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Old 01-07-2020, 07:03 AM #76
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...I re-read chapter 10 and read chapters 11, 12, 13 and 14...


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...so Rory is still alive, that was a bit of a twist...plus they other’ is another bit of a plot twist, it must be someone we know but who..?...I love the characters, Scarlett...plus the battles of light and dark, it’s a really absorbing read and it’s lovely that I have quite a bit to catch up on.....
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I hope you enjoy it! The Luna Legacy seems like a while ago now
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I finished the maps a while back

Eastern Continent:
https://imgur.com/7Qd2Dwj

South Pole:
https://imgur.com/4A86Zms

and one in progress, the Western Continent:
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I finished the maps a while back

Eastern Continent:
https://imgur.com/7Qd2Dwj

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and one in progress, the Western Continent:
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These are gorgeous.
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...I’m up to chapter 19 next and it really is a wonderful read... you’re very talented, Scarlett....those maps are fabulous also because they’re very much needed in fantasy worlds, to be able to get your bearings with distance and time etc...
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Thank you! I loved making them, it does help me plan things out better in my head
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...I’m just going into Chapter 22, so now we know what the Luna Legacy is.....
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Indeed! =D

I loved writing Luna Legacy
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...I’ve read to chapter 25...

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...the pace is really racing now and it’s quite hard to leave the story With so much evil darkness casting its shadow everywhere...I would have loved to finish it tonight but I’m just too tired ...so I know I’m going to have to wait until tomorrow to find out the fate of our young friends...it’s an exciting read, Scarlett...
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Thank you! Luna Legacy is more of a character driven book, while Wynd and Pyre are story driven. Memories of Ice is very character driven
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Thank you! Luna Legacy is more of a character driven book, while Wynd and Pyre are story driven. Memories of Ice is very character driven
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..I think it needed that to introduce us to the characters and to give us the time to bond with them, for me that’s really important in a read...the parts that were more story driven, beautifully created their world as well and were very fast paced...I loved it.....I loved the bonds and friendship between Roisin, Dex, Ashe and Ariel...I loved that Roisin was briefly reunited with Ruby...and I feel that Rory has found his light side a little more at the end...it was a lovely read, Scarlett ...and an exciting read in many parts...thank you so much for sharing.....
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Here's the link for Pyre Academy https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/477679

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I was going to originally have the ending of the next book at the end of this one, but decided to turn the whole arc into a separate book
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I was going to originally have the ending of the next book at the end of this one, but decided to turn the whole arc into a separate book
....ahhhh, thank you......I’ll try to start it in the next few days and look forward to it...
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...oh I started Pyre Academy last night, Scarlett... I think I read 4 chapters but I’ll have to check...I’m loving how the books and stories blend and how the reader slips into the next one so easily...and I can feel already how much I’m going to enjoy the read.....
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...The characters../..the story are becoming quite three dimensional now...I was with Syl and Seb in the forest when they were escaping the giant spider, it was quite terrifying...and I really did find myself racing t9 the end of the chapter to get them out of there as quickly as possible and away from that giant beast......I love though, how you added a bit of humour to the end with Seb giggling......
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...so Sebastien is the White Lady, I didn’t expect that at all, Scarlett.../..gripping...
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