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bronaaaa
27-04-2009, 08:26 PM
:shocked::bawling:

Can I still be in it in September :love:

Lewis.
27-04-2009, 08:27 PM
Yes :) I wil make sure you get the first character ;) Am going to make plans for it over the next few months. And then start writing it in August, so i can always be a month ahead of myself, for those off days i used to get

bronaaaa
27-04-2009, 08:28 PM
Thanks Lewis :lovedup:

Harry!
27-04-2009, 08:29 PM
Thanks! :dance:

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 05:11 PM
Tibbenders

http://i41.tinypic.com/r0s2t5.png

Tibbenders is a forum TV show, which will have tibb members, as characters! All of the episodes will be posted in this thread and each episode will consist of a few scenes. The soap will be based on eastenders, with Teenage pregnancies, and love affairs, around every corner. The plots will be different, but the setting will be the same as Eastenders, with the vic and chippy. New Characters will be introduced and characters will leave, throughout the series. Tibbenders is written by me, Lewis, and when writing the story, i do not mean to purposly insult any member on the forum

Thankyou and enjoy following Tibbenders
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Lewis.
29-04-2010, 05:12 PM
Ep1

30stone and Vicky's house
30stone(27) and Vicky(26) are both sat on the sofa watching TV. The room is dark and they are cuddled up together. 30stone keeps checking his phone
Vicky: Babe, cut it out.
30stone: What?
Vicky: Checking your phone. What are you expecting?
30stone: Nothing. I'm just checking the time that's all.
Vicky: There's a perfectly working clock up there hun.
Vicky and 30stone look up at the clock
30stone: Oh yeah..
30stone is interrupted by his phone, which rings. Vicky looks at him and then the phone.
Vicky: Are you gonna answer that then?
30stone: Ehh.. I'll leave it. Lets just watch the film.
Vicky: Go on.. just answer it!
She tries to grab the phone. He puts it in the air
Vicky: Babe.. who is it. Just answer it!
The phone stops ringing. 30stone and Vicky look at eachover. Vicky jumps up and snatches the phone. She looks at the screen
Vicky: It's your mum..
30Stone looks shocked
30stone: What?
Vicky: What.. were you expecting someone else?
Vicky looks at 30stone with a stern face. He looks back into her eyes
30stone: No..
The phone rings again.
Vicky: It's your mum again. Go on.. just answer it.
30stone sighs. Vicky gives him the phone
Vicky: Go on..
30stone takes the phone and walks out of the room. In the hallway, he answers it
30stone: Hello...
Lili is on the other end
Lili: Do you have it?
30stone: No.. not yet.
Lili: Why not?
30stone: Lili I'm not made of money.. just give me a few more weeks!
Lili: You've got until next week.. otherwise the truth comes out. I need that money 30stone.
30stone: Look.. just..
Lili hangs up. 30stone sighs

Novo, Stacey and Christina's house
Christina(15) and Firewire(15) are in Christina's room. Firewire kisses Christina.
Chrisitna: OH my God!
Firewire: What?
Christina: What the hell are you doing!
Christina pushes him away
Firewire: Don't you feel up to it?
Christina: NO FIREWIRE. My Dad is downstairs! Eugh.
Christina gets up and opens the door
Christina: Go on. Just get out..
Firewire looks shocked and embarrased
Firewire: When can we next see eachover?
Christina: Soon.. just go! I'll ring you!
Firewire frowns before walking out. Christina rolls her eyes

Princess's flat
Princess(19) and Zee(21) are in the bedroom Kissing. Zee takes off his top
Zee: Wait..
He gets up
Princess: Where are you going?
Zee: You know..
Princess: Oh don't worry. I have some of my own.
Zee lies back down
Princess: I'll go get them.
Princess walks out of the bedroom and into the bathroom. She opens a cupboard and takes out a box of condoms. She takes out a packet and opens it. She closes the cupboard and looks into the mirror.. smiling. She picks up a pin and holds up the condom, peircing a hole into the end. She grins before walking back into the bedroom. Zee smiles at her as she throws the condom at him.
Princess: Quickly.. don't ruin the moment!
Zee starts checking the condom. Princes snatches it back
Princess: I've already checked it... Now come on!
Zee grins as he and Princess start kissing again


Hope you enjoyed. Will try and include most regular members but please don't moan. Next episode will be up later this week.

