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....I love the cover, Scarlett (...and the Wynd Academy title ...)...and it sounds as though you’ve really enjoyed writing it/..getting back into the groove of your writing...?...that’s lovely to see...so it can be read directly on the inkett site..?...I’ve just had a little look and that seems to be how it is...I’m just finishing a book atm, so I’ll try to start reading it next week and really look forward to it...and well done you and thank you for the gift you’re giving.....
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...I started this last night, although I didn’t get to read that much because I was tired...I think I’m up to Chapter 4, if I recall...the characters I’ve met so far are very interesting, Scarlett...and it’s feeling like an enjoyable and smooth read...
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...I started this last night, although I didn’t get to read that much because I was tired...I think I’m up to Chapter 4, if I recall...the characters I’ve met so far are very interesting, Scarlett...and it’s feeling like an enjoyable and smooth read...
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...Roisin and Ashe are the two characters I’ve met...
Thank you! The first few chapters have quite a bit to set up, the characters get more room to develop in the later chapters
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Oooh, that cover is lovely. I'll have to give it a read later.
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Beautiful cover and has got me interested in the actual book,very talented and good luck with it all.
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super, cover is great, it's not really my genre but good luck with your writing
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Thank you! The first few chapters have quite a bit to set up, the characters get more room to develop in the later chapters
...I love how you’re developing the characters and I love the story so far, it’s an excellent read, Scarlett...

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...the end of Transference chapter was particularly gripping and brutal and I liked how sudden it all felt because it really gave the feel for the coldness of Rory’s character...I love the friendships and I love the villains and I love the dark and light storyline....the only thing that I didn’t like so much...?..is that I’ll have to wait for You to write the next chapter...thank you for an engaging read in a fascinating world.....
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...I love how you’re developing the characters and I love the story so far, it’s an excellent read, Scarlett...

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...the end of Transference chapter was particularly gripping and brutal and I liked how sudden it all felt because it really gave the feel for the coldness of Rory’s character...I love the friendships and I love the villains and I love the dark and light storyline....the only thing that I didn’t like so much...?..is that I’ll have to wait for You to write the next chapter...thank you for an engaging read in a fascinating world.....
Good news! I just released a new chapter!

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Yeah, with Rory, I felt there was a need for an actual violent villian, all the others so far are schemers, whereas Rory isn't afraid to cut anyone down to get what he wants. He's gonna be very interesting as time goes by!

I'm going to slowly add more allies at time goes on, with Logan being a second year, he's sometimes going to be seperate from the main group, so he will come across more of his own year as time passes by
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...ooohhhhhh, I’ll really look forward to reading the new chapters later, Scarlett......
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I'm going to slowly add more allies at time goes on, with Logan being a second year, he's sometimes going to be seperate from the main group, so he will come across more of his own year as time passes by
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...I agree with Rory, I think it was important to set up his coldness as well ...and I liked how we weren’t led into that...it was swift and it was brutal...?..that would be a great movie scene, I can imagine...and I love the contrast of friendship bonds growing as well, your balance is excellent...
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...I agree with Rory, I think it was important to set up his coldness as well ...and I liked how we weren’t led into that...it was swift and it was brutal...?..that would be a great movie scene, I can imagine...and I love the contrast of friendship bonds growing as well, your balance is excellent...
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...chapter 13 spoiler...

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...oh gods, what has Wynd done......(...it’s a gripping read, Scarlett...)...
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The Empire have tightened their grip in the missing months! Things have gotten real following the previous three chapters
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...I loved the fall of Rivenlake also and the knight defeating the dragon, those were all quite a touching moment...we can see now how much of a road they all have ahead of them, it’s all set out beautifully for the battles ahead of them...
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...I loved the fall of Rivenlake also and the knight defeating the dragon, those were all quite a touching moment...we can see now how much of a road they all have ahead of them, it’s all set out beautifully for the battles ahead of them...
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...chapter 14 spoiler....


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... this is the question that we’ve had to wait until chapter 14 to ask...so...should horseradish have been turned to ashes with Rivenlake or should it live on..?....
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With the 18th Chapter out, Wynd Academy has come to an end, but I've post the prologue for the next story in the series: The Luna Legacy!




With this book, I plan to take a little more time with the characters, since they're no longer facing a
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...ending spoilers and The Luna Legacy prologue...


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...okay so that was a perfect ending for the continuation, Scarlett...the battles were quite intense...both of the Rivenlake Skies and between Ariel and Rory...Lumina is very sinister and obviously Rory will be looking for his revenge...so I fear the group won’t all survive these two enemies......I loved it, your writing is excellent, Scarlett...and the story had me enthralled from the beginning and didn’t lose its grip..thank you for a thrilling read and for the introduction to some wonderful dark and light characters......

...I’ve read the prologue for The Luna Legacy...and the cover again is totally gorgeous.....
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