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Old 07-08-2013, 08:37 AM #11
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I was broken up with in the most horrible way two years ago... I've been thinking about it a lot recently. If I were at all musical I would want to turn this into a song rather than keep it as a poem but I thought I'd post it here anyway...

Sometimes

I miss you sometimes
The way you look at me
Your voice, your laugh
The photographs
And the way it used to be.

I miss you sometimes
The times you made me cry
You lied, you're mean
The jealousy
And the part of me that died.

I miss you sometimes
The feelings of regret
The chances missed
The times we kissed
And the feeling when we met.

I miss you sometimes
The day you broke my heart
Emptiness
And loneliness
The time we've spent apart.

I miss you sometimes.

I miss you sometimes.
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