Jayson
29-04-2010, 05:13 PM
Nothing wrong with benders, it's a life choice [/childishjoke]

xDramatick
29-04-2010, 05:15 PM
Ah that's fantastic!
Princess! I never knew :O

I also read it as TiB-Benders at first LOL.

CaraRawr
29-04-2010, 05:17 PM
i cracked up at the firewire/christina part.

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 05:20 PM
:)

If anyone does not want to be in it.. then say and I wont put you in..
Shall be more characters in the next episode... but like I say.. if you are not in it yet then please don't complain. I'm trying to include members who are regulars and have a strong input into the forum at first.

Stacey.
29-04-2010, 05:40 PM
:D its good.

Princess
29-04-2010, 05:42 PM
:shocked: I don't want a baby that much :laugh:

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 05:44 PM
:shocked: I don't want a baby that much :laugh:

Not even Zee's :shocked:

Princess
29-04-2010, 05:45 PM
Not even Zee's :shocked:

Well :p

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 05:46 PM
Well :p

:tongue:

Z
29-04-2010, 08:46 PM
Well :p

:shocked:

Haha. Lewis I enjoyed reading that, keep it coming! Laura you hussy!! :hugesmile:

Smithy
29-04-2010, 08:47 PM
I always read this as Tib-Benders :(

Harry!
29-04-2010, 08:52 PM
You said you would include me next time you do TiBBenders :(

Loukas
29-04-2010, 09:06 PM
YEY!! It's back i loveeee this..

Can i be in it this year pleaseee?

Firewire
29-04-2010, 09:08 PM
i cracked up at the firewire/christina part.

:)

30stone
29-04-2010, 09:15 PM
And bens back!!! :) awesome :cat:

BigSister
29-04-2010, 09:20 PM
Yay its back. I remember this lol

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 09:50 PM
More characters on the next episode including Darenn, loukas, bigSister, Shaun and a few more :)

30stone
29-04-2010, 09:53 PM
Good as always :)

Callum
29-04-2010, 09:58 PM
Isn't Firewire called Jonathan now?

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 10:35 PM
Oops! He is aswell! Shall edit tomorrow when I am not on mi iPod doing this :P

Callum
29-04-2010, 10:36 PM
Oops! He is aswell! Shall edit tomorrow when I am not on mi iPod doing this :P

Cool, I enjoyed reading it Lewis. :spin:

Loukas
29-04-2010, 10:38 PM
Lewis can you tell us about the storylines you got coming up? The new characters too, can you tell us anything about them? I'm curious.. :P

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 10:38 PM
Good :) thanks for spotting that :) not even john himself did :tongue:

Lewis.
29-04-2010, 10:41 PM
Shall tomorrow Loukas :) I-pod grammar is terrible :L You are in the next episode and will make an enemy of someone... Shall give some more spoilers tomorrow when I'm on the laptop :)

BGT-FAN!
29-04-2010, 11:36 PM
lol this is so cringey, it actually gave me goosebumps at how cringey it was

Ninastar
29-04-2010, 11:38 PM
Lmao I love it! <3 more more more :D

Vicky.
30-04-2010, 12:10 AM
:laugh2:

Jessica.
30-04-2010, 12:20 AM
Very good as usual Lewis, well done :)
Poor firewire s0b

GypsyGoth
30-04-2010, 12:23 AM
Well written :thumbs:

:nono: Naughty Laura :laugh:

Christina
30-04-2010, 01:53 AM
LOL, i'm always up to stuff with Firewire in your stories aren't i? haha!

Lewis.
30-04-2010, 05:49 PM
:tongue:

It's a running joke Christina :tongue:

;)

Lewis.
30-04-2010, 10:07 PM
Ep #2. Part1

Nova, Stacey and Christina's house
It's early in the morning on the square. Christina is lying in bed. The door flings open and Nova(38) pops his head around the door
Nova: Christina honey..
Christina grunts and turns over on her bed
Nova: Come on.. School time.
Christina moans even louder

The Club
Darenn is in the club alone. He is sat behind the bar sobbing. He picks up a glass and pours himself another vodka and coke. He downs it in one and carries on sobbing

Darenn and Shauns house
Shaun is sat in the bedroom with a box on the floor. Shaun slowly puts his clothes into the box.

