[dirtyvileHARRYuk]

Originally Posted by Jessica..

I posted this in the other thread too but this thread seems more relevant.

Joe really is a
lovely fellow,
on this forum
his threads are mellow.
He always has a
question to give,
you must have an answer
wherever you live.
Good luck Joe
with your next rhyme,
I'm sure to comment
every time.

what a loverly peace girl,
now the joe has competition hell.
a new lady on the block,
unlike joe, she dose rock.
fall of praise and a happy note,
jessica for you i am giving my vote.
its refreshing to see and a loverly gift,
when i see your positive words, my feelings lift.
keep it up girl, you will go far,
get out of my dreams and get into my car.
have a loverly day and i am sure we will chat in a poem style,
me and you miss must make each other smile.

[Jessica.]

Originally Posted by Joe444

what a loverly peace girl,
now the joe has competition hell.
a new lady on the block,
unlike joe, she dose rock.
fall of praise and a happy note,
jessica for you i am giving my vote.
its refreshing to see and a loverly gift,
when i see your positive words, my feelings lift.
keep it up girl, you will go far,
get out of my dreams and get into my car.
have a loverly day and i am sure we will chat in a poem style,
me and you miss must make each other smile.

Thank you very much
for being so kind,
I just type what pops
into my mind.
Almost every time
I look at your thread,
So many ideas
fly into my head.
I hadn't written poetry
in quite a long time,
but I was inspired
when I read your rhyme.

[Christmas Dynasnow]

Originally Posted by Jessica..

Thank you very much
for being so kind,
I just type what pops
into my mind.
Almost every time
I look at your thread,
So many ideas
fly into my head.
I hadn't written poetry
in quite a long time,
but I was inspired
when I read your rhyme.

this is not poetry

[Jessica.]

Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet

this is not poetry

Who are you to say what poetry is?
What is it?

[Christmas Dynasnow]

Originally Posted by Jessica..

Who are you to say what poetry is?
What is it?

A poem is an expression of a vision that is rendered in a form intelligible and pleasurable to others and so likely to arouse kindred emotions.

you just thought of words that rhyme

[sooty]

Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet

[I]
A poem is pleasurable to others

If that is the case, Jessica's is the poem, then.

Anyway what the heck****.

[Shasown]

Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet

this is not poetry

Why isn't it? There are many styles of poetry, presumably you dont find them all aesthetically pleasing.

[Christmas Dynasnow]

Originally Posted by Shasown

Why isn't it? There are many styles of poetry, presumably you dont find them all aesthetically pleasing.

yawn

[setanta]

Originally Posted by Shasown

Why isn't it? There are many styles of poetry, presumably you dont find them all aesthetically pleasing.

Ah, it's poetry in the most simple of forms though. Very crude stuff.