...I love how you’re developing the characters and I love the story so far, it’s an excellent read, Scarlett...
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...the end of Transference chapter was particularly gripping and brutal and I liked how sudden it all felt because it really gave the feel for the coldness of Rory’s character...I love the friendships and I love the villains and I love the dark and light storyline....the only thing that I didn’t like so much...?..is that I’ll have to wait for You to write the next chapter...thank you for an engaging read in a fascinating world.....
Good news! I just released a new chapter!
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Yeah, with Rory, I felt there was a need for an actual violent villian, all the others so far are schemers, whereas Rory isn't afraid to cut anyone down to get what he wants. He's gonna be very interesting as time goes by!
I'm going to slowly add more allies at time goes on, with Logan being a second year, he's sometimes going to be seperate from the main group, so he will come across more of his own year as time passes by