[Crimson Dynamo]

Originally Posted by Chewy

I havent wet my pants, this is my first reply, asking your opinion of how you would do it, and how you would make it better

you are correct, my apolz. How you make it better is to do it many more times and learn from mistakes.

telling you that it is amazing would be lying. it is what it is, a first attempt. Ultimately the script is far more important than the pictures, witness early Simpsons.

i doubt all this is news to you.