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Kornetto
07-03-2009, 06:56 PM
That's really good Lewis :thumbs:. Its sad =/

Deirdre
07-03-2009, 06:56 PM
When will I be in it? :sad:

Lewis.
07-03-2009, 07:01 PM
Soon :) Tonight was all about the kestles : )

Deirdre
07-03-2009, 07:02 PM
Cool. Thanks

Lewis.
07-03-2009, 07:02 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Well, The episode we have all been waiting for!

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The Square
The Firemen are still not at the house. The whole square are watching the fire erupt through the house
Firewire: I cannot watch this anymore! I have to go in!
Billy: I'm coming too!
Greg: Me too, Anyone else!
Darenn: Oh, no thanks. i hate all of that blood and gore!
Shaun: Me!
Princess: No you are not! You are still drunk!
Michael0: I will then!
Fom: Fine, i am coming with. We need as many people as we can to get them out.
Michael0: Or we could just let Fom go on his own and die!
nickyy: Michael0!
Fom: I don't know about you! but i would rather save the lives of 5 innocent people! Now come on!
The 5 men run up to the house. Firewire kicks the door in. The hallway is full of fire and smoke
Greg: We are going to burn to death!
Firewire: I don't care!
Firewire runs into the house. Christina Screams. Greg and Michael0 step back
Greg: i cannot go in there! It is suicidal!
Billy: Fine, go back! ready Fom?
fom: Ready.

Sia's bedroom
Sia is still stuck under the roof. She is unconcious. Redmon wakes up
Redmoon: Sia! Sia!
He gets up and tries to lift the block on top of her. He cannot lift it. He opens the bedroom door and runs out into the smoke

The square
Billy and Fom run out of the house into the square
Princess: Billy! Thank god!
Christina: Where is Firewire!
Fom: There is no way upstairs! The stairs have collapsed!
Christina: Where is firewire!
Billy: I think they are all up there. But.. I could not see, The smoke is too thick! And the fire is everywhere! There is no where to go!
Christina: WHERE IS FIREWIRE!
Fom:.. We.. We don't know

Andy and Hugo's bedroom
Andy and Hugo are still sat on the bed. There is no fire in their room, but the smoke is coming through under the door. There is a bang as the door opens and Redmoon runs in. He cloes the door behind him
Hugo: DAD!
Hugo runs up to Redmoon and hugs him
Redmoon: We need to get into my room! Your mum is stuck and i need a hand lifting the roof!
Andy: How! The house is full of smoke! Can we not wait until the fire is gone!
Redmoon: That is the thing! The fire is not going to go! It is spreading! We have to move fast! It could be in the Gas tank any minute now! And when it gets there! We are gone!
Andy: Spreading! What!
Redmoon: look! We have to go and help your mum! Come on! Before it spreads upstairs!
All 3 of them run out of the door. The Hallway upstairs is full of black smoke, and the banisters are on fire. They all run into Sia and Remoons room

The square
christina: I have to get him!
She runs up to the house, but Nickyy catches her and pulls her back
Christina: No. I have to save him!
She is crying
nickyy: Christina, You cannot go in there love!
Christina: NO!

Sia's room
The room is filling up with smoke. The 3 boys are lifting the blocks off of Sia. She wakes up
Sia: oh my god!
Redmoon: Sia, Darling! It is going to be okay!
Hugo: Mum!
Andy: Mum! Mum! We are going to get you out mum!
Andy pushes the last peice of roof off of Sia. She lets out a Gasp and gets up
Hugo: Mum!
He hugs her
Redmoon: We have to get out! We have to go now! Before it is too late!

The Square
Christina is still crying. The firemen have still not arrived and everyone is now starting to get worried about firewire, aswell as the Kestle family. Suddenly, Firewire comes out of the front door, coughing and gasping for air. He is carrying 30stone, who is unconcious
Christina: Firewire! Baby!
Firewire walks down the steps and puts 30stone on the floor
firewire: He is not dead! Not yet! We need to get him an ambulance!
Nickyy: They are all coming! But are being held up!
Annie: And the others?
Firewire: I could not find them! i think they are all upstairs!

Sia's room
Redmoon: ready!
Sia: Wait! Where is 30stone!
Redmoon: Darling, we have not got time! The Gas tank is right below us! We need to get out.. and quick!
Sia: I need my boy!
Redmoon: ready!
Sia: I need him!
Redmoon: Go!
Redmoon opens the door. They all run out the upstairs hallway and look at the stairs. They have collapsed
Andy: We are going to need to jump!
Sia: jump!
redmoon: Yes! Jump! One at a time! Then run out of the door! Come on! Go!
Andy Jumps into the downstairs hallway. The fire is all around him, He runs though it and out of the door

The square
Andy runs out of the door. His face is covered in ash and his hand is bleeding
Annie: It is Andy!
Greg: Huh!
Fom and Greg run over to him and walk him away from the house
Andy: They are coming! They will be here! Any minute now!
Hugo suddenly emerges from the door. He is limping. Greg runs up to him and carries him over to Andy
Andy: Bro! It is going to be okay! I promise!
Hugo: Where is 30stone!
Firewire: He is there, he is alive! You are going to be okay! I promise!

The landing
Redmoon and Sia are stil on the landing
Redmoon: You go first!
Sia: No you!
Redmoon: Just go! Quickly!
Sia jumps! As she does, The landing falls down taking Redmoon with it. As Sia lands she gets up and looks around. Redmoon has fallen through and is lying on the floor. There is a huge wall of fire between them!
Sia: REdmoon! No!
redmoon: just Go!
Sia: no!
Redmoon: Go, Quickly!
Sia: No!
Sia Feels a pair of arms around her. It is Firewire, He carries her out into the square, She is screaming and crying

The Square
Hugo: Mum!
Sia: Redmoon! Someone save him! Please!

The House
Redmoon is lying on the floor still, unable to get up. the fire spreads onto the gas tank in the airing cupboard, right next to where Redmoon is lying
Redmoon: Whispers*** Help
Suddenly the gas tanks Explodes, with a deathening Bang

The square
Everyone has fallen onto the floor, as the house explodes. The Firetruck swings around the corner followed by the ambulance and police
Sia: Redmoon! Redmoon! NOOOOO!

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Rip Redmoon. :(

Tibbenders is Back on Monday :)

Bumping the post for next page onlookers :)

And Firewire, You sound upset about that :joker:

Ninastar
07-03-2009, 07:07 PM
Omg no!!! That was really really sad !!! =[

Lewis.
07-03-2009, 07:16 PM
Well Nina, it is quite normal in the land of soap

JOSHUAH!
07-03-2009, 07:29 PM
Great Ep. Lewis:D

Jen
07-03-2009, 07:38 PM
How **** are TiBBenders' Emergency services.

Sam!
07-03-2009, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by JDIZZEL
How **** are TiBBenders Emergency services.

I'm writting a tibb letter of complaint.

Lewis.
07-03-2009, 07:40 PM
It is terrible eh.. :bored:

Christina
07-03-2009, 08:05 PM
Originally posted by Firewire
I thought it was me who was going to die. lol So did i lol! Amazing episode my fave so far. RIP Redmoon!

Lewis.
07-03-2009, 08:45 PM
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by Firewire
I thought it was me who was going to die. lol So did i lol! Amazing episode my fave so far. RIP Redmoon!

Thanks :) x

Locke.
07-03-2009, 09:10 PM
You killed the second best character!!

Lewis.
07-03-2009, 09:24 PM
These things happen. Also, in mondays episode

- We find out what hapened to Magic and David
- Ninastar comes back home, is she ready to forgive Fom?
- It is Supernoodles funeral, What does themichhael0 do when Fom turns up
- Darenn meets a newcomer at the queen vic, who is also gay!
- Annie and Billy get close

BigSister
07-03-2009, 09:42 PM
aww no poor red!

30stone
07-03-2009, 09:52 PM
Lol Great ep.

Though it makes me look like a complete pussy )=

Sam!
07-03-2009, 09:53 PM
What happened to me btw lol. I've dissapeared.

Christina
07-03-2009, 10:05 PM
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Lol Great ep.

Though it makes me look like a complete pussy )= Well...


:laugh:

30stone
07-03-2009, 10:12 PM
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Lol Great ep.

Though it makes me look like a complete pussy )= Well...


:laugh:

Oi Woman!

Lewis.
07-03-2009, 10:50 PM
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Lol Great ep.

Though it makes me look like a complete pussy )= Well...


:laugh:

Oi Woman!

:joker: I could have given you Darenns role ;)

Lewis.
08-03-2009, 02:22 PM
Any guesses on who the guy Darenn meets will be?

1 Karma for who-ever gets it right ;)

Magic
08-03-2009, 02:23 PM
Conzors.

Lewis.
08-03-2009, 02:25 PM
Originally posted by Magic
Conzors.

Hahaha.. Damn, i missed that oppurtunity. but good guess though..


WRONG:joker:

Magic
08-03-2009, 02:26 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Magic
Conzors.

Hahaha.. Damn, i missed that oppurtunity. but good guess though..


WRONG:joker:
Sticks?
Loukas?

Lewis.
08-03-2009, 02:27 PM
Originally posted by Magic
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Magic
Conzors.

Hahaha.. Damn, i missed that oppurtunity. but good guess though..


WRONG:joker:
Sticks?
Loukas?

It may be conzors, Sticks or Loukas. Might not, but only one guess each :tongue:

Will give Karma tomorrow night when revealed :kiss:

Callum
08-03-2009, 02:29 PM
I'm never in this. :sad:

Lewis.
08-03-2009, 02:31 PM
Originally posted by Callum
I'm never in this. :sad:

I will write you in soon.. I am just trying not to overload the first few weeks with Loads of characters, i want members to get their head round each story before i bring in more characters. But i will put you in soon. You are next on my request list actually :tongue:

Zac
08-03-2009, 02:32 PM
Can I be in this?

Lewis.
08-03-2009, 02:39 PM
Originally posted by Zak
Can I be in this?

Yes, i will put you on the request list. I go to it whenever i need a new character.

Zac
08-03-2009, 02:40 PM
Thanks!

Damaris
08-03-2009, 10:04 PM
Biatch am i in it soon?:lovedup:

Harry!
08-03-2009, 10:05 PM
Can I join? Could I be a exposive caracter to match my personality

Lewis.
09-03-2009, 08:10 PM
Tibbenders will be posted a bit later tnoght.. About 9pm :)

xx

30stone
09-03-2009, 08:22 PM
Awesome :spin:

Billy
09-03-2009, 08:30 PM
Am I dead? :(

BigSister
09-03-2009, 08:51 PM
I think ive gone off for a break lol

30stone
09-03-2009, 09:47 PM
I hope you havent forgotten :cloud:

Lewis.
09-03-2009, 09:53 PM
Tonights episode :) Not as long.. But is the first in a lot, revealing the reason why David and Magic did it! Enjoy :)

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Firewires flat
It is the morning after the fire, Firewire and Christina are lying in bed together
Firewire: I still cannot believe it
Chrsitina: Neither can I. You ran into that house and i thought you were dead! I was going to go in after you, but then Nickyy pulled me back because of the...
She stops what she is staying
Christina: Anyway, Poor Sia!
Firewire: Rewind, What did you say?
Christina: What do you mean?
Firewire: Because of the... What?
Christina: Did i say that?
Firewire: You know you did! What did you say?
Chrsitina Laughs
Christina: Nothing, Man!
Firewire: I know you are lying?
Christina: Don't be silly!
She laughs again
Firewire: Tell me the truth babe!
Christina: Fine! i was going to tell you last niight but all of this fire business got in the way!
Firewire: Oh my god!
christina: Yep babe!
Firewire: no way!
Christina: I'm Pregnant!