Nova, Stacey and Christina's house
Stacey(11) is running around the front room. She is dressed in her uniform and is playing with a toy aeroplane. Christina walks in wearing a dressing gown. She yawns
Nova: Come on Christina.. It's nearly time to go..
Christina: Naah.. I'm not going today.
Nova: Ehh.. says who?
Christina: Me..
Nova: And why exactly?
Christina: Dad.. come on.
Nova: Tell me!
Christina: Period pains! Okay?
Stacey sniggers quietly. Christina gives her a dirty look
Christina: Anyway.. Firewire isn't going today either. He's ill. So I was going to go and see how he is.
Nova gives Christina a dis-approving look
Christina: What?
Nova: You know what I said about Firewire, Christina.. You're not to see him again.
Christina: But WHY Dad?
Nova shouts
Nova: You know perfectly well why Christina.. now do you want to make me shout it out in front of your little sister!
Christina gets up and walks out in tears

30stone and Vicky's house
30stone walks downstaris into the hallway. He looks at the phone. It has a message. He presses the button
Lili: 30stone.. I've changed my mind. I need that money as soon as possible.. today. Meet me in my flat...
30stone sighs

Princess's flat
Princess is in the toilet. She is holding a pregnancy test and waiting for a result. It comes up negative. She sighs..

Bigsister, Loukas and CaraRawr'h house
Bigsister(35) is on the sofa watching TV. Cara(17) is at College and Loukas(21) is in the kitchen. Bigsister pulls out a magazine from under the cushion.. "Gaytimes". She looks at the front cover and rolls her eyes.. stuffing the magazine back under the sofa again. Loukas walks back into the living room with cup of tea.
Loukas: Here you go sis..
He hands the tea to BigSister
Bigsister: You out again tonight?
Loukas: Er.. maybe? Gotta find the right club.. with the right girls.. you know what I mean?
BigSister: Yeah.... Totally.
Loukas laughs in a very camp way.
Loukas: Anyway.. better be off to work now.
Bigsister: See you later maybe?
Loukas: Yeah.. okay.
Loukas gets up and an eyeliner pencil falls out from his sleeve. They both look down at it.. Loukas looking shocked
Loukas: Ohh.. errr.... I was meaning to give that to you... Er... I found it.. in the.. er.. kitchen!
Bigsister: Oh right.. Thanks.
Loukas looks embarrased as Bigsister takes the eyeliner
Loukas: Er... Better be off then..
Loukas speeds out of the house. BigSister looks at the eyeliner.. She rolls her eyes

The club
Darenn is still sat at the bar crying. There are 2 empty Vodka bottles beside him.

Christina
01-05-2010, 01:59 AM
Lol :p

Jessica.
01-05-2010, 02:55 AM
haha very good again :)

CaraRawr
01-05-2010, 06:34 AM
yay, i have a part - thank you :')
loving this!

Harry!
01-05-2010, 08:29 AM
No me again...

Another good episode!

Ninastar
01-05-2010, 11:11 AM
LOL i love it. I better be in it next time.

joke x

Stacey.
01-05-2010, 11:13 AM
lol! :)

Loukas
01-05-2010, 03:08 PM
LOL! I like it :P

Braden
01-05-2010, 03:09 PM
This is good,but are you speaking about Novo?

xDramatick
01-05-2010, 03:13 PM
I'm an alcoholic living with Shaun, rofl.

I can't wait to find out why I'm so upset.

Shaun
01-05-2010, 03:19 PM
We've probably had a lovers' tiff, Daren. :\

Firewire
01-05-2010, 06:08 PM
Love the Jonstina storyline lol.

Lewis.
01-05-2010, 09:13 PM
Another episode tomorrow for those who would like to know. Not working tomorrow so It will be a longer one as I have all day to myself.. house and all ;)

Lewis.
03-05-2010, 06:00 PM
Ep #3

The Club
Lili walks down the stairs and into the club. She gazes at Darenn. He is asleep on the bar, lying next to a smashed glass and empty Vodka bottles. Lili runs over to him in a hurry. She sighs and looks down on him as he dribbles on the floor

Princess's flat
Princess is sat on the sofa reading "Mother and Baby" magazine. The beel suddenly rings. Princess shoves the magazine under the sofa and goes to get the door. She opens it and Zee steps in, looking very smart
Zee: Ready for a romantic day out my lady..
He puts his arm and and Princess grasps it
Princess: Yeah.. but don't be posh
Zee laughs as they both walk out of the flat

The Club
Lili is trying to get Darenn up but he isn't moving.
Lili: Darenn! Wake up you daft idiot!
Darenn just lies there

