths
Andy: Ready?
He opens the door. The whole house is filled with smoke and the stairs ave broken and are on fire. There is no way down
Andy: Quickly! Get back in!
They both run back into the bedroom, Shutting the door behind them. Andy is now crying as he sits on the bed, Thinking of what to do
Andy: The window is too small for us to jump out of and the stairs are on fire! We need to get over to mums room!

The living room
The Living room is engulfed in flames. 30stone is lying on the floor, crushed by the roof. He opens his eyes and lets out a groan
30stone: Help

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[b]Enjoy! Extra episode tomorrow! It will see one member die, but who will it be? Find out tomorrow in the end of.. "Fire night"!

[Lewis.]

Remember: Tibbenders will be on tomorrow night!

[Magic]

WOOOO.
Loved that episode. More me needed :whistle::whistle: lol

[Novo]

Originally posted by Firewire
Lewis can me and Christina get married?

lewis?

[Tom4784]

Great bunch of episodes, I loved darenn's reaction to Amby's death lol.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Dezzy
Great bunch of episodes, I loved darenn's reaction to Amby's death lol.

Thanks :) I Laughed when i wrote that line :joker::joker:

[Firewire]

What is the chances that I am gonna be TiBBEnders version of Tom Banks.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Episode 16:

The Queen vic
Gregalz: Oh my god!
Billy: What was that!
Raindropz: Whoa!
Everyone in the vic runs outside to see what is happening

Firewires house
Christina and Firewire are lying in bed. She jumps up
Christina: What was that!
Firewire: What was what!
Christina: That bang?
She looks out of the window
Christina: Oh my god!

The Kestle house- Sia's Bedroom
The whole of the kitchen and hallway is on fire. Sia is lying on the floor screaming. All of the windows have shatered and there are distant cries for help from another bedroom. Redmoon is lying on the floor, With blood coming out of his head
Sia: Help.. Please!
Sia is unable to get up. Her arms are covered in blood and she is crying hysterically

The Kestle house- Andy and Hugo's bedroom
Andy is stood behind the door. He pushes it closed. HUGO is sat on the bed crying. The room is full of smoke and the windows are jammed shut
Hugo: What has happened!
Andy: I dont know! But we are going to have to get mum and dad!
Hugo: We can't! We don't know where the fire is!
Andy: We cannot stay in here! We need to get out! Come on!
Andy Opens the bedroom door and is choked back by a cloud of smoke
Andy: There must be another way we can get out!

The square
Most of the residents are outside of the house watching the fire. It has now spread throughout the whole of the first floor of the house
Gregalz: Someone needs to save them!
Firewire: Christina babe, i am going to go in!
Christina: No! You can't! please dont!
Firewire: I have to!
Firewire walks over to the house, followed by Gregalz and Billy
Princess: Bily come back!
Billy: No mum! I have to do this!
As the three men run up to the house, There is another explosion. Everyone in the square runs back in fear as there is a bang and the roof of the house falls in

Sia's bedroom
The foor falls in to the bedroom. Sia screams as it falls onto her. Part of the roof has trapped her legs and she cannot move
Sia: Help! PLEASE HELP ME!

Hugo and Andy's room
Hugo: Whoa! We need to get out! Please! I dono't want to die!
Andy: Grab a blanket! Quickly, Come on!
They both grab a blanket from the floor and put it over their mouths
Andy: Ready?
He opens the door. The whole house is filled with smoke and the stairs ave broken and are on fire. There is no way down
Andy: Quickly! Get back in!
They both run back into the bedroom, Shutting the door behind them. Andy is now crying as he sits on the bed, Thinking of what to do
Andy: The window is too small for us to jump out of and the stairs are on fire! We need to get over to mums room!

The living room
The Living room is engulfed in flames. 30stone is lying on the floor, crushed by the roof. He opens his eyes and lets out a groan
30stone: Help

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[b]Enjoy! Extra episode tomorrow! It will see one member die, but who will it be? Find out tomorrow in the end of.. "Fire night"!

New page, new post :).

[officialleafan]

Ahhh, i'm literally like "Sia get out! Sia Get out!" LMAO!

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by officialleafan
Ahhh, i'm literally like "Sia get out! Sia Get out!" LMAO!

Haha.. But she is trapped! Will she manage to get out. Or will she be the unlucky one who dies!

[Christina]

Ahh loved it!!

[Dom:D]

Omg amazing episode.

[Lewis.]

Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!

[Jake!]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!

I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Jake!
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!

I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.

One off special tonight, as it is fire night :lovedup:

[Jake!]

Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Jake!
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!

I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.

One off special tonight, as it is fire night :lovedup:


Yay. Any chance of me getting in this soon?

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Jake!
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Jake!
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Thanks! Tonights episode will be a real gobsmacker!

I swear your only doing them Mon-Fri with the exception of Wednesday's.

One off special tonight, as it is fire night :lovedup:


Yay. Any chance of me getting in this soon?

Soon :) I have noted a request from a while ago and i am just working my way through the request list, when i need a new character

[30stone]

LOL aw andys crying.

And ive been deemed useless and likely to die i think )=
lol

Another great episode lewis.

[Lewis.]

Thanks ben :)

[Ninastar]

OMG i loved it!


And did i die??

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Ninabitch
OMG i loved it!


And did i die??

Nope. But your baby did. Fom mentioned you coming home in a few days in a previous episode. You will be home in the next week :)

[Lewis.]

Well, i have written tonights episode! Cannot wait to post it, but you will have to wait!

[arista]

Addittional (optional) Ad Ons
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O8Marsh runs and panics as UKTurtle gets near him

Ang7 flys in from Down Under
takes Arista for a Drink and Debate.

30Stone wins another Car
and runs around Naked.

[Lewis.]

Well, The episode we have all been waiting for!

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The Square
The Firemen are still not at the house. The whole square are watching the fire erupt through the house
Firewire: I cannot watch this anymore! I have to go in!
Billy: I'm coming too!
Greg: Me too, Anyone else!
Darenn: Oh, no thanks. i hate all of that blood and gore!
Shaun: Me!
Princess: No you are not! You are still drunk!
Michael0: I will then!
Fom: Fine, i am coming with. We need as many people as we can to get them out.
Michael0: Or we could just let Fom go on his own and die!
nickyy: Michael0!
Fom: I don't know about you! but i would rather save the lives of 5 innocent people! Now come on!
The 5 men run up to the house. Firewire kicks the door in. The hallway is full of fire and smoke
Greg: We are going to burn to death!
Firewire: I don't care!
Firewire runs into the house. Christina Screams. Greg and Michael0 step back
Greg: i cannot go in there! It is suicidal!
Billy: Fine, go back! ready Fom?
fom: Ready.

Sia's bedroom
Sia is still stuck under the roof. She is unconcious. Redmon wakes up
Redmoon: Sia! Sia!
He gets up and tries to lift the block on top of her. He cannot lift it. He opens the bedroom door and runs out into the smoke

The square
Billy and Fom run out of the house into the square
Princess: Billy! Thank god!
Christina: Where is Firewire!
Fom: There is no way upstairs! The stairs have collapsed!
Christina: Where is firewire!
Billy: I think they are all up there. But.. I could not see, The smoke is too thick! And the fire is everywhere! There is no where to go!
Christina: WHERE IS FIREWIRE!
Fom:.. We.. We don't know

Andy and Hugo's bedroom
Andy and Hugo are still sat on the bed. There is no fire in their room, but the smoke is coming through under the door. There is a bang as the door opens and Redmoon runs in. He cloes the door behind him
Hugo: DAD!
Hugo runs up to Redmoon and hugs him
Redmoon: We need to get into my room! Your mum is stuck and i need a hand lifting the roof!
Andy: How! The house is full of smoke! Can we not wait until the fire is gone!
Redmoon: That is the thing! The fire is not going to go! It is spreading! We have to move fast! It could be in the Gas tank any minute now! And when it gets there! We are gone!
Andy: Spreading! What!
Redmoon: look! We have to go and help your mum! Come on! Before it spreads upstairs!
All 3 of them run out of the door. The Hallway upstairs is full of black smoke, and the banisters are on fire. They all run into Sia and Remoons room

The square
christina: I have to get him!
She runs up to the house, but Nickyy catches her and pulls her back
Christina: No. I have to save him!
She is crying
nickyy: Christina, You cannot go in there love!
Christina: NO!

Sia's room
The room is filling up with smoke. The 3 boys are lifting the blocks off of Sia. She wakes up
Sia: oh my god!
Redmoon: Sia, Darling! It is going to be okay!
Hugo: Mum!
Andy: Mum! Mum! We are going to get you out mum!
Andy pushes the last peice of roof off of Sia. She lets out a Gasp and gets up
Hugo: Mum!
He hugs her
Redmoon: We have to get out! We have to go now! Before it is too late!

The Square
Christina is still crying. The firemen have still not arrived and everyone is now starting to get worried about firewire, aswell as the Kestle family. Suddenly, Firewire comes out of the front door, coughing and gasping for air. He is carrying 30stone, who is unconcious
Christina: Firewire! Baby!
Firewire walks down the steps and puts 30stone on the floor
firewire: He is not dead! Not yet! We need to get him an ambulance!
Nickyy: They are all coming! But are being held up!
Annie: And the others?
Firewire: I could not find them! i think they are all upstairs!

Sia's room
Redmoon: ready!
Sia: Wait! Where is 30stone!
Redmoon: Darling, we have not got time! The Gas tank is right below us! We need to get out.. and quick!
Sia: I need my boy!
Redmoon: ready!
Sia: I need him!
Redmoon: Go!
Redmoon opens the door. They all run out the upstairs hallway and look at the stairs. They have collapsed
Andy: We are going to need to jump!
Sia: jump!
redmoon: Yes! Jump! One at a time! Then run out of the door! Come on! Go!
Andy Jumps into the downstairs hallway. The fire is all around him, He runs though it and out of the door

The square
Andy runs out of the door. His face is covered in ash and his hand is bleeding
Annie: It is Andy!
Greg: Huh!
Fom and Greg run over to him and walk him away from the house
Andy: They are coming! They will be here! Any minute now!
Hugo suddenly emerges from the door. He is limping. Greg runs up to him and carries him over to Andy
Andy: Bro! It is going to be okay! I promise!
Hugo: Where is 30stone!
Firewire: He is there, he is alive! You are going to be okay! I promise!

The landing
Redmoon and Sia are stil on the landing
Redmoon: You go first!
Sia: No you!
Redmoon: Just go! Quickly!
Sia jumps! As she does, The landing falls down taking Redmoon with it. As Sia lands she gets up and looks around. Redmoon has fallen through and is lying on the floor. There is a huge wall of fire between them!
Sia: REdmoon! No!
redmoon: just Go!
Sia: no!
Redmoon: Go, Quickly!
Sia: No!
Sia Feels a pair of arms around her. It is Firewire, He carries her out into the square, She is screaming and crying

The Square
Hugo: Mum!
Sia: Redmoon! Someone save him! Please!

The House
Redmoon is lying on the floor still, unable to get up. the fire spreads onto the gas tank in the airing cupboard, right next to where Redmoon is lying
Redmoon: Whispers*** Help
Suddenly the gas tanks Explodes, with a deathening Bang

The square
Everyone has fallen onto the floor, as the house explodes. The Firetruck swings around the corner followed by the ambulance and police
Sia: Redmoon! Redmoon! NOOOOO!

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Rip Redmoon. :(

Tibbenders is Back on Monday :)

[Zac]

Wow! Just read that episode. It's so amazing, and sad.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Zak
Wow! Just read that episode. It's so amazing, and sad.

Have you read them all from the start?

[Zac]

Yea. Just been browsing through them all.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Zak
Yea. Just been browsing through them all.

Good :) If you want an easier read, on the Opening post, there are links to all of the episdodes. Will post week 4 episodes tomorrow morning

[Zac]

Okay. Thanks. :)

[Lewis.]

That is okay :)

And thanks for the positive feedback!

[Firewire]

I thought it was me who was gonna die. lol