The Square
A car pulls up. The door opens and Fom jumps out with ninabitch. She looks weary and tired
Annie: ninabitch.. Hey!
ninabitch: Just get me inside, Fom, NOW!
Fom: Yeeah sorry. Hey Annie. Tired, Yanow!
Annie: Oh yeah, Sorry
Ninastar: JUST GET ME IN FOM!
Fom: Sorry love
They walk into the house together

The hospital
Sia, Hugo and Andy are all sitting beside 30stone who is in a hospital bed
30stone: When are you going to have the funeral?
Sia says nothing
Hugo: Mum.
Andy: Mum, Helooo?
30stone: Mum! When are you going to have the funeral?!
Sia: Huh.. What! Oh, I don't know! I just need to be alone!
Sia walks out of the room
30stone: She will be fine soon, These things come as a shock to some. It hasn't really got to me yet
Hugo: I really miss him
Andy: Me too!
Dezzy walks into the room
Dezzy: DADDY!
He runs over to 30stone
30stone: Son, Oh man! I have missed you!
Dezzy: Daddy where is mummy?
30stone: Andy, hugo.. Can me and Dezzy talk in private please?
Hugo: Sure.
They both walk out, tears still in both of their eyes
30stone: Mummy and grandad, well they have gone with the angles Dezzy
Dezzy: On an Adventure?
30stone: Yeah, an adventure! They have gone to beat the bad guys and help the angels!
Dezzy: Go mummy!
Dezzy raises his fist in the air, 30stone starts crying. Sia walks in
Sia: DEZZY BABY!
She picks up Dezzy and gives him a big hug
Dezzy: Mummy has gone on an adventure, to help the angels
Sia: Oh, i love you Dezzy!

The Queen Vic
Darenn and Bigsister are sitting at the bar talking to Annie who is working
Darenn: Hmm, Well i hope who-ever did it gets punished!
Bigsister: Well, You didn't hear it from me.. But i heard, Redmoon started it and then commited suicide!
Annie: Don't be silly, We all know that it was an accident!
Doubletrouble: Well, Actually no, It wasn't!
Bigsister: And you are?
Dt: i am Double trouble, I live above the kebab shop. And i know everything that happened!
Darenn: Ooh spill, I love a bit of Gossip!

An unknown flat outside of the square
David and Magic are back at the messy flat. David picks up a peice of paper
David: 2 down, 5 to go!
Magic: What do you mean?
David: We have gotten rid of two of them, now we are going to start taking out the rest!
Magic: I am regretting this now! I know that they dis-owned me as a child, But i cannot take any more innocent lives!
David: You listen to me boy! Sia Deserted you when you were a child! She chucked me and you out! Now, we are going to get them back! I Loved her, and she threw it back in my face!
Magic: But shi is my..
David: I DONT CARE whether she is your mum! WE are going to get rid of all of them! Like we agreed!
Magic, looks down
Magic: Yes Dad.

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Next episode is on Tuesday, Tomorrow!

Ninastar
09-03-2009, 09:58 PM
Omg its so good!!
Am i being a bitch cause of my name lmao ?xxxxx

30stone
09-03-2009, 10:00 PM
Great ep as always.

I am finally an ok dad :)

Dom:D
09-03-2009, 10:14 PM
Great episode!:thumbs:

BigSister
09-03-2009, 10:27 PM
oooh good 1 tonight

Tom4784
09-03-2009, 10:57 PM
I'm positively adorable! :joker:

Love the new twist.

Magic
09-03-2009, 10:59 PM
I love me.

Christina
09-03-2009, 11:11 PM
Omg im preggaz! LOOL.
And aww sad yet great episode!

Lewis.
10-03-2009, 04:25 PM
Thanks Guys :)

MarkWaldorf
11-03-2009, 08:04 PM
.....

Lewis.
12-03-2009, 01:11 PM
Sorry Guys! Have been really ill and come down with Flu and Sickness. Tibbstenders will be back on Monday if i am feeling any better. Have to sleep lots at the moment, so will not be on the forum as much over weekend

Lewis.
15-03-2009, 02:41 PM
^^^^ Read the above post as to why no episodes over last week.

This week will be the last week of series one before Tibbenders goes on a little break for a week or two.. I am really busy at the moment, and with toncilitis, not really in the mood to write, just sleep and browse the forum x But it WILL be back, because i love writing it! So yeah, this will be the last week of series 1!

MarkWaldorf
16-03-2009, 07:34 PM
Ah okay :sad:

Lewis.
16-03-2009, 07:34 PM
Back next Monday :)

BigSister
16-03-2009, 08:56 PM
yay
hope you get better soon too

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 01:41 PM
I have decided to post the new episode early! Tibbenders is back on rota tomorrow night after a week off because i was ill :( But here it is.. Back again! Tibbenders!


Enjoy Guys! Another episode tomorrow night :)

Hospital
It is the next morning. 30stone is ready to go back home, he is sitting in the waiting room ready to be discharged

The B&B
The Kestle Family are all in the B&B sitting in the living area. Nicky and Markspears own the B&B. Markspears is a 43 year old male, who is a bit on the larger side, but has all the love in the world. Nickyy Is 39. She is Blonde and Beautiful and is quite a Rude lady. They both own the Cafe aswell
Sia: So how much will that be?
Nickyy: For one night, that is 35 pounds please, and more if i were charging for he inconvinience of having all of these kids here!
Andy: 35 Pounds!
Nickyy: Yes, in cash.. Now please
Markspears: Don't be Silly Nickyy! You know what guys, it is on the house
Sia: Oh thanks so much!
Nickyy: Hello! We are not a charity! nobody gets anywhere in life like that Markspears! So yeah, 35 pounds please. Cmon, hurry up!
Markspears: Leave the poor family alone!
Sia: Look Don't worry, I will pay up
Markspears: No you wont! You will stay until you need to, on the house!
Nickyy: MArkus! What the hell a..
Markspears: Don't be so NAsty, YOu would expect sympathy!
Dezzy: Can we go now Nanny?
Sia: Yes Love, c'mon we are off!
She turns to Markspears
Sia: Thanks for all of your help love
Markspears: Anything for you my dear
Nicky Gives a fake cough
Sia: And you, Ya Slapper!
Nickyy: OI!
Sia and the family run out of the door! Nicky Running after her

Firewires flat
Firewire and Christina are lying in bed together. It is about 10am and they both look quite Happy
Christina: I will have to go and get scans done i suppose?
Firewire: Yeah! You will Wont you!
Christina: Oh my God! I am SO EXCITED!
She Grins happily and waves her hands about. Firewire grabs one of her hands and puts it on his thigh
Firewire: You know we are going to have to tell your Dad
Christina: Look, He is not my dad anymore, now mum is dead he has nothing to do with me! He was just my stepdad, and now he is nothing
Firewire: Well, what about telling other people?
Christina: I suppose i will have to tell Nickyy and Princess, They are my best friends? And after the 12 week scan, we can let everybody else know!
Firewire: And the wedding?
Christina: What do you mean?
Firewire: Well, I kind of booked a date? It was supposed to be a surprise, but we can hold it off until after the baby is born if you would like?
Christina: YOu BOOKED A DATE! Oh my God! When!
Firewire: Well, It was supposed to be Next Sunday?
Chrsitina: Oh MY GOD! I Love you!
Chrsitina Jumps on Firewire and gives him a huge hug
Christina: Wait? NEXT SUNDAY!
Firewire: Well yeah, It was supposed to be a surprise?
Christina: Oh god! I better get out and fine a dress! And make up.. And flowers! Oh god! I cannot get everything ready in a week!
Firewire: Everything is already ready babe, i have sorted it all out! All you need to do is find a dress!
Christina: I don't deserve you babe.
She Gives him a long kiss, then jumps out of the bed to have a shower. He Lies bac, putting his arms behind his head

The Cafe
Nicky unlocks the door and walks in with Markspears behind her
Nicky: I cannot believe that woman!
Markspears: What!
Nicky: Talking to me like that! God! She has made an enemy of me!
Markspears: Babe, she had no money and you were demanding it from her!
Nicky: Well, I am not going to let people get away with paying! We are not in the recession because of nobody, it is people giving out freebies, like you!
Markspears: Nicky Just Leave it honey
nicky: No! I am going round there tonight to get the money!
Markspears: Round where Nicky! Her house has been burnt down and now she has to go to the community center! She has no family around here!
Nicky: Well i will go over to the community center then!
Markspears: Nicky, You are a spiteful cow and i wish i had never married you!
Nickyy Gives Markspears a Slap around the face
Markspears: Fine. It's Over
Markspears Walks out of the cafe door

The Queen Vic
The Vic is nearly Empty. Annie is behind the bar and Billy is at the bar. Princess and Shaun are sitting at a table in the corner, where they always sit. Gregalz and Bigsister are chatting on the Sofa and Darenn is in the toilet. Jdizzel Walks into the Vic, looking Flustered. She looks over at Shaun and walks over to him
Jdizzel: You Mate, You are Scum!
She Jumps on Shaun, hitting him
Princess: Oi! Billy! HELP!
Billy Runs over to Jdizzel and pulls her off
Billy: What the hell do you think you are doing!
Jdizzel: I Hate you Shaun! I hate you!
She starts crying and runs out of the vic, Gregalz chases after her
Bigsister: Well, What was that all about?
Darenn Walks out of the toilets
Darenn: I heard someone scream?
Bigsister: Yeah, It was Jdizzel, She tried to Kill Shaun!
Darenn: Oh my Word!
Annie: Mother! She did not try to kill him! Don't be Silly! Are you okay shaun?
Annie walks over to shaun and kneels down beside him

The Square
Gregalz is running after Jdizzel
Greg: What was that all about!
Jdizzel: I Loved him! I really Did!
Greg: Who! Who did you Love!
Jdizzel: Shaun
Jdizzel cries again. Greg looks at her, shocked

A car, pulled in at a motorway
Magic is stiitin alone in the car, he is holding a phone up to his ear
David: Hello?
Magic: Dad,..
David: WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU MAGIC!
Magic: I'm out Dad! I cannot do this anymore! I cannot kill my own mum!
David: You have to.. You.. Oh my god! The police are here... Who told the...
Magic: I'm Sorry Dad.
Magic drops the phone, and cries

Sam!
22-03-2009, 01:43 PM
Where have I dissapeared to lol.

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 01:44 PM
[b]Guys, Starting from Next Episode there will be name changes. Lool

Markus=Markspears
Dezzy=Muse
Shaun=Picto
Jdizzel=Leezjid

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 01:44 PM
Originally posted by Sam!
Where have I dissapeared to lol.

Next episode has you in :joker:

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 02:09 PM
Guys, Getting a brand new advertising banner and some "Video Adverts" For "The Wedding".. Keep your eye out for them!

30stone
22-03-2009, 02:16 PM
Quality as per usual lewis.

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 02:18 PM
Thanks Ben :) I know you are a huge supporter of Tibbenders! :spin:

I am excited about making the advertisement video for.. The wedding!

30stone
22-03-2009, 02:19 PM
Christina will be loving this.

Hugo
22-03-2009, 02:20 PM
TiBBenders facing axe after rival show, TiBBOaks a big hit with viewers.

:tongue:

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 02:20 PM
The theme music for the video is amazing!

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 02:21 PM
Originally posted by Hugo
TiBBenders facing axe after rival show, TiBBOaks a big hit with viewers.

:tongue:

Tibbenders is a classic :rolleyes:

And Btw.. I love your banner :lovedup: :joker:

Hugo
22-03-2009, 02:22 PM
Thanks.
:bigsmile:

hunter from exhale made it.

xDramatick
22-03-2009, 02:33 PM
Darenn is in the toilet.
doing what lmfao!

