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01-01-2010, 01:41 PM
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Another episode probably tonight
 Thanks for the comments guys!
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01-01-2010, 05:23 PM
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Ross and Brona's house
Ross and Ninastar are lying in bed kissing. It is nearly midnight and there is a big crowd of people in the square waiting for the countdown Ross: I suppose you better go now? Ninastar: Why? Ross: Well.. Brona could be home anytime soon.. ninastar: I thought she was partying all night? Ross: Well yeah.. but.. She could be back anytime after midnight.. and we don't want to get caught. Ninastar: Hmmm Ross: Cmon, we can do this again soon.. I just really don't want to get caught. Ninastar: fair enough.. Ninastar gets out of the bed and puts her clothes on The Vic [i]Shaun is sitting alone in the Vic[/b] Lili: Arent you coming outside Shaun, the countdown will start in a minute chick. Shaun: Naah. New years day is like every other day for me Lili: Ahh, cmon hun, come outside for the countdown Shaun: Honestly.. I'm fine here alone. Lili: Fine.. your loss.. Lili walks outside. Shaun takes a sip of his drink.. sobbing Lemonjam and Nicky's house Lemonjam is with his children, Stephanie and Harry. They are watching the TV.. waiting for the countdown. Nicky walks into the room with 4 glasses and a bottle of champagne. Nicky: Get your drinks ready guys! Steph: oooh, Alcohol! Nicky: Don't get too excited.. you are only having a little bit! Steph: But mum, I'm 15.. an adult! Nicky: Hardly! Steph grumbles as she picks up her champagne Lemonjam: Here's to an amazing new year guys... I love you all and I hope next year is a bit better than this one. Steph: yeah, well you've only got yourself to blame for that one. Nicky: Stephanie! Don't be like it! Steph: Well.. he has.. If he hadn't had cheated on you mum, this year would have been amazing! Nicky: STEPH! Steph: Well, I'm only telling the truth.. right Dad? Lemonjam: Steph.. What I did was a mistake.. And we've all promised we wouldn't talk about it again.. we'd just forget it. Steph: So Dad.. which young girl have you got your eyes set on this year then? Nicky: STEPHANIE! Go to your Room NOW! You do not speak to your father like that! Go on... GO! Stephanie storms out of the room and up the stairs.. grinning Ross and Brona's house Ross and Ninastar are in the hallway. Ross kisses Ninastar Ross: I'll call you another time.. Ninastar: Yepp.. We can do it again Ninastar winks and opens the door. Princess is dragging a very drunk Brona up the pathway to the house Princess: DON'T Worry about her-rrrrr-r. She is not dead Rod. I SWEAR! Princess laughs and lays Brona on the floor. Brona gets up and looks at Ninastar Brona: HELLOOOOO My LOVER-RRR Ninastar: Well Ross. Thanks for the advice on my Tv... I better be off now Ninastar runs off down the pathway Brona: FINEEEEE. Don't speee-aak then! Ross: Come here you! Ross grabs Brona and drags her inside. Princess follows them in The Square Lili is standing on the stage and is looking up to the countdown Lili: READY EVERYONE! The crowd all get ready for the countdown Everyone: 10.. 9.. 8.. 7.. 6.. 5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1.. Everyone cheers as the new year comes in Lili: HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE! Sam: WEEEEY Zee: YEEEEEY Jords: Yey! 2010.. HERE WE COME! Lemonjam and Nicky's house Steph is upstairs on her laptop talking to Andyman on msn Steph: I have to get away Andyman: I'll take you away.. somewhere they will never find you Steph: I just want to be with you Andyman.. I can't cope with my stupid parents anymore Andyman: When do you want to go? Steph: I don't know. As soon as possible. Andyman: I'm on my way. Andyman signs off. Steph closes her laptop and roots under her bed. She pulls out a bag... full of clothes. She picks up a pen and paper and writes.. "It's your own fault.. Have a nice life Steph x" Another episode on Sunday night guys
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01-01-2010, 05:36 PM
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01-01-2010, 06:11 PM
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Brilliant!
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01-01-2010, 06:16 PM
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I'm glad you all like it
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01-01-2010, 06:29 PM
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I'm looking forward to writing it Ninastar ;D I may post one half tomorrow night instead and the other on Sunday night. I don't want to post it as one big chunk because I always find smaller little chunks are easier to read and don't take up much time
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01-01-2010, 08:45 PM
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*Reads through to see if im in it* Meh.
lol that was a good read, loving this so far.
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06-01-2010, 05:04 PM
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Shall post another episode tonight.. Sorry guys, thought I posted it on Sunday
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06-01-2010, 05:05 PM
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yay
only now read these the other day aha. they're really good lewis!
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06-01-2010, 05:12 PM
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Thanks.. you are in this one Chels
I shall post it as soon as I can find my laptop charger :L
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06-01-2010, 05:15 PM
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oh woop thanks lewis! :]]
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06-01-2010, 05:16 PM
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Andy's Flat
Andy is lying in his bed. There are a pair of knickers on the floor beside him and an open condom pack. He stretches his arms and looks around Ross and Brona's house Brona is lying in bed. She opens her eyes Brona: Oh no.. My Head. She rubs her eyes and sits up Chels and Jords house Chels and Jords are in the kitchen making breakfast for their two children - Jessica and 30stone - Both 15 years old 30stone: Cmon mum, hurry up.. I'm hungry! Chels: Oi you.. you'll get it when it's ready! Chels cracks an egg in the pan 30stone: Eugh.. forget it.. I'll get something from the minutemart. 30stone gets up and walks out of the kitchen Jords: The minute mart is closed so you wo... 30stone walks out Chels: Ah well, he'll find out when he gets there. Jessica: God mum, why is 30stone such a grump all of the time! Chels: Hormones love.. Gary's house Shaun is very drunk. He is standing outside Gary's house throwing rocks at the window Shaun: OPEN UP GARY BABEEEEEEEEE Gary opens the door Gary: SHAUN! What do you want! Shaun: YOU HONEEY Gary: Come inside.. NOW Shaun stumbles across the road to Gary's house and goes inside Shall post the rest later xx
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06-01-2010, 05:19 PM
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LOL! :]
me and jords married pmsl :L
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06-01-2010, 05:51 PM
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06-01-2010, 05:49 PM
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06-01-2010, 05:50 PM
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06-01-2010, 05:20 PM
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Just reading this,you did me drunk very accurately
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06-01-2010, 05:53 PM
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lmfao
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