[Christmas Dynasnow]

Originally Posted by Jessica..

Thank you very much
for being so kind,
I just type what pops
into my mind.
Almost every time
I look at your thread,
So many ideas
fly into my head.
I hadn't written poetry
in quite a long time,
but I was inspired
when I read your rhyme.

this is not poetry

[Jessica.]

Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet

this is not poetry

Who are you to say what poetry is?
What is it?

[Christmas Dynasnow]

Originally Posted by Jessica..

Who are you to say what poetry is?
What is it?

A poem is an expression of a vision that is rendered in a form intelligible and pleasurable to others and so likely to arouse kindred emotions.

you just thought of words that rhyme

[sooty]

Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet

[I]
A poem is pleasurable to others

If that is the case, Jessica's is the poem, then.

Anyway what the heck****.

[Shasown]

Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet

this is not poetry

Why isn't it? There are many styles of poetry, presumably you dont find them all aesthetically pleasing.

[Christmas Dynasnow]

Originally Posted by Shasown

Why isn't it? There are many styles of poetry, presumably you dont find them all aesthetically pleasing.

yawn

[setanta]

Originally Posted by Shasown

Why isn't it? There are many styles of poetry, presumably you dont find them all aesthetically pleasing.

Ah, it's poetry in the most simple of forms though. Very crude stuff.