Ninastar
22-03-2009, 02:36 PM
Love it x

Christina
22-03-2009, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Christina will be loving this. LOOOL!
Yup, cant wait for the wedding lol! :laugh:

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 05:44 PM
Loool Christina. The wedding is going to be HUGE! i am making advertisements and everything! Lool x

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 06:28 PM
Brand new advert! For the wedding!

http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t267/funkychicken999/Woonewalbum/wedding.png

Made by the marvelous Sam!

Also! Gossip Zone has come!

View My Video (http://tinypic.com/usermedia.php?uo=S1mCU2Ap%2FsibTcK51pJrLg%3D%3D)

Christina
22-03-2009, 06:32 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Loool Christina. The wedding is going to be HUGE! i am making advertisements and everything! Lool x Haha, i have a feeling im not gonna hear the end of this off of two certain members!

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 07:05 PM
To commemorate Tibbenders first wedding, Here is the Advert for the wedding of Christina and Firewire, with the catchy slogan used for the wedding "What could go wrong?" Well, What could go wrong is what i hear you ask? You will have to wait and see! The wedding will be aired on Sunday the 29th Of March! Everyone, is invited

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_d4qQMcPhA


Tibbenders, The wedding. Unmissable

Christina
22-03-2009, 07:15 PM
Haha loved it!

Lewis.
22-03-2009, 07:39 PM
Thanks :D

Lewis.
23-03-2009, 06:17 PM
Another Episode tonight! x It introduces a new family to the sqaure!

Lewis.
23-03-2009, 07:57 PM
Tonights episode Guys! A Bit Longer than usual but introduces a couple of New Characters. Next Episode will be tomorrow! Enjoy x

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Jdizzels house
Greg and Jdizzel are sitting on the sofa. She is crying and he has his arm around her
Greg: Look, I cannot solve anything unless you tell me what you are crying for
Jdizzel: I Love Him!
Greg: Who?
Jdizzel: PICTO! Who do you think!
Greg: What?
Jdizzel: Picto! I Love Him!
Greg: HE is with Prince..
Jdizzel: I know that! I know! But.. we
Greg: You werent!
Jdizzel: We were having an affair!

The Queen Vic
Annie is wiping Blood from Picto's face. He Looks tired and is clearly worried about his relationship with Lizzedj Getting out. Princess and Billy are sitting next to Picto, wondering why LizzelJ Attacked him? The Vic is slowly filling up, and everybody is gossiping about what happened!
Bigsister: Oi Annie, Why did she do it?
Annie: I don't know mum, and it is not my place to know! If Picto wants to tell, he can. God Mother, you are so nosey!
Bigsister: Well, I have to keep up to date with things around here, you see!
Fom and ninastar walk into the vic, Everybody goes silent and stares at them
Ninastar: What? WHAT?
Princess: ninastar, Come sit here love
ninastar: c'mon Fom
Fom: Stare all you want guys, We don't really Care!
Lili Walks in. She is about 60 and has Light Grey hair. She is very stuck up and posh. Annie finishes wiping Picto's face and Gets up to greet Lili. TheMichaelO walks in behind her. He is wearing a suit and walks straight over to Fom. Everybody stares at him as Fom stands up. They come face to face
TheMichaelO: Fom.. Look, I.. I am Sorry
Fom: Mate, don't say Sorry. You did nothing, I was the one who had the affair. Not you
TheMichaelO: Can i have a word Fom? Annie, can we go upstairs? It is important?
Fom: Okay
Annie: Sure thing Guys. Don't go in the bedroom, Mark is in a mood, just go into the Front room
Fom: Thanks
They walk off upstairs. The whole Vic is silent
Lili: How Dare He show his face in here! Cheating Scum!
Annie: Lili, Mind your mouth!
Lili: Well, Cheating on the poor girl and now acting like nothing happened! Hunny..
She walks over to Ninastar, Cluthing her walking stick, and puts her arm around her
Lili: Men Like those, don't need encouraging! Dump Him! He is scum! And until you dump him, so are you, for putting up with it!
Darenn: Ouch, Bitchy?
Ninastar: Fom is not Scum!
She Stand up
Ninastar: He was there for me when i was in pain! When i was holding on to my life! And where were you! Gossiping about it in here?
Lili: I have not been in here for months dear, Not with this flu going round!
Ninastar: Yeah, so you been on the phone have you? Gossiping with your Mates from Bingo? Your old Birds?
Darenn: Well, This is more exciting than that tv program! Paris hiltons British best friend! I knew i should have entered!
Bigsister: Darenn, Shut up, i cannot hear!
Darenn: Sorry Dear
He sits back in a huff
Lili: How dare you speak to me like that! You Selfish, Soft, COW!
Ninastar picks up her drink and throws it on Lili. She squeals and Ninastar runs upstairs to go and get Fom
Lili: I AM PRESSING CHARGES FOR THAT!
Princess Sits there, shocked. She picks up Her Bag and Stands up
Princess: I think i better go and get an ice pack, That bruise is swelling!
She runs off in a hurry, leaving a silent vic, all staring at Lili

The Community Centre
Sia walks in to the Community centre with Andy. The Rest of the Kids are in the park playing. Josh is behind the counter, writing. He is about 25 and is very good looking. He has a great fashion sense and is a real ladies man. He is single and loves a good night out!
josh: Ooh, Hello there Sia! I am ever so sorry to hear about the Fire? do they know what caused it?
Andy: The Police have arrested someone. We think it is David, the man that kidnapped Dezzy. But we are not sure? They are looking for another man
Sia: Josh, is there anywhere where we can stay for tonight? I have found a house outside the train station for us to live in, but it wont be ready until tomorrow! If i cannot find anywhere, the kids will be taken away from me. And WE have already made an enemy of Nickyy!
Josh: Ahh, Let me have a look, Hmm, Yes! We have a hostel outside Walford? About 3 miles away? It takes in people for up to 3 nights a month, after that, they have to pay. Is that okay? You get free food for the first night, so it should all be free!
Sia: Ahh, thankyou so much! i will give them a ring? What is the number?
Hugo runs in, in a hurry
Hugo: Mum! Mum! Dezzy has fell over! 30stone has gone to get ice creams? What should i do?
Sia: Well, Is it bad?
Hugo: I don't kow? But he is crying!
Sia: Andy, go out and see to Dezzy will you?
Andy: What! Mum!
Sia: Andy, You are 19! Act your age and help your 6 year old brother!
Andy: Oh God!
Andy And Hugo walk out, Andy, clearly annoyed
Sia: Yeah, so.. That number?

The Vic
Scene goes to Upstairs in the Vic. Ninastar is standing outside the door listening to Fom and Themichael0 talking. There are tears down her face, but she is being silent
TheMichaelO: I am sorry, because.. Because..
Fom: Just tell me MAte!
TheMichaelO: I was Cheating on Supernoodles.
Fom: You What!
TheMichaelO: I was cheating on Her! Okay! I was Cheating!
Fom: With who? Who Mate!
TheMichaelO: I do not quite know? when she broke it with me she told me "Milly" Was not her name, She was a criminal. She took my money and spent it. She Took Me, and made me think she was the one! She made me sleep with her! She made me nearly run off with her! That is where i was Fom. Not On a bussiness trip, With her! And now, i have threatedned you for cheating.. And Look at me! I was Planning on running away!
He Bursts into Tears, and Fom Gives him a huge Man Hug
Fom: We All make Mistakes Mate, All of us
ninastar walks away from the door and downstairs, She walks through the vic, Picks up her Bag and goes
Billy: Well, I hope she is okay? I will go and check?
Fom walks into the vic from the bar
Fom: Well, Glad that is sorted, Now, Where is ninastar?

The Market
Christina and Direwire are walking through the market, talking about the wedding
Firwire: that would look nice on your Dress?
He Points to a Flower in one of the stalls
Christina: Naaa, Too tacky. I want the wedding to be Stunning
Firwier: And Stunning it will be, Especially if you are there!
Christina Laughs and Firewire Kisses her

Lizzledj's House
Greg: How Long for?
Lizzledj: About, 2 months. We were going to run away to venice together and everything was going to be perfect! Now.. My Life is over!
Greg: What! Because one man dumped you? Don't be silly? Mate, He is twice your age!
LizzLedj: But.. I Loved him!

Police Interview Room
David is sat in the room with two police officers.
Police1: David, Did you Kidnap Dezzy?
David:.......... Yes.
Police1: And Did you Set fire to the house, murdering an innocent man?
David:.......... Yes.
Police2: David, Was there anybody else involved in your crimes? Anybody we could potentially arrest, Helped you in any way?
David:.......... No

JOSHUAH!
23-03-2009, 08:12 PM
Good episode Lewis!
I made my own little appearance too, yay. :flowers:

Jen
23-03-2009, 08:13 PM
Just read it...

I'm thinking I will most likely ***** around with Greg.

LOL

Christina
23-03-2009, 08:13 PM
Ooh good episode :D

Lewis.
23-03-2009, 08:13 PM
Josh, You will be in a lot more tomorrow :) And thanks!

Must go now.. Coursework to do :( Please Leave Feedback for Epsidoes.. It is nice reading it x

Lewis.
23-03-2009, 08:14 PM
***** around with Greg.. Haha. :cheer:

And thanks christina x

30stone
23-03-2009, 08:15 PM
LOL Davids going to jail.


And LOL Jen!!! "***** around"

Harry!
23-03-2009, 08:18 PM
Am I in it? I love the show I really do but I would love to see what it would be like in 'Tibbenders'

BigSister
23-03-2009, 08:39 PM
lol im so nosy hehe
And haha paris hiltons british best friend

Lewis.
23-03-2009, 08:54 PM
Lool. Madonaa, you will be in soon :) And Bigsister, Beaky Neaky Trunky Trunnky ;0 That is what my nan said to me when i was nosey. :laugh3:

Glad you enjoyed it guys x

Firewire
23-03-2009, 08:55 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)

Christina and Direwire are walking through the market, talking about the wedding
Firwire: that would look nice on your Dress?
He Points to a Flower in one of the stalls
Christina: Naaa, Too tacky. I want the wedding to be Stunning
Firwier: And Stunning it will be, Especially if you are there!
Christina Laughs and Firewire Kisses her

You get my name right ONCE! Well done.

lol

30stone
23-03-2009, 08:56 PM
Originally posted by BigSister
lol im so nosy hehe
And haha paris hiltons british best friend

Blanche! LOL

Lewis.
23-03-2009, 08:56 PM
Originally posted by Firewire
Originally posted by Lewis:)

Christina and Direwire are walking through the market, talking about the wedding
Firwire: that would look nice on your Dress?
He Points to a Flower in one of the stalls
Christina: Naaa, Too tacky. I want the wedding to be Stunning
Firwier: And Stunning it will be, Especially if you are there!
Christina Laughs and Firewire Kisses her

You get my name right ONCE! Well done.

lol

Oh god! Did not notice that. Loool. :joker: Sorry! Did you enjoy the episode?

Ninastar
23-03-2009, 09:03 PM
Omg I loved it!.

I am sorry lili for being a bitch. I couldnt help myself x

Tom4784
23-03-2009, 09:16 PM
Loool! Lil's a great character.

Lewis.
23-03-2009, 09:30 PM
Lili's Character is going to be great! A Female ian Beale crossed with the horrible side of Pauline Peggy and Pat, Put together!

:wink:

BigSister
23-03-2009, 10:16 PM
Yay im like Blanche but im trying to think of some1 from eastenders as well

lily.
23-03-2009, 11:22 PM
Christ, I'm like a peggy mitchell sort by the looks of it .. or worse.. haha..

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 09:52 AM
Thanks you Guys :) More tonight x

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 04:00 PM
Tonights episode, will be the best, in terms of writing, yet!