Ninastar and Firewire's house
Firewire is in the hallway putting his coat on. Ninastar(35) walks into the hallway.
Ninastar: And where do you think you're going?
Firewire: Ehhh. out.
Ninastar: Out hey?
Firewire: Yeah, why?
Ninastar: Ahh.. Where abouts out then?
Firewire: Mum, drop it.. I'm just meeting mates..
With that Firewire walks out of the front door

Novo, Christina and Stacey's house
Christina is home alone watching TV in her dressing gown. The door knocks. Christina looks out the window to see Firewire. He knocks again. She walks into the hallway and answers the door
Firewire: Hey..

The Cafe
Princess and Zee are on a table. 30stone is on the table next to them, looking upset
Princess: everything alright there hun?
30stone looks up
30stone: Ehh.. yeah.. fine.
He gives a fake smile
30stone: ACtually sis.. can we speak in private?
Princess looks at Zee.. he smiles
Princess: Yeah go on then.. do you want to come back to mine?
30stone: Please?
Princess and 30stone get up
Princess: Be back in a bit babe - I'll ring you.
Zee: Okay..
Zee looks disheartened as they both walk out

Novo, Christina and Stacey's house
Christina and Firewire are sat on the sofa. Firewire moves in and kisses her. They kiss and Firewire starts to take off his top. Christina stops
Christina: Babe.. no
Firewire: Christina...
Christina: Firewire.. We're 15 for god sake..
Firewire: And.. it's not as if everyone else isn't having sex at school. Come on.. just enjoy yourself - Relax.
Firewire moves back in but Christina pushes him away
Christina: Babe.. this is what happened last time and look what happened then!
Firewire stares into Christina's eyes. He moves in and Kisses her again. Novo walks in as Christina pushes Firewire away
Christina: Firewire - Stop it!
Novo: OI!
They both stare up at Novo

Princess's flat
30stone is sat at the table
Princess: So what's wrong then?
30stone: She knows..
Princess looks confused
Princess: Who know's?

The Vic
The Vic is practically empty. Loukas is behind the bar talking to GypsyGoth(24)
Loukas: Have you heard from Twilight yet?
GG: Nahh.. I'm afraid not.
Loukas: When is she back?
GG: Supposed to be tomorrow.. She's met this new bloke, Harry or something.
Loukas: Ooh.. is he nice?
Loukas Backtracks
Loukas: I mean.. He isn't nasty is he?
GG: Oh
GypsyGoth laughs
GG: I thought you meant in a gay way then!
Loukas puts on a fake snigger
GG: I was like - "You trying to tell me something Loukas?!"
Loukas sniggers again with a guilty look on his face

Princess's house
Princess is shouting at 30stone
Princess: Who knows what? Tell me!
30stone looks up
30stone: Lili.. She knows! She knows that I killed Sticks!
Princess looks at 30stone with a blank look on her face

Firewire
03-05-2010, 06:04 PM
omg at me and Xtina.

xDramatick
03-05-2010, 06:06 PM
aww, lili <3

Lewis.
03-05-2010, 06:24 PM
omg at me and Xtina.

Young love <3

Loukas
03-05-2010, 06:55 PM
LOL at me. It's clear that im gay, stoopid cast :P

Ben killed Sticks :O!!!

Lewis.
03-05-2010, 06:59 PM
:tongue:

Lewis.
04-05-2010, 06:22 PM
bumping for those who have not read :)

Lewis.
07-05-2010, 07:29 PM
Another big episode on Sunday evening :)

A little teaser ;)

Princess's Flat
Zee enters the flat wearing a coat
Zee: Princess?
Zee hears soft mood music playing, there are candles everywhere. Zee smiles
Princess: Coming.
Zee starts to take off his jacket
Zee: I've been thinking today.. we need a bit of time to...
Zee stops as Princess walks in. She's sexily dressed and holding a plate of chocolate covered strawberries and heart shaped biscuits
Zee: .. Err... Ourselves.
Princess stares into his eyes
Princess: Hungry?
Zee smirks
Zee: Very..

Glenn.
07-05-2010, 07:36 PM
Can I be in this please?

Lewis.
08-05-2010, 07:43 PM
I'm not promising anything but I'll try :)

Glenn.
09-05-2010, 02:27 AM
I'm not promising anything but I'll try :)

Thanks:hugesmile: