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13-01-2020, 06:57 PM

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Crimson Dynamo | The voice of reason

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Christmas Dynasnow Christmas Dynasnow is offline

Crimson Dynamo | The voice of reason

Join Date: Oct 2009

Posts: 107,393

Total Awards: 14

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wizard.

A little poem I wrote myself

YOU AND I

You and I
Our love, is true.
Like the one between the sun,
And the moon.
Where the sea meets the sky
There we'll be,
You- and I.

im not having a go but the sun and the moon dont have a love affair

they are 150 million kilometres away for a kick off and one is a star and the other a planet

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