Some Spoilers-

Firewire: It was supposed to be a surprise for us.. They have bought the empty house next to the vic!
Lili: Helloooo Love!
Princess: Oh God!
Picto: Right, I am going out. To get the money from the post office
Picto Stands up and goes out the back door. Lili Walks into the living room, with a huge smile on her face
Lili: Hello SweetHeart!
Princess: Lili. Hey, How are you?
Lili: Fine thanks Dear, Now, Are you going to put the kettle on?
Mark: Go on.. Tell me!
Christina: Dad.. Well.. Mark.. I'm..
Firewire: She's pregnant!
David: What is his name?
Police: Magic, Magic was his name

New Characters tonight!

DamonJ
24-03-2009, 04:11 PM
I hope I'm a bitch :devil:

Ninastar
24-03-2009, 04:14 PM
Me too damon lol x

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 04:22 PM
You Are ;):spin2:

Zac
24-03-2009, 06:09 PM
When am I going to be in? Could I please have an dramatic entrance when I first arrive. Thanks. :hugesmile:

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 06:12 PM
Soon Zak! You are still on the very long list of people that want to be in! i am going through it as fast as i can ,without it getting too confusing with too many characters. x Next episode in a bit ;) x

Dom:D
24-03-2009, 06:12 PM
Can't wait untill tonights episode!!

Zac
24-03-2009, 06:13 PM
Oh, thanks Lews. Can't wait for the next episode. :banana:

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 06:13 PM
It should be good Dom :D A Long one it is.. but good! :tongue:

Harry!
24-03-2009, 06:16 PM
Am I going to be in it yet?

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 06:17 PM
Like i said with Zak.. You are on the request list.. I will add you in next time i need a boy and you are next on this ist.. not long now though :) x

30stone
24-03-2009, 06:39 PM
Am i still menna be in hospital?

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 06:40 PM
Here is tonights episode! Enjoy it! It is a long one.. But i hope most episodes will be like this now! Another one tomorrow night! x And PLEASE leave feedback, it is nice to know what you all think!

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*Starting from todays episode, Robin-van-perfect, Or 30stone, will be called Ben*

Firwires Flat
Christina and Firewire are sat on the sofa together. It is the next morning and She is flicking through a wedding magazine and He is going through music on the laptop, for their first dance song
Firewire: How about this?
He Clicks and "I will always love you" Starts playing
Christina: Naa, Everyone has that! We need something unique? Something nobody else will have?
Firewire: What about this one then?
He Clicks and "Amazed" starts playing. Firwire starts singing along
Firewire: #Every little thing that you do, Baby i'm amazed by you# Aww, Isn't that nice?
Christina: Lovely! But i want a nice slow song, something new?
Firewire: WEll, This one?
He Clicks, and "Single Ladies" Starts playing
Christina: Yeah, lets have that!
Firewire: Honestly?
Christina: Sarcasm babe. God, How old are you?
Firewire: This one is nice..
He Clicks and "I Will Be" Starts playing
Christina: Aww, this is nice! Who sings this?
Firewire: Leona Lewis, It is a lovely song isn't it?
Christina: I Like it.. I LOVE it. Let's have it!
Firewire stands up and takes Christinas hand. He pulls her up, and they start dancing slowly. Firewires Phone goes off
Firewire: One minute
He Takes his phone out of his pocket and runs out into the Kitchen. Christina Sits down on the sofa and picks the laptop up. She minimizes the music player, to find a website labeled.. "Uk bigamy Laws"

The B&B
nicky Comes down the stairs in a dressing gown. Markspears is lying on the sofa, snoring. She Looks at him and bends down, so her face is right next to his. She shouts
nickyy: OI!
Markspears jumps up in shock
Nickyy: C'mon! You might not want to come to bed with me anymore, but that does not mean you can lie around on the sofa all day long! Now, UP! It is 11 o clock!
Markspears wipes his eyes and sits up. Nickyy walks out into the hallway. She shouts to Markspears
Nickyy: I don't know why you are down here anyway, we have 3 empty rooms up there! THREE! Well, it can't be helped with you giving away freebies to everyone!
Markspears: It was Sia! She just lost her house! Where else could she go!
nickyy: Well, She should have gone to the community center! They would have given her a nice place to stay! Where do you think she stayed last night?

Bridge street
Sia and her family are walking down Bridge street. They are all carrying bags and look very tired
Andy: Well, where do we go now mum?
Sia: Princess has said we can move in with her for a few days. With Those two going to Venice today and Billy going back up to university, the house will be empty for a couple of weeks, so we can stay!
They walk into the train station to see Ben sitting on the bench
Dezzy: DADDY!
Dezzy runs over to Ben. He jumps on him and hugs him
Ben: Son! Aww, have i Missed you!
Sia: Ben, How are you dear?
Ben: Fine thanks Mum! You alright boy?
He Ruffles Hugo's hair
Hugo: Yes thanks Bro!
Ben: So, where are we going?
Sia: Princess has given us the house for the next few weeks, they are all going away
Ben: Well, Off we go then!
They walk off down the street

Firewires Flat
Firewire Runs back into the living room, with the phone in one hand. Christina is sitting on the sofa, with the laptop on the table
Christina: Bigamy Laws? Why are you looking at Bigamy Laws?
Firewire: Ermm.. Well. You know, just intrested?
christina: Hmm, Nothing you want to tell me?
Firewire: Don't be silly
He walks to the table and clicks X on the screen
Firewire: Right, That was my mum. Her, Dad and Damon are coming down for the wedding!
Christina: Aww, isn't that nice!
Firewire: Babe, they want to move down here!
Christina: What!
Firewire: It was supposed to be a surprise for us.. They have bought the empty house next to the vic!
Christina: Oh.. Okay? When are they coming?
Firewire: They will be here any minute now
Christina: well, we better go and greet them then
Christina Grabs the keys and walks out of the flat door. She looks around the corner at firewire
Christina: C'mon!
He Hesitates, then walks out aswell, closing the door behind him

Princess, Picto and Billy's House
Princess and Picto are sat at the table eating dinner, Billy is sat on the sofa, watching tv
Princess: Well, it all seems quite weird?
Picto: Look, i don't know why she did it? I would tell you if i did!
Princess: Maybe i should go and have a word with her later?
Picto: No, she will only lash out at you aswell! Obviously it was something i said?
Princess: Hmm,
Picto: Wait until we get back from Venice. Anyway.. have you seen my NEw Top? I want to put it in my suitcase before we leave tonight?
Princess: No?
The Doorbell rings
Princess: Billy, will you go and get that love
Billy: Mum, I am busy!
Princess: No you are not! You are 23 and have NO job or Kids! Now go and get the door!
Billy stands up and walks out to get the door
Princess: Can he not see we are stressed?
The Door opens and a high voice shouts from the hallway
Lili: Helloooo Love!
Princess: Oh God!
Picto: Right, I am going out. To get the money from the post office
Picto Stands up and goes out the back door. Lili Walks into the living room, with a huge smile on her face
Lili: Hello SweetHeart!
Princess: Lili. Hey, How are you?
Lili: Fine thanks Dear, Now, Are you going to put the kettle on?
Princess: Hmm, Yes. Now sit down dear
She gives a despairing look to Billy and walks out into the kitchen

Lezzidj's House
Lezzidj is sitting alone, on the phone to Greg. It is about 2pm and she is still in her dressing gown
Jdizzel: Yeah, I will. Yes.. Okay. I understand. I know but... Yes.. I Love Him though.. I don't care... Okay.. See you later.. Bye
She puts the phone down, And puts her head in her hands

The Square
Firewire and christina are standing outside, What will be Lauren, Damon, And Ross's House. They look tired and have been standing there for the last 45 minutes
Christina: I thought you said they would be here any minute now!
Firewire: Well, that is what mum said?
Christina: God.
Firewire: C'mon, lets go back in!
Christina: No.. I want a drink
Firewire: Well, what about your dad, won't he be in there?
Christina: He is not my dad! not anymore!
Christina walks into the door of the vic, Firewire trailing behind her. Everybody stares at her as she walks up to the bar
Christina: Hey Annie, Ermm... A Gin please?
Annie: I am sorry Babe, but not in your condition
Christina: What do you mean?
Annie: You know, with the baby and everything
Christina: What! Who told you that?
She looks around, everyone is still staring. She see's Nicky in the corner, nicky Raises her hand
Christina: NICKY!
Suddenly everyone applauds Christina. She looks doubtful, but happy that everyone is okay with her being Pregnant.
Christina: Aww, Thanks guys!
She walks over to Nicky and whispers to her
christina: YOU TOLD!
nicky: I am sorry love, I couldn't help myself?
Darenn walks up to her
Darenn: Christina Love..
He Puts his hand on her shoulder
Darenn: Well done!
Christina: Aww thankyou Darling!
Darenn Starts to cry with happyness
Christina: Don't Cry!
Darenn: I am just so happy! I have become very fond of you since i moved here!
She Laughs. Suddenly Mark comes out from the toliets in a wheelchar, his leg still in a cast. Everyone goes silent
Mark: Well, What's all this about then?
Bigsister coughs. Annie whistles and Gregalz slurps on his drink
Mark: Go on.. Tell me!
Christina: Dad.. Well.. Mark.. I'm..
Firewire: She's pregnant!
Mark looks at Christina, Shocked.He wheels himself over to her and bursts into tears
Mark: I'm Sorry!
Christina: I'm Sorry Too!
She bends down and hugs Mark. Everyone in the Vic Claps and Cheers. Sam! Walks in with a suitcase, Back from his school trip. Christina Runs over and hugs him. He starts crying
Christina: Sam! What is the matter?
Sam!: Hannah, She.. She left me
Christina holds her arms around her brother

Princess, Picto and Billy's house
Lili is sat on the sofa, Feet on the table and drinking her cup of tea. Princess walks in with her cup of tea and sits on the small chair in the corner
Princess: So then Love, how can i help you?
Lili: Well, I have come to ask why Lezzidj did that to Poor Picto?
Princess: Well, I don't know, and if i did, i am not going to go telling everyone
Lili: You wouldn't be telling everyone dear.. Only me!
Princess: Exactly.. Everyone!
Lili rolls her eyes and takes another slurp of her tea

Police Station
David is sitting alone in his Cell. A Police officer opens the door of the cell and walks in
Police: David, We have some news on the investigation. We have just had a call from a man, claiming to have been involved with the crime? he says he is your son, would you like to explain?
David: What is his name?
Police: Magic, Magic was his name
David:... Hmmm...I don't know who you are on about.. Just leave him go

Firewire
24-03-2009, 06:53 PM
Great episode Lewis.

30stone
24-03-2009, 06:53 PM
Lol that was long, Great episode, tension is building..

Zac
24-03-2009, 06:54 PM
Wow! Amazing episode, as always. :tongue:
I like how long you made it. I don't know how you do it. The idea's and storylines are amazing. Great work.

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 06:56 PM
Thanks Guys! It is hard.. But i enjoy it! I am going to try and make every episode like that! It makes it worth reading and really gets you into it, before you have to stop reading. :bigsmile:

Ninastar
24-03-2009, 06:58 PM
Omg its well good x x x x

Ninastar
24-03-2009, 07:15 PM
I have a feelng that firewire is having an affair x

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 07:18 PM
Thanks Ninastar.. And.. Al l will be revealed on the wedding :thumbs:

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 08:07 PM
COMFIRMED!

Sundays episode will be a double episode.. One at 6pm and one at 7pm

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 09:55 PM
just realised.. I have written an episode for tomorrow, when there is not supposed to be an episode tomorrow? Oh well, an extra episode tomorrow as well :angel:

BigSister
24-03-2009, 09:59 PM
ooh yay thats good ^_^

Lewis.
24-03-2009, 10:00 PM
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Am i still menna be in hospital?

You cam out tonight if you haven't noticed :thumbs2:

And Bigsister *Hi Five* You will love Tomorrows episode. You and Lili have a good old gossip :joker:

lily.
24-03-2009, 10:02 PM
haha.. i'm back from the dead and starring in TiBBenders.. damn Shaun killed me off in TiBBoaks... it was tragic I tell you lol

JOSHUAH!
24-03-2009, 10:07 PM
LOVED IT.
You're so good at this Lewis!

BigSister
24-03-2009, 10:42 PM
erm yay.... ^_^

Lewis.
25-03-2009, 04:09 PM
Thatnks Josh! Maybe another episode tonight? Depends whether i will get on the computer in the evening, at dads atm?

Firewire
25-03-2009, 05:10 PM
It is gonna be funny.

Me anc Christina aren't even gonna be at our own wedding!

Lewis.
25-03-2009, 07:34 PM
[b]No Tibbenders tonight, not managed to get laptop back. :( Will DEFFO be tomorrow though! Usually none on a wednesday anyway, so not going off rota ;)

Lewis.
25-03-2009, 08:50 PM
Tonights episode! I got my lappy back! Please enjoy and Leave feedback x Another episode tomorrow maybe :)

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Princess, Picto and Billy's house
Lili is about to walk out of the door, she has been at the house for about an hour. Se has all of her bags and princess is leading her out
Lili: Alright love, i will see you soon okay! Keep your ears open and if you have any news or gossip, you know where i live!
Princess: Yes, yes, I will! Have a nice evening!
Lili Walks out. Princess locks the door and sighs. Billy comes running down the stairs
billy: Thanks God she is gone!
Princess: Thankyou Billy! Thanks for leaving me!
Pito opens the front door and walks in
Princess: And you!
She looks sternly at Picto
Picto: What! I was out geting these!
Picto holds up an envolope full of euro's
Princess: Yeah, and then sitting on the bench having a fag for the last half an hour!
Picto looks at Princess with sorry eyes
Princess: And Don't look at me like that!
She points at Picto and walks out into the kitchen

Bigsister, Annie and Darenns house
Bigsister and Darenn are sitting in the living room watching Television. The Door opens and Annie walks in
Bigsister: Hello Love!
Annie: Hey!
She walks into the living room
Annie: Cannot stay long, am covering a shift at the vic at 6pm, so going to have something to eat and go again!
Darenn: Better be quick then dear! It is half 5 Now!
Annie: Eugh! I hate work!
Annie walks out into the kitchen
Bigsister: Well, it is the only way to get forward in life hun!
Annie: Yeah, Well. I am thinking about finding another job? Greg.! really wants a job at the vic.. He can take my place. I was looking into going to university, you know, Getting a degree?
Darenn: Don't be silly love! Uni is a waste of time these days! I went and studied Beauty for 3 years, and now look at me! unemployed and Loving it!
Annie: Yeah and living with two girls who cater for your every need
Darenn: Yeah, i suppose. What more could i want? Apart from a nice man?
Bigsister: Well, we could all do with one of those!
Darenn: That Billy is nice?
Annie walks into the living roomm
Annie: He is twenty Darenn? You are nearly 40!
Darenn: Well, i like a younger lad!
Annie: Anyway, he isn't gay!
Bigsister: Well, you seem quite protective! Sure you two don't have something going on?
Annie: MUM!
Bigsister: What?
Annie: We split up two years ago! And anyway, we are just friends!
Darenn: You went out with Billy?
Bigsister: Yeah! They were gonna get married and everything!
Darenn: Oooh You lucky girl!

The Queen Vic
Christina and Firewire are sat at a table with Mark, Greg.!, Leezidj, Fom, TheMichaelO, Ninastar and ALL of the kestle family, who are waiting for Princess and Shaun to give the keys over. Everybody is celebrating the news that Christina is pregnant
Firewire: Speech! Can i make a speech?
Fom: Of course!
Andy: Go on mate!
Sia: GO ON SON!
Christina: Please don't embarass me
Everyone Laughs
Firewire: Right well..
Firewire stands up and taps a spoon on a glass. Everyone in the vic looks at him
Firewire: Right..
Princess, Picto and Billy walk in, all with suitcases. Princcess leans over to Sia and hands her the house keys
Sia: Thankyou so much love
Princess: Right we are off
Everybody wishes them goodbye and they leave
Firewire: Right, as i was saying! Christina, well.. She means the world to me. I Love her, and well, Love her really! That is all i can do! She is my best friend, my soulmate, and, will soon be my wife! She is carrying my baby, and i couldn't think of a better perso..
Lauren Rushes into the vic. She is Firewires mum and is quite a busty lady. She is about 60 years old and is a very fierce woman
Lauren: Oi! Firewire!
she walks up to Firewire and grabs his arm
Lauren: c'mon Boy! Get Over and Help your mother unpack! Me and the boys have been here for hours!
She pulls Firewire across the Vic
Firewire: Mum, Er, Hey! Nice to see you too! And anyway, you have not been waiting for hours! I went and checked 5 minutes ago!
Lauren: Where are your manners boy! You know not to answer me back!
She drags him out of the vic. Everyone Bursts out laughing
Fom: Hey Christina! I think that is the mother in Law!
Everyone Laughs again.. Christina laughs with them
christina: God! I better sort this out!
Christina walks out of the vic

The Square
Christina walks up to Firewire, he is carrying boxes into the new house
Christina: Errm, Firewire.. A Word please?
Firewire: okay!
He puts the boxes down, Ross, His dad (in his 60's, also on the large side of life. He is quite a nice man) Walks up to Christina
Ross: And you are?
Christina: I am christina, Firewires Fiance!
She holds out her hand. But Ross pushes it back down and gives her a huge hug
Ross: Ahh, Welcome to the family!
Christina: Thanks!
He lets go. Lauren shouts from the doorway
Lauren: Oi! Ross! Cmon! I don't want no hanging around! Who the hell is she!
Firewires Brother is Damon, He is about 29 and is Bi-sexual. He loves to party and is quite a bitch. He hugs his brother and walks into the house. Ross and Christina walk up to the house, to meet Lauren
Lauren: Who the hell are you?
Christina: Oh, hey! I am Christina, Firewires Fiance
She puts out her hand
Lauren: Well, then.. You better start helping! I don't want no slacking! C'mon! Get a move ono
Lauren walks back into the house in a hurry
Christina: Oh god!

30stone
25-03-2009, 08:59 PM
Lol Christina's - in Laws.

Great ep as per usual lewis.

BigSister
25-03-2009, 10:08 PM
am i gonna be meddling in a relationship hehe
Good one tonight ^_^

Shaun
26-03-2009, 01:24 AM
Just caught up, I'm loving it.

Jen, ****ing make me bleed again and I'll stab you in the ovary.

Lewis.
26-03-2009, 06:19 AM
^^Haha :hugesmile:

Thanks guys! x

Lewis.
26-03-2009, 09:21 PM
No episode tonight.. Been really busy.. Too busy to write. Had coursework :( Deffo tomorrow night though! And Saturday will have an episode.. and Sunday will have two! So Tonight is no real bother, i have loads of airtime ;)

Lewis.
27-03-2009, 08:16 PM
Tonights Episdoe.. Enjoy! Another one Tomorrow Late ;)

____________

Firewire and christina's Flat
Christina is lying on the sofa in her dressing gown reading TIBB Magazine. Firewire is out in the kitchen on the phone. He walks in, looking flustered
Christina: Who was that?
Firewire: Mum! She wants us to go in and help her sort out her new wardrobe
Christina: No
Firewire: What?
Christina: No. You know i have a dress fitting this morning!
Firewire: Oh, God! Can you not postpone it?
Christina: No! the wedding is in 3 days hun! no dress, no wedding, Simple as!
Firewire: fine, i will go on my own then?
Christina: Fine, Go!
Firewire walks out of the door
Christina: She is your mother anyway
She flicks the page and Sighs

The Queen Vic
Annie is behind the bar. Lili is sitting in the corner, Hassling Josh
Lili: So then! Got any gossip?
Josh: No Lili, None.
Lili: God! You lot are boring around here! Did you hear about Sia and her famiily? Apparently Sia did it herself! You know! started the Fire!
Josh: Yeah, Whatever Lili. We all know that isn't true!
Lili: And Christina and Firewire! Apparently she cheated on him with Mark! Her own step father! She told me herself!
Josh: Lili, Why don't you crawl back under your rock and stop harrasing everybody with your absurd lies?!
Lili: How DARE you speak to your elders like that!
Lili gets up and storms out of the vic
Annie: Josh, What is the matter with her?
Josh: Well, You know! Always gossiping and spreading things, it gets on my nerves! i have lived here since is was born 25 years ago, and not once have i met such a compulsive Gossiper
Annie: Well, She is old, She needs something to keep her entertained
Josh: Hmm He gets up and walks out of the dooor
Annie: Oh, Bye then?
Annie carries on cleaning the counter of the bar

Firewire and Christina's Flat
Christina walks in, with a brand new dress in her hand. She carried it into the bedroom. Firewire is sitting on the bed, putting some clothes away
Christina: Oh My God! You are not supposed to See!
Christina runs out, but the dress gets caught on the door handle. Christina Falls with the dress in her hand. She Screams as the dress Rips from top to bottom
christina: OH MY GOD!
She bursts into tears with the dress in her hand. Firewire comes out, and pats her on the head
Christina: This was the only one there that i liked and now.... ARggh!

Fom and Ninastars house
fom and ninastar are lying in bed together
Ninastar: What about Ivf?
Fom: Hun, you cannot have kids.. There is no way you can have kids! I am sorry to be blunt! But you need to wake up and smel the coffee
Ninastar: Do you think it is denial?
Fom: Yes, I think so
Ninastar: I am never having kids then! Never, is what you are trying to say?
Fom: unless you adopt, No?
Ninastar: Adopt?
Close up to Ninastars face, She smiles

Firewire and Christina's House
christina is lying against Firewire, Crying
Christina: The Dress, is runied babe!
Firewire: you can always stitch it?
Christina: what, All of that! It will never be right!
She starts crying again and the doorbell goes
Firewire: I will get it!
Firewire runs out to the door and opens it. It is Damon, His Brother. He runs into the house
Damon: I have some Bad News mate! She knows everything, and she is coming to Walford!
Firewire: Who!
Damon: Kornetto!
Firewire: What!
Damon: I know everything Firewire!

Lauren Ross and Damons house
Lauren and Ross are sitting on the sofa together watching Tv
Lauren: Well, Not one person has come round wit flowers or chocolate as a moving in present yet! Ignorant people!
There is a knock at the door
Lauren: COME IN!
The Door opens, and Darenn and Bigsister walk in with A Box of Chocolates and flowers
Lauren: Too Little Too late people, Sorry But we wanted these EARLIER not now! I have been waiting all day!
She Grabs the Presents
Lauren: Now.. GET OUT!
Darenn: Excuse me.. Missy! You may think you can boss us around, but we dont think so! You old sag!
Lauren: Huh!
Darenn: C'mon, We're out! There is a great Gay bar i have been wanting to visit!
Bigsister Runs out with Darenn
Lauren: Scumbags
Ross: Oh my god
He Shakes his head in dissaproval

Ninastar and Foms house
Fom Walks into the house aftr going to the queen vic. He Goes to the table and opens up the laptop. There is a page up about Uk Adoption and an application form
Fom: ninastar.. You in?
There is no Answer. Fom Clicks the X and opens up his email. He clicks on inbox and finds a message from PinkMich, He opens it. It Reads...
________________-
Babe, Thanks for the other night. It was so much fun, You are proving to be a great bit on the side ;)
Anyway, once I move to Walford, we can see each over more. Then you can dump that scab, Ninastar.
I Love you babe

PinkMich
x

P.s. It was nice to have a part of you inside me

________________-

Fom Laughs and clicks the "X" Button

Police Station
[i]Magic is sat at an interview table with a plice officer, in an interview
Police Officer: Did you blow up the house?
Magic: No
Police: So then! Were you involved?
Magic: Yes
Police: How?
Magic: WEll, I planned it all
Police: Hmmm.. With who?
Magic: My Dad. Well no.. He thinks he is.
Police? What? Who thinks What?
Magic: David! He thinks he is my dad.. but he isn't.
Police: Well then.. Who is?
Magic:... My REal Dad, was Redmoon

Harry!
27-03-2009, 08:33 PM
Good episode Lewis!

Firewire
27-03-2009, 08:44 PM
Oh ma lord!

I am married to Katt.

Lewis.
27-03-2009, 09:13 PM
You might be? You might not? Who knows? She could be your secret sister? All will be revealed at the wedding :wavey:

BigSister
27-03-2009, 09:17 PM
well at least i brought a present ^_^

Kornetto
27-03-2009, 10:05 PM
Ahh lmao. Here i go im starting to come in. :P Thanks Lewis.

Lewis.
27-03-2009, 10:08 PM
That is okay! You have an amizing Character x

Kornetto
27-03-2009, 10:08 PM
Lol , im getting excited. Is the next episode tommarow? :hug:

Lewis.
27-03-2009, 10:14 PM
Yes.. ANd you will come in at the wedding on Sunday ;)

x

Christina
28-03-2009, 05:39 PM
Just read all of these, loved them all! :spin2:

Lewis.
29-03-2009, 02:39 PM
[b]Guys, The Wedding date on my Banner is wrong. I planned to wedding to be today, but got carried away and wrote a whole load of episodes for this week coming, Leading up to the wedding. So the wedding will now be on Friday evening and the preperations realy begin.. in tomorrows episode :)

Sorry for the delay x

Lewis.
31-03-2009, 06:13 PM
[i]So then guys... Here is the plan for the wedding! The usual episodes this week will be scrapped. There will be no episode until Saturday!

On Saturday there will be 3 Episodes. This will lead up to the wedding, and will end with Christina about to walk into the Church to get married. There will be another 2 EXTRA Long Episodes on Sunday, Which will tell the tale of the wedding! I may be away this weekend, but if i am, i will give Josh the episodes on Friday night and i am sure he won't mind posting them on Saturday and Sunday

So, Thanks for reading Tibbenders over the past few months and i hope you enjoy the wedding! The normal routine will be back next week, with episodes every night except Wednesday. Thanks x

MarkWaldorf
31-03-2009, 06:27 PM
Woop!

Lewis.
31-03-2009, 06:28 PM
[i]The Wedding is going to be Brilliant Markwardolf, You make an entrance ;)

MarkWaldorf
31-03-2009, 06:31 PM
LOL oh god :laugh:

BigSister
31-03-2009, 06:50 PM
Thanks for that lewis

Lewis.
06-04-2009, 12:30 PM
Guys, Tibbenders is back tomorrow night! I am back home now and feeling a lot better! The wedding will be on Saturday ;) This week is the lead up! I am really sorry for the wait!

x

Firewire
06-04-2009, 12:38 PM
Finally.

Lewis.
06-04-2009, 12:39 PM
Originally posted by Firewire
Finally.

Hey, I have been away cheering up mum. If you knew how hard it is to write every night then you wouldn't say that. But it is the holidays now so have loads more extra time. Lool.

Firewire
06-04-2009, 12:42 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Firewire
Finally.

Hey, I have been away cheering up mum. If you knew how hard it is to write every night then you wouldn't say that. But it is the holidays now so have loads more extra time. Lool.

Yeah I know.

I didn't mean it in a bad way. Just a happy way.

I know you have been through a lot.

Lewis.
06-04-2009, 04:54 PM
Originally posted by Firewire
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Firewire
Finally.

Hey, I have been away cheering up mum. If you knew how hard it is to write every night then you wouldn't say that. But it is the holidays now so have loads more extra time. Lool.

Yeah I know.

I didn't mean it in a bad way. Just a happy way.

I know you have been through a lot.

I know you didn't. And i didn't mean it in a nasty way, because what i wrote sounds quite nasty now i have read it back. Lool

Previews of the wedding up in a minute!

BigSister
06-04-2009, 06:39 PM
Hope you feel better now and looking forward to the next episode

Firewire
06-04-2009, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Firewire
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Firewire
Finally.

Hey, I have been away cheering up mum. If you knew how hard it is to write every night then you wouldn't say that. But it is the holidays now so have loads more extra time. Lool.

Yeah I know.

I didn't mean it in a bad way. Just a happy way.

I know you have been through a lot.

I know you didn't. And i didn't mean it in a nasty way, because what i wrote sounds quite nasty now i have read it back. Lool

Previews of the wedding up in a minute!

Cool! :thumbs:

Firewire
06-04-2009, 06:50 PM
BTW Lewis in the title it says 27/3/0909.

Just to let you know.

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 05:40 PM
New Episode tonight as Tibbenders gets back to routine! Should be a funny one tonight. It is the lead up to the wedding :P

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 05:43 PM
Episode 24 -

Christina and Firewires house
It is the day before the wedding and Firewire has just woken up. He sits up on the bed and lets out a yawn. CHristina Jumps up in a hurry
Christina: OH MY GOD! What time is it?
Firewire: Err.. Let me see.
He Looks at his watch on the bedside cabinet
Firewire: It is 11am hun
CHristina: NOOOO!
SHe jumps out of bed in a fluster, and puts a jumper and jeans on
Firewire: What's the rush?
Christina: Just Look at the list on the table!
Firewire picks up a peice of paper with writing all over it, he reads it
9am - Collect Flowers
10am - Take dress back and get a new one
12am - Pick Up firewires Suit from the dry cleaners
12:30am - Meeting with Vicar
1pm - Go to the vic to get everything ready for my Hen night
4pm - Go to Gregalz house to see what he has planned for Firewires Stag night
5pm - Go back home and get changed for Hen night
7pm - Go to the vic for hen night

Firewire: Whats so bad about that?
Christina: THE LIST STARTS AT 9am AND IT IS NOW 11am!
Firewire: Oh, I see?
With that christina runs out of the room in a hurry, snatching the list as she goes. Firewire Picks up his phone and rings his brother Damon
Firewire: Hello... No.. You cannot let her come.. SHE CAN't!.. I know.. eah.. Yeahh.. If she comes, i am in deep trouble. I Love Christina more than anything, KORNETTO CANNOT COME!
Firewire Puts the phone down and sighs

Fom and ninastars house
Fom is Lying in bed looking at his phone. ninastar is in the kitchen, picking out clothes for Christina's Hen Night
ninastar: Which looks best?
She holds out two dresses
Fom: Both. You Look beautiful in anything hun
Ninastar Smiles
Ninastar: Aww thanks Love!
She Jumps on Fom, who drops his phone
Ninastar: Anyway, who are you texting?
Fom: No-one
They both reach for the phone, bu Ninastar grabs it first. Fom tries to get it off of her
ninastar: What is so private that your girlfriend cannot see?
Fom: Nothing! Just Give it back!
Ninastar looks at the screen and reads what Fom was texting to Pinkmich
Heya Sexy. Cannot wait to come over tonight and see you. We can do what we did the other night, Nice and slow. Ninatar is out, so there will be no problems with me staying for a while. I Love you, and always will. I Love your hair, Eyes, Face, Skin and our Sex ;) We Make a great couple, and always will. Love You, Fom x
Ninastar: What is that?
Fom: Nothing! Just give it back!
Ninastar: WHAT IS THAT!
Fom: Babe!
Ninastar starts hitting Fom, Crying in the proccess
Ninastar: NOT GAIN FOM! NOT AGAIN!
She Looks at the phone again, and looks through Fom's Messages, reading all of the texts he had sent to Pinkmich
Fom: BAbe! Look, I can stop.. Please!
Ninastar Slaps Fom right around the face. Tears are rolling from her eyes
Ninastar: It is over!
Ninastar runs out of the door and into the square. Fom picks up his phone, goes to what he was writing to PinkMich, and presses send

The Square
Ninastar is running through the square crying. She runs out at Lili who is standing on a pavement. She accidentally knocks Lili onto the road. Christina, Driving Fast through the square, Suddenly comes zooming up the road
Lili: AGHHH
Ninastar: Huh!
Christina Screams as she runs over Lili's Foot

Gregalz's house
Gregalz is With Damon in his house, planning Firewires Stag Due
Damon: So then, All we need is a Stripper!
Gregalz: Don't be Silly. Firewire Would hate that!
Damon: Who Cares, I want one
He Laughs as he picks up the phone book
Gregalz: You will never find one in there...
Damon pics up his phone and dails a number
Gregalz: Maybe not
Gregalz sighs and blows up another Balloon

The Square
Christina jumps out of her car. Lili is lying in the road screaming
Christina: Oh my god i am so Sorry!
Lili: GET AWAY YOU MAD COW!
Christina: Oh no.
Lili: CALL AN AMBULANCE! NOW! OH GOD! I am going to DIE!
Christina Runs to her car and dials 999. Some of the People in the vic come out
Bigsister: Lili.. What happened?
Lili: That Mad Cow Tried to Kill Me!
Christina: WHAT!
Lili: She tried to murderer little old me! Scheming Bitch!
Christina: Don't be Ridiculous!
Lili: Quickly Someone, Call the police! WE have a murderer on the loose!
Christina gets into her car and drives off
Lili: Hit and Run! Another few years in Jail For you Dear!
Darenn(Now Satisfation): Oh Hunny, Never mind. Where did she clip you?
Lili: CLIP ME! CLIP ME! She Didn't Clip me! She HIT ME! The Scheming cow tried to Kill me! It would have been easier just to put my head under the wheel and Drive off. Horrible Little Girl!
Satisfaction Sighs

Fom and Ninastars house
Fom opens the door and in walks Pinkmich. She is a sexy and Sassy Girl, who is dressed in very revealing clothes
PinkMich: Hello Fom, How are you?
He Grabs her By the Bum and leads her in



Another Episode Tomorrow! Please Leave Feedback ;)

JOSHUAH!
07-04-2009, 05:52 PM
The Square
Christina jumps out of her car. Lili is lying in the road screaming
Christina: Oh my god i am so Sorry!
Lili: GET AWAY YOU MAD COW!
Christina: Oh no.
Lili: CALL AN AMBULANCE! NOW! OH GOD! I am going to DIE!
Christina Runs to her car and dials 999. Some of the People in the vic come out
Bigsister: Lili.. What happened?
Lili: That Mad Cow Tried to Kill Me!
Christina: WHAT!
Lili: She tried to murderer little old me! Scheming Bitch!
Christina: Don't be Ridiculous!
Lili: Quickly Someone, Call the police! WE have a murderer on the loose!
Christina gets into her car and drives off
Lili: Hit and Run! Another few years in Jail For you Dear!
Darenn(Now Satisfation): Oh Hunny, Never mind. Where did she clip you?
Lili: CLIP ME! CLIP ME! She Didn't Clip me! She HIT ME! The Scheming cow tried to Kill me! It would have been easier just to put my head under the wheel and Drive off. Horrible Little Girl!
Satisfaction Sighs


LMFAO
:laugh2: :laugh2: :laugh2: :laugh2: :laugh2:
I laughed so much at that bit. Great stuff Lewis!

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 06:04 PM
Thanks. I Loved writing that! Lili is my favourite character and has some great lines coming up ;)

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 08:18 PM
[i]Now YOU can get involved! YOU can decide the outcome of Christina and Firewires Wedding! TWO Weddings have been written! One Good Wedding, where they get married, and one, where things don't go so smoothly, and marraige is the last thing on their mind! Only YOU can determine the answer! Vote in the poll Below and Decide Whether the wedding should be A Happy moments in Tibbenders history, or not ;)

http://www.polldaddy.com/p/1522478/

MarkWaldorf
07-04-2009, 08:20 PM
LOL! brilliant. :bigsmile:

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 08:21 PM
I Love how i am So OTT With Tibbenders. Lool. This wedding is going to be great!

30stone
07-04-2009, 08:32 PM
Lol Quality Episode Lewis.

Glad to see your obviously feeling happier :hugesmile:

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 08:32 PM
A Lot Happier Thanks :) Have you Voted?

Firewire
07-04-2009, 08:34 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)

Gregalz's house
Gregalz is With Damon in his house, planning Firewires Stag Due
Damon: So then, All we need is a Stripper!
Gregalz: Don't be Silly. Firewire Would hate that!
Damon: Who Cares, I want one
He Laughs as he picks up the phone book
Gregalz: You will never find one in there...
Damon pics up his phone and dails a number
Gregalz: Maybe not
Gregalz sighs and blows up another Balloon


Yeah. Your right lol. I would hate it.

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 08:37 PM
Lool ^

30stone
07-04-2009, 08:38 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
A Lot Happier Thanks :) Have you Voted?

Yeah :spin2:


And Firewire why would you hate a stripper?:shocked:

Firewire
07-04-2009, 08:39 PM
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Originally posted by Lewis:)
A Lot Happier Thanks :) Have you Voted?

Yeah :spin2:


And Firewire why would you hate a stripper?:shocked:

I'm just not that type of guy. lol

Firewire
07-04-2009, 08:39 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Lool ^

What's so lool?

DamonJ
07-04-2009, 08:50 PM
I'm straight?
wut ze eff?

Firewire
07-04-2009, 08:51 PM
Originally posted by DamonJ
I'm straight?
wut ze eff?

lol

Phone TiBBcom. (Pisstake of Ofcom)

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 08:52 PM
Originally posted by DamonJ
I'm straight?
wut ze eff?

Hehe.. I could change that into another disaster for the Stag due. Hehe... You have given me so many ideas ;) The Blokes are going to get a shock if you are gay and ordering the stripper ;)

30stone
07-04-2009, 09:19 PM
lol aha lewis has ideas now.


And Firewire a stripper is just a bit of fun..

get a roly poly stripper, ugly and fat women. Lovely.

Kornetto
07-04-2009, 09:34 PM
:laugh:hehehe. this is fun

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 09:35 PM
Kornetto and Markwaldorf make an entrance on the wedding ;)

Kornetto
07-04-2009, 09:37 PM
Fun times :bouncy:

Lewis.
07-04-2009, 09:39 PM
The Voting is so funny. You will not find out the results until after the wedding though ;)

Kornetto
07-04-2009, 09:51 PM
I bet its No :P

Christina
08-04-2009, 06:25 PM
LOL!
Woops driving too fast was i? :P
Haha great episode, and why would Firewire need a stripper when he has me :laugh:

*mazedsalv**
08-04-2009, 06:30 PM
Haha Lewis this is quality!! :bigsmile:

JOSHUAH!
08-04-2009, 06:30 PM
Originally posted by Christina
LOL!
Woops driving too fast was i? :P
Haha great episode, and why would Firewire need a stripper when he has me :laugh:

SLAG.

Christina
08-04-2009, 06:31 PM
Originally posted by JOSHUAH!
Originally posted by Christina
LOL!
Woops driving too fast was i? :P
Haha great episode, and why would Firewire need a stripper when he has me :laugh:

SLAG.

TOSSERR.

*reports abuse*

Harry!
08-04-2009, 06:32 PM
When am I going to be on it again?

Christina
08-04-2009, 06:33 PM
Lmao, i called Josh a tosser over msn for his comment and he actually got scared, aww!

*mazedsalv**
08-04-2009, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by Christina
Lmao, i called Josh a tosser over msn for his comment and he actually got scared, aww!

so its not just me that your harsh to, huh?

Christina
08-04-2009, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Lmao, i called Josh a tosser over msn for his comment and he actually got scared, aww!

so its not just me that your harsh to, huh? Noo, he was harsh first he called me a slag for noo reason :(
You're not on msn :bawling:

*mazedsalv**
08-04-2009, 06:58 PM
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Lmao, i called Josh a tosser over msn for his comment and he actually got scared, aww!

so its not just me that your harsh to, huh? Noo, he was harsh first he called me a slag for noo reason :(
You're not on msn :bawling:
aww.... and sorry, slows down my computer, will probably be on tomorrow.:thumbs:

Christina
08-04-2009, 07:00 PM
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Lmao, i called Josh a tosser over msn for his comment and he actually got scared, aww!

so its not just me that your harsh to, huh? Noo, he was harsh first he called me a slag for noo reason :(
You're not on msn :bawling:
aww.... and sorry, slows down my computer, will probably be on tomorrow.:thumbs: Okayy :)
Haha, well prepare cos tommorow youre gonna get it :laugh2: just kidding!

Lewis.
08-04-2009, 07:04 PM
Lool Guys! New Episode in a bit, Just finishing writing it. XD If not tonight then Two episodes tomorrow. Not sure whether i will have to go? Thanks For Feedbackk! i Miss having fededback, It has slowly decreased. Lool x

*mazedsalv**
08-04-2009, 07:08 PM
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Lmao, i called Josh a tosser over msn for his comment and he actually got scared, aww!

so its not just me that your harsh to, huh? Noo, he was harsh first he called me a slag for noo reason :(
You're not on msn :bawling:
aww.... and sorry, slows down my computer, will probably be on tomorrow.:thumbs: Okayy :)
Haha, well prepare cos tommorow youre going to get it :laugh2: just kidding!

It just wouldnt suprise me tbh.... your soo mean to me :sad:

jaybitches
08-04-2009, 07:22 PM
Lewis i have been looking threw all 28 pages of this and i loves it :D:D
When do i get to be in it haha

Christina
08-04-2009, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Originally posted by *mazedsalv**
Originally posted by Christina
Lmao, i called Josh a tosser over msn for his comment and he actually got scared, aww!

so its not just me that your harsh to, huh? Noo, he was harsh first he called me a slag for noo reason :(
You're not on msn :bawling:
aww.... and sorry, slows down my computer, will probably be on tomorrow.:thumbs: Okayy :)
Haha, well prepare cos tommorow youre going to get it :laugh2: just kidding!

It just wouldnt suprise me tbh.... your soo mean to me :sad: LOL i'm not that mean :(

Lewis.
08-04-2009, 09:50 PM
Thanks Guys! New Episode:

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Flower Shop
Christina is in the Flower Shop
Christina: I am SOOOO Sorry
Flowergirl: Don't worry, Three hours late is better than never. The Guys will load them into your car. Keys?
Christina: Oh yeah!
Christina hands over her keys. The Flower girl gives them to a man, Who picks up a basket of flowers and takes them out of the shop. Two Police Officers Come into the shop
Police1: Ermm, Excuse me ma'am, Are you Christina?
Christina: Ermm, Yes?
Police1: Christina, We are going to have to take you to the station to answer a few questions about your Dangerous Driving, and hit and run
Christina: WHAT! I do not have time for this!
The Police Take Christina out to the Police Car and put her into the back of the car
Christina: PLEASE! I have a wedding To arrange!
Police2: Don't worry Love, WE only need to ask you a few questions at the station, Hopefully you won't have to stay long

Lili's House
Lili is sat on the sofa with her leg on the table. She has a bandage around her foot. A Police officer is sat on the opposite sofa
Police: So, Just tell me what happened?
Lili: Well.. I was innocently crossing the road, and This car comes up to me. God, I thought it was going to kill me! Probably would have if she didn't have second thoughts!
Police: Second thoughts?
Lili: Well, It was Obvious sahe only had 1 thing on her mind... MURDER!
Police: Why would she want to murder you?
Lili: Well, YOu know, Just one of them cases aint it dear! Old Lady walking across the road, Young girl comes and Kills her, Same old Same old. Yepp, She wanted to Kill me. And She Nearly Did i Tell you! Internal bleeding ain't rare these days!

Fom and Ninastars house
Fom and PinkMich are lying in bed together. Suddenly Ninastar walks into the room, Tears still Rolling down her face
Ninastar: Is This her!
Fom: Babe, I am Sorry!
Ninastar: Look what happened with Supernoodles! Now HER!
PinkMich: I have a name Thankyou very much!
Ninastar: Yeah.. BITCH!
Ninastar runs upto Pinkmich and starts ripping her hair. They start fighting
Fom: STOP! STOP! STOP!!!!!!
They Both Let Eachover Go, And Ninastar runs out of the house again
Pinkmich: Well, I guess that was Ninastar, Your Girlfriend?
Fom: Yeah, C'mon. I will pack and we can go! Me and Ninastar, Are no more!

The Police Station
It is 2pm, Christina is walking away from the police station. She Looks at her list
Christina: My God, The wedding is ruined!
Suddenly Firewire Pulls up in his car, Right next to Christina
Christina: Hunny!
Firewire: Babe! What did they say!
Christina: I got a warning and a fine of 100 pounds.
Firewire: Look what i got!
Firewire Holds up his suit and Wedding Flowers. Christina Smiles
Christina: Oh My! Thankyou So much!
Firewire: And Nickyy has your new Dress! It is in her house. She wants you over there now so you can get ready for your hen night! Wanna lift?
Christina Screams louder
Christina: OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU!!!
Firewire: Lift?
Christina: Naa, I fancy a walk
Firewire: Alright, See you tomorrow then babe. Have a good night!
Christina: Babe.. No strippers!
Firewire: Of Course not
He Grins and drives away

Gregalz house
Gregalz and Damon are hanging up decorations of naked woman for Firewires Stag Due
gregalz: Firewire is going to love this!
Damon: I know, And i am going to love that stripper! PARTAAY!
Damon Picks up his beer and takes a sip

Foms Flat
Fom and Pinkmich are both ready to go, with Fom's belongings
Fom: C'mon, Lets get out of here.
Pinkmich: I have phoned up and we have got a flat to rent!
Fom: Really!
Pinkmich: Yepp! The Deposit is nothing compared to the money i earn from my Lap Dancing!
Fom: Maybe you can give me a secret Lapdance tonight then!
He Kisses her
Pinkmich: There is one problem though babe
Pinkmich walks out of the flat and up one floor, Fom tailing behind. She opens the door to an empty Flat
Fom: What is this?
Pinkmich: Our new home!
She Smiles, As Fom Looks shocked to be living one floor above Ninastar, with his new girlfriend
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And By the way, Some storyline updates that are coming up!

- The Court hearing for David and Magic is next week!
- Sam! Will have a crucial part next week as a new family arrive, With 4 teenage kids, one, whom Sam! Likes very much
- Satisfaction(Darenn) Will find love, But will it be with Bigsister?

Firewire
09-04-2009, 06:02 AM
Great episode Lewis.

Lewis.
09-04-2009, 09:37 AM
thanks :)

lily.
09-04-2009, 12:41 PM
haha.. I'm a right old troublemaker! Worse than Dot Cotton! LoL

30stone
09-04-2009, 06:12 PM
Lol hahaha thats so linda...

Bet your like it irl :hugesmile:

lily.
09-04-2009, 06:26 PM
I am! Oh, and I meant to confess, I lied about my age on here.. I'm really a silver-surfer. I have a blue rinse and a curly perm, and I'm pushing 60. ;)

Only Lewis knew my secret and he's gone and busted me.. :tongue:

Harry!
09-04-2009, 06:27 PM
When I am going to be on it again?

30stone
09-04-2009, 06:28 PM
LOL ahaha linda.

Ill be 18 soon, :wink:

Lewis.
09-04-2009, 06:29 PM
Lili, Sorry.

Madonna, You have been written in for Next week, With a new family :)

Harry!
09-04-2009, 06:31 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Lili, Sorry.

Madonna, You have been written in for Next week, With a new family :)

Ok, The last line is quite a spoiler

jaybitches
09-04-2009, 06:52 PM
Can i have a part Pleaseeee:(

Lewis.
09-04-2009, 06:53 PM
You Join Next Week aswell ;)

jaybitches
09-04-2009, 06:54 PM
Thanks :)

jaybitches
09-04-2009, 06:54 PM
i hope am a rite bitch :p pml

lily.
09-04-2009, 06:56 PM
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
LOL ahaha linda.

Ill be 18 soon, :wink:

way-hey.. that means I can legally do stuff to you in 49 states.. lol

(Just kidding)..

Lewis.
09-04-2009, 06:57 PM
Originally posted by lili
Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
LOL ahaha linda.

Ill be 18 soon, :wink:

way-hey.. that means I can legally do stuff to you in 49 states.. lol

(Just kidding)..

30stone, In Tibbenders you are 21. She can already do things to you

30stone
09-04-2009, 07:04 PM
LOL LINDA!

:lovedup:

lily.
09-04-2009, 08:28 PM
Be Afraid Ben! lol

30stone
09-04-2009, 08:29 PM
Yes mam.

:sad:

Ties self to chair.

lily.
09-04-2009, 08:30 PM
Lmao.. that post just further warped my already twisted imagination .. I'll plead the 5th so as not to incriminate myself further :P

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 07:22 PM
Tonights episode! I hope you enjoy! PLEASE Leave feedback I love reading it and it makes writing it worthwhile :)

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Nickyy's house
Christina is at Nickyy's house, Getting ready for the hen night
Christina: That Lipstick Looks Lush! Can i try some?
Nickyy: Feel free!
There is a knock at the door
Nickyy: I'll Get it!
Nickyy opens the door and Lili Runs in. She Runs up to Christina and Pushes her over onto the floor
Christina: Oi!
Lili: Shame on you! Running over an old ladies foot! Trying to kill her!
Lili Runs back out again. Christina gets up and brushes herself down.
Christina: Well.
Nickyy: Well Indeed!
Markwaldorf walks in. He Hugs Nickyy
Markwaldorf: Oh Babe, I do Love you
Nickyy: You are only saying that because i have let you go to the stag due where there will probably be a stripper?
Markwaldorf: Never!
Nickyy Pushes Markwaldorf away. He Laughs and Goes out into the kitchen
nickyy: A Fifty year old man excited about a striper, whatever next!
Christina: There will be Strippers at Firewires Stag due?
nickyy: Duuh Christina! Men always have them! Are you Dumb?
Christina Looks shocked
Christina: Oh?

Gregalz house
Music is Blasting in the background. Ross, Gregalz, Themichael0, Ben, Andy, Damon, Markus and Satisfaction are all sitting around a table drinking and playing poker
Greg: What time will the stripper be here?
Firewire: Stripper?
Andy: Woo!
Markus: YEAH!
Satisfaction: Eww. I hope he is male!
They All laugh. damon, Looks around in Shock as the doorbell rings
Gregalz: I will get it!
Ben: HERE SHE IS!
They all stand up and start shouting. Suddenly a topless man wearing just his pants walks in
Ben: EWWWW!
Ross: WHAT!
He SMiles
Stripperman: I am here especially for Damon and Satisfaction?
They all start laughing
Damon: C'mon.. Satisfaction! We have got a private party
Satisfaction: Woop!
They Both walk into the dining room with the male stripper. In walks another Stripper, a Female one. The Men all start shouting and cheering

The Queen Vic
The Queen Vic is full of Women dressed up in party outfits. Christina and nickyy walk in. Christina has an "L" sign, facepainted onto her face
Christina: This is great!
Nickyy: Thanks, I put all of the decorations up earlier!
Suddenly Christina hits her foot on a table leg. Her Foot twists and she goes toppling over onto the floor. She Hits Annie on the way down, who is carrying a rather large cream cake, over to the food table. Annie drops the cake, which lands stright on the back of Christina's Head. Everything goes silent as Christina Screams. Lili sits in the corner smirking
Lili: Serves the silly cow right! See what she did to me!
Lili raises her foot
Nicky.: Lili, there is nothing there!
Lili: Well.. there was earlier!
Nicky.: HArdly!
Christina Get up and wipes the cake from her dress
Annie: Christina Hunny, I am so sorry!
Christina: No, Don't worry hun!
Christina Takes Nicky's Hand
Christina: C'mon. Cancel the party.. I want to go home!
They both walk out of the door together, into the rain, Lili trailing Behind

Gregalz house
The Stripper has gone and all of the boys are sat around the sofa talking about their experience
Andy: Man, She was Fit as..
Greg: Hell!
Andy: Yeah. God, Her Boobs.. Wobble Wobble Wobble!
Ross: Well, If i was 5 years younger!
They all laugh
Firewire: You mean 50 dad!
Ross: Well, It is more than your mother would ever give me
TheMichaelo: WAHEEEY!
They all laugh again!
Damon: Well, The Bloke me and Satisfaction had, He was Hot
Satisfaction: Right, I am off!
Damon: Where to?
Satisfaction: Back to Bigsister, She might be getting lonely now!
Damon: Aww, Your little lover?
Satisfaction: She is 45, I am 35, not really.
Satisfaction opens the dor and walks out. He walks over to his house and walks in

The Square
Christina and Nicky. are walking back in the ppouring rain. Suddenly Lili comes up behind christina and gives her a huge shove. Christina falls out into the road. Nicky Screams
Lili: What goes around comes around!
Lli runs back into the vic. Christina get up, She is covered in mu and her face is dripping.
Christina: Take me back home. now.
Nicky: Hmm
They carry on walking back to Nicky's house

Bigsister, Annie and Satisfactions house
Bigsister is in the kitchen making some coffee. Satisfaction walks through the hallway and into the kitchen, he grabs Bigsister before she can say anything
Bigsister: Oh my god, what is all this?
Satisfaction: tonight, Me and Damon had a private male stripper. And you know what, i didn't enjoy one bit of it? You know why that is?
Bigsister: Why?
Satisfaction Kisses Bigsister
satisfaction: Because i Love you
They Start kissing again

Kornetto
10-04-2009, 07:29 PM
I like it lmao.
The stripper thing made me laugh :thumbs:

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 07:30 PM
Originally posted by Kornetto
I like it lmao.
The stripper thing made me laugh :thumbs:

Thanks. You are in it in two epiodes time :)

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 07:32 PM
[b]Next Episode -

-Picto, Princess and Billy come back
-JDIZZEL and Billy Get close
-It is the morning of the wedding, and will everything go to plan?

Jen
10-04-2009, 07:37 PM
Oh baby.
Billy and I.

:lovedup:

Firewire
10-04-2009, 07:39 PM
Great episode Lewis!

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 07:39 PM
Sorry you have not been in for a while JDIZZEL. I want to develop the story between you, Picto and Billy after the wedding. It will be the next big storyline ;)

Jen
10-04-2009, 07:40 PM
I love Shaun.

:P

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 07:41 PM
But you love billy too? And you have sex with him and Picto on the same day next week, Player ;)

Also-

- A New family arrive to the square, and SAm gets very close to one of the family members, Bronnaaaaa

Christina
10-04-2009, 07:42 PM
Aw me and Nicksta are best friends :D
Loved the episodes Lewis.. grr Lili :P

jaybitches
10-04-2009, 07:43 PM
It was soooo funny::D keep it up :P
Btw lewis am part of the new family ?

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 07:44 PM
Thanks Christina :)

If anyone does not get anything or needs a quick recap of a storyline, please ask me over u2u :)

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 07:47 PM
Yes Jaybitches

Coming up Characters-

Twilight
Bronaaa
Jaybitches
Snig
Madonna

jaybitches
10-04-2009, 08:04 PM
KLNESS:D

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 08:33 PM
:)

Harry!
10-04-2009, 08:34 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Yes Jaybitches

Coming up Characters-

Twilight
Bronaaa
Jaybitches
Snig
Madonna

Why am I at the bottom lol.

Lewis.
10-04-2009, 08:34 PM
Originally posted by Madonna
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Yes Jaybitches

Coming up Characters-

Twilight
Bronaaa
Jaybitches
Snig
Madonna

Why am I at the bottom lol.

i dunno? Just the way i wrote it :)

Harry!
10-04-2009, 08:35 PM
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Originally posted by Madonna
Originally posted by Lewis:)
Yes Jaybitches

Coming up Characters-

Twilight
Bronaaa
Jaybitches
Snig
Madonna

Why am I at the bottom lol.

i dunno? Just the way i wrote it :)

Ok, But Still lol

BigSister
10-04-2009, 09:39 PM
lol at the cake thing that was funny

Christina
11-04-2009, 06:36 PM
I got tripped like 20 times LOL!

30stone
11-04-2009, 06:53 PM
AHHA linda picking on Christina LOL!

And yes, Stripper!

Lewis.
11-04-2009, 10:48 PM
Next episode on Monday! :)

Christina
13-04-2009, 01:37 PM
:cheer2:

jaybitches
13-04-2009, 06:01 PM
The next episode to night then ?

Twilight
14-04-2009, 07:34 AM
I'm going to be in yay:hello:

bronaaaa
14-04-2009, 08:25 PM
When';s the next episode, I'm awfully excited :laugh:

Lewis.
14-04-2009, 08:30 PM
Tomorrow Guys :) At dads Atm ;)

bronaaaa
14-04-2009, 08:38 PM
:cheer2:

xDramatick
14-04-2009, 09:10 PM
Why am I so straight?

bronaaaa
20-04-2009, 08:02 PM
Bump :banana:

Lewis.
20-04-2009, 08:06 PM
Guys! Laptop is a Dads hous enad not sure when i will be able to get it back :S You see he lives about 100 miles away :P When i get it back, i will post the wedding, which is saved to it (L) Then the series will end because i have tons of coursework ;)

Harry!
20-04-2009, 08:08 PM
Originally posted by LewisLeona
Guys! Laptop is a Dads hous enad not sure when i will be able to get it back :S You see he lives about 100 miles away :P When i get it back, i will post the wedding, which is saved to it (L) Then the series will end because i have tons of coursework ;)

:sad: No apperence from me then :sad:

jaybitches
27-04-2009, 08:15 PM
this happens alot on tibb lol everytime thr is something good its stops lol

Lewis.
27-04-2009, 08:18 PM
Lol. i am so sorry. It took me about 2 weeks to write the wedding.. which was like.. AGEEES Long. But then my lappy crashed and i had to have everything taken off. I am starting it fresh again in September, after big brother though :) I will scrap the old storylines and that ;)

Magic
27-04-2009, 08:20 PM
so whens the wedding

Magic
27-04-2009, 08:20 PM
so whens the wedding

Deirdre
27-04-2009, 08:22 PM
And you never included me :sad:

Lewis.
27-04-2009, 08:24 PM
^ When i can be arsed to rewrite it again. I Have just had enough of writing for the minute. May not be a wedding at all, depends. Like i said, i am starting fresh in September, and will do 2 episodes a week. All storylines will be scrapped unfortunately. I know that it seems i hve let everyone down, but i really Cba. I have gone off of Tibbenders atm, after not doing it for so long. When i start again in september, i will be ready with fresh storylines ;)

Harry!
27-04-2009, 08:26 PM
Am I in it in september then. I still owe a